Chapter 2
by Megturneystories
Which Woman Will Hear The Comments of Corruption?
Liz wallace, a teenager in a bad situation
It's Liz's 18th birthday, and she's terrified.
4 foot 11 with raven black hair halfway down her back, dark almond shaped eyes, small pert breasts that were almost the exact dividing line between A and B cups. A slim waist and juicy ass and thighs that seemed to make the bulk of her 100 pounds. Culminating in ankles so thin as to look almost cartoonish. Nothing about her appearance hinted at the trauma of her past.
She came to canada at the age of 1 with her mother, fleeing china after something happened to her father. No one was willing or able to tell her what exactly.
She often got into trouble growing up, doing strange things like suddenly pushing somthing off a table or veering off into places she had been told not to go.
She learned very young not to tell people about the intrusive thoughts, they always looked at her differently after.
When she was 13 she thought she and her mother finally got a lucky break. After moving from roach infested shithole to roach infested shithole every few years they finally got a decent house to live in.
It even came with a great guy. Frank, A lottery winner who had woo'd her mother, liz couldn't tell if the tickle in the back of her mind when he looked at her was warranted or just an illusion of the intrusive thoughts.
The older she got the stronger that feeling became, though she never really noticed any particular thing until about a month ago.
three important things happened last month, 1 she knew about, 2 she didn't.
First, her mother got sick. It came on suddenly, one day at the dinner table, she got so tired she nearly went face first into her plate.
She had been locked in her and franks bedroom ever since. Frank told Liz he had taken her to the hospital and they said she just needed lots of rest and quiet. Liz had only seen her mother twice since then, both times looking sickly and weak.
Second, and unbeknownst to Liz, Frank started his evil porn plot of drugging her food and putting speakers playing subliminal messages in her bed.
The secret third thing that neither of them knew was the effect of subliminal messages paired with her intrusive thought disorder.
Instead of just changing her personality it gave focus to her intrusive thoughts, made them stronger, harder to resist, focused them on a singular goal.
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Ok, meat and potatoes time, the gimmick to differentiate my branch is a posted end goal that will be impossible at the start. Im gonna make one to start but for this chapter i want suggestions for end goals.
The suggestion will require a 200-n roll. D100+ plus subliminal strength. So aim far. Every chapter, the end goal rolls again and the target subtracts by 1
Basically every chapter will roll her score against 200 minus the chapter number. Branches end when her subliminal score hits 0 and she escapes or the target is hit and she is forever trapped in the hypnotic suggestion.
Feel free to add your own chapters to this or make suggestions and ill try to make the chapters myself
The subliminal strength scale goes from 0 to 100 and will start at 50. Every successful roll increases it, crits increase by double. Every unsuccessful roll decreases it, crit failures decrease it by double.
What is the ultimate goal of her conditioning
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A story in which you the reader tries to corrupt naive women into becoming sexual deviants with your comments. A dice game between writer and reader.
Corrupt and control women as they struggle to fight off the voice in their head (you) that keeps driving them towards sluttier, sexier and degrading situations. Build up their corruption points to make biggger and badder corruptions possible.
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