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Chapter 3 by Krictic Krictic

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My Writing Style and my influences

Here I will describe what I think are the stories that inspired me to write (and keep writing) in this, some of it may be explicit to an experienced reader, you might notice, for instance, that in the chapter "She really wants those breads" i use some similar wording to a chapter on the fantastic Audrey´s Bet (link below) by AsianFam, but usually i try to find my own words to describe the scenes and because English isn´t my native language, i struggle sometimes to find the right words to describe the scenes i imagine in my head. Some may notice i have quite the descriptive style, I don´t usually go directly to the "good stuff", that´s because i try to write seriously, that is, i am thinking of a whole world here, not only of a scenario in which i can realize my fetishes (you may notice, for example, i have a liking to groping and shorts). Anyway, below is a list for each of the stories that directly influenced my writing and style in some way, all of them, of course, are CHYOA stories:

Audrey´s Bet by AsianFan - https://chyoa.com/story/Audrey%27s-Bet.15924

This one became a favorite of mine only recently and i must say that i love his writing style and how good are the sex/molesting scenes.

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I'm pretty sure most readers here know of this great story, this is a classic CHYOA story for good reason: excellent characterization, extended storylines and some great scenes (even non-sexual). Even though the world building is very minimal (as usual is in smut fiction), there is a massive quantity of content and it is being constantly updated for a long time.

Blowjob Universe by grossman - https://chyoa.com/story/Blowjob-Universe.5056

This is one of the best examples of unapologetically wish-fulfillment and self-inserting fictional on CHYOA. grossman´s almost obsessive fixation with blowjobs on this story renders some great sex scenes and even some funny situations (The scenes with Able Master are just hilarious).

Dark Angel by supman - https://chyoa.com/story/Dark-Angel.2052

Now this is a masterpiece of smut fanfiction, supman takes a relatively obscure series featuring the beautiful Jessica Alba (he is a fan of her, he has a story featuring the actress herself and now her characters), this is one of the classics of CHYOA and deservedly so, superman is a master of his craft, that is, writing excellent sex scenes and making people hard or wet and ready for some masturbation, i´ve lost count to how many times I´ve come into this story. This is more an aspiration than an inspiration, since im not nearly as good a smut writer as supman is.

Diesel City by sinnderman - https://chyoa.com/story/Diesel-City.11921

This is a self-described "Dieselpunk", that is, a story featuring a 40´s inspired world in which the Second World War never ended and it became a stalemate between the powers, this story writing and worldbuilding as at least as good as some of the best sci-fi/fantasy books, i could easily see this being published as an actual book and I think we are all fortunate that he decided to use his talents to write smut and not "respectable" fiction. This is a masterpiece of worldbuilding and its a main inspiration of mine on how to ground your story on a believable world. Good stuff.

Favorable Odds by Fiend21 - https://chyoa.com/story/Favorable-Odds.11761

Favorable Odds are an interesting case, he´s not particularly good at actual sex scenes, but he is a master of sexual suggestion and teasing, there are only a few writers that can make me cum through groping scenes alone and he is one of them. Also, his cuckhold storyline is the best example of teasing and suggestion (maybe im biased since this is one of my fetishes), he is able to make you believe rather than see the actual thing happen behind the scenes. Nevertheless, our styles differ, some of his sexual predilections are not to my taste (like specification and male submission) and I even tried to write some chapters on this story, but he judged our styles too different and our preferences too distinct to be seamlessly integrated into the story. One of my projects is actually to write a story using his premises tweaked to my preferences, i only hope that i may be able to write half as good groping scenes.

Normality by Murakami and MANY others - [https://chyoa.com/story/Normality.6104

Great example of collaborative writing, this is a bit different from the other stories i´ve mentioned above, since this isn´t by a single author and isn´t a single story, these are stories of many different kinds, both fantictional and original in the same premises of normalized sex and oh boy, those guys did some fantastic stories, i´d like to highlight some of those, I like, especially, the Highschool DxD, the Akame Ga Kill (this one has some interesting insertions from other fictional unverses), the To Love-Ru one (also with crossovers) and the more recent but also good Monster Musume one.

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