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Chapter 11 by holahola202 holahola202

How do you rate these lovely ladies?

Differently

You look down at the coed, who's now sitting on the floor naked and panting slightly. Ms. Henderson sits next to her in a similar condition, but both are looking up at you expectantly. You think for a moment, tapping a pen to your mouth, then say to the coed, "Sorry, I didn't catch your name. I'm John Doe by the way."

"Laura Fielding, nice to meet you," she says with a smile. "How'd I do?"

"Well, let me check you out a bit more and then I'll let you know. I got some of this over with beforehand with Ms. Harrison, but since we added you in for this inspection late I'll have to do it now."

"No problem," she responds, a bit nervously.

You lean down and stare at her tits, finally truly taking them in. They're especially pert and are just big enough to fit in your hands when you cup them. With a flick of your index finger you prove that they're also quite bouncy. Her erect but small pink nipples sway with her boobs, mesmerizing you for a moment.

After a few seconds, you look Laura's body over. She has an above-average bubble butt and her long, dark hair frames her rather average yet pretty face nicely. She's not exactly fit or thin, but you like how the fat she does have looks, and she's certainly not overweight.

"Hmm," you say softly. "One more thing. Spread your legs please."

"Alright," she responds, eyes down.

You watch as she spreads her legs, revealing her shaven pussy. With one swift motion you stoop down and plunge three fingers in.

"Fuck!" Laura screams under her breath, her body tensing in pain and pleasure as you continue thrusting into her raw cunt.

You watch her squirm, boobs jiggling enticingly, and see Ms. Harrison watching. Finally, you pull out and give Ms. Harrison a slap to the face with your wet hand.

"Hey!" she says on reaction. Quickly, she sits back, panicking, and says, "I'm sorry, it's okay, really it is."

You adopt an exasperated expression and say, "Could be, I suppose," then write on your clipboard. You take a moment filling out Ms. Henderson's sheet first and hand it to her. She looks it over, her eyes clouded with fear.


Name: Harrison Age: 32

Attractiveness: 2/10

Breasts: 2/10

Mouth: 2/10 - Oral Proficiency: __/10

Vagina: 1/10 - Vaginal Proficiency: 1/10

Ass: 5/10 - Anal Proficiency: 4/10

Handjob Proficiency: __/10

Vocalization: 1/10

Submissiveness: 10/10

Sexual Enjoyment: 2/10

________________: __/10

________________: __/10

Additional Notes: Anal Proficiency, Ass, Attractiveness, and Sexual Enjoyment all increase to a 9 when Harrison is fucked incredibly roughly by a dominant partner. Other forms of sex leave partner and Harrison dissatisfied, which is why Sexual Enjoyment is a 2. Submissive is a 10 since Harrison always gives in to others and typically means yes when she says no. She almost can't disagree. Inspector's Signature: John Doe


As Ms. Harrison reads her results, her face grows increasingly pale and agitated. You see her mouthing the words from the comments as she reads them and bunching up her fists. Finally, she explodes and says, "Seriously?! This is ridiculous!"

Taken aback for a split second, you reply, "Um, no, that's the truth. Maybe you can raise your scores, but honestly, I doubt it."

Laura looks over and reads through Harrison's numbers quickly, smiling smugly for a second. She realizes she's next though and trembles a little. Noticing this, you say, "Hey, it's okay Laura. Harrison's scores aren't indicative of your own. Yours will be better, to be perfectly frank."

Ms. Harrison stares at the ground, seemingly defeated, and whispers, "God, what do I do?"

"Well," you say, "you may be able to raise your scores with practice. And a certain type of person might be into you."

She smiles softly and says, "Yeah, I guess I'm close to the top in something at least. It is kind of exciting to know that I have such a great butt and am so hot when I'm having rough sex. I guess I'll have to get used to that."

You nod slowly, and say, "Yeah, most likely. I'm sorry. Again, though, you could improve." Turning your attention to Laura, you say, "Anyways, I still have to get to you. How old are you?"

"I'm twenty," she responds bashfully.

"Great, give me just a moment." You look at Laura's chart, thinking about what to do even as you see Ms. Harrison get dressed and start to leave to patrol the library. You could test out how the blanks work even more, or how the low and high scores will be interpreted.

What do you choose?

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