Something Stops You [End]

I'm so sorry to get hopes up, but on reviewing that last chapter...I FUCKING HATE IT! By having Fiona go full "little girl" in a situation where a bdsm scene and sex was quickly to follow I have completely ruined this thread for myself. As a writer it is good to test boundaries sometimes, but you always risk finding hard limits. A good learning experience I suppose. I know I'll piss a bunch of you off, but it can't be helped.

I wouldn't mind letting Fiona go "little girl" without the sex or kinky elements. And I definitely want to get her into a BDSM sub situation. But these have to be in separate threads. This just isn't the kink for me. I'll likely rewind a couple of chapters and try again once I'm feeling better about it again.

Once more, sorry guys.

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You listen to Fiona's mantra and notice her voice slowly fading. "I will obey my Daddy. I will...obey... my Daddy. I will..." She goes silent.

"Fiona?"

You hear a gasping word. "Wiggles!" Followed by a hard sob.

The safeword!? You hadn't even gotten started yet!

You turn back toward her to watch as she crumples into a heap on the floor. She covers her face with her hands and weeps. "I'm sorry! I'm so sorryyyyy!"

You rush to her side and take her into your arms.

She looks up with tear filled eyes and a look of soul wrenching pain. Tears streamed down her cheeks, smearing her pretty make up into dark lines. "Daddy would never hurt me. Daddy would never...never... Not his little girl. Never." She gasps. "He's not like us Jesse!"

You pull her in and cradle her head to your chest. You knew you were playing with fire having Fiona call you Daddy, and now she'd been burned by it. By having her regress in age you had brought to the surface long buried pain and made it all fresh again. She was a scared little girl that needed her brother now to comfort her and protect her, not take advantage of her.

You kiss her head and stroke her long hair. "I know, I know. I'm sorry Fiona."

Hugging your sister tight you whisper your love to her. She clings to you with all of her strength.

"I love you. I love you Fiona." You say with regret in your heart. "You're brother's here for you Fiona. I'm right here."

She weeps with a deep pain that you could only imagine as you hold her close. This was rough, this was ugly, but you knew this would be the beginning of healing your broken sister. You might not have all the answers but you knew one thing for certain, you would be with her, supporting her and loving her, every single step of the way.