About me
- Gender
- -
- Birthday
- November 30, 1990
- Location
- United States of America
- Homepage
- -
Get to know me better
- When I'm not writing erotica I like to
-
write fiction that is more close to home.
- When I'm not reading erotica I like to read
-
fiction from books that require two hands to hold.
- My favorite word for "penis" is
-
Depends on the situation.
- My favorite word for "vagina" is
-
Depends on the situation.
- I write erotica because
-
it gets the cogs of my mind turning. It's a perfect tool for warming up.
- In conclusion, I am
-
here for feedback on ideas that I never intend to publish.
No recent activity
pablosantori has not done anything visible yet.
No stories yet
pablosantori has not published any stories.
No contributed stories yet
pablosantori has not added chapters to other authors' stories yet.
-
You make one more stop.
by pablosantori
Chapter 6 in The Fall of Athenapolis
With your trip nearly complete and feeling hungered, you stop at a tavern that is open at all hours of the night. The best time to scout a rich man's house was two or three hours before dawn, so you have a few more hours to wait before you could make your approach. You sit at a t...
10 years ago 356 Words 7 Likes 10,353 Views -
“I want you guys to lower me into the sewer.”
by pablosantori
Chapter 18 in In Debt To The Mafia!
See, it would have been too risky to allow anyone else to get a hold of the envelope that held her cash. “Hmm, all right!” they said in unison. The man with the cap and the man with the hair each took hold of Elyse's hands and slowly lowered her down to the sewer....
339 Words 2 Likes 994 Views -
...at the bottom of the sewer drain!
by pablosantori
Chapter 17 in In Debt To The Mafia!
“Oh no!” At the concrete floor of the sewer, beyond the grate, her envelope rested. She bent down, put her hands to her face and shook her head rapidly. “No, no, no, no, no! How could I be so stupid!” She spotted an adjacent manhole, but she couldn't even begi...
386 Words 1 Likes 1,090 Views -
$1500!
by pablosantori
Chapter 16 in In Debt To The Mafia!
“Omigod...” she whispered, counting each $100 bill in her head. “There's fifteen hundred dollars in here...” She assumed it must have been a mistake, but he just gave her a smile. She looked down momentarily before exhuming a slight gasp. Suddenly, she throttled her b...
290 Words 1 Likes 1,089 Views -
...Mr. Brady cums too soon!
by pablosantori
Chapter 15 in In Debt To The Mafia!
Elyse's senses trigger back to reality as a loud grunt reverberates behind her. “ARRRGHH!” screamed Mr. Brady. She turned her head just in time to see old Mr. Brady prematurely shooting his load. Little white smudges landed on her ankle and the car seat. His eyes were w...
423 Words 1 Likes 1,195 Views -
...engages in oral sex with Elyse.
by pablosantori
Chapter 14 in In Debt To The Mafia!
Between those soft thighs, a gentle patch invited Mr. Brady's eyes. If it were a diamond, it would glitter; if it were a circuit, it would spark. But, it was neither of these things, and yet... and yet it caught his eye. She kicked off her sandals as he finished removing he...
361 Words 2 Likes 1,146 Views -
“No more. Stop! Stop!”
by pablosantori
Chapter 13 in In Debt To The Mafia!
“No more. Stop! Stop!” He shouted, pushing her face away unkindly. She raised her neck, open-mouthed, and airing a punished look cried out, “What...why, Mr. Brady?” The old man breathed heavily, and averted his eyes from her gaze. “Not yet, not yet...I'm not ready t...
338 Words 2 Likes 1,164 Views -
“I want those beautiful lips around my cock.”
by pablosantori
Chapter 12 in In Debt To The Mafia!
“I want those beautiful lips around my cock.” Her eyes shot open wide. Never could she expect such candidness! And his eyes, each seemed to turn into magnets that pulled her in and her back both at once. And with those eyes instilled upon her, she immediately set t...
446 Words 3 Likes 1,232 Views -
A camera!
by pablosantori
Chapter 11 in In Debt To The Mafia!
The door thudded shut behind as Mr. Brady returned into Elyse's view with a camera in hand. It was an older non-digital camera with a limited roll of film. “I hope you don't mind me taking some pictures.” Elyse smiled nervously as he shot off a few snaps right away. It...
330 Words 1 Likes 1,246 Views -
"Go lie down on the backseat, Elyse."
by pablosantori
Chapter 10 in In Debt To The Mafia!
“Go lie down on the backseat, Elyse,” he said, petting her head. She shivered all over suddenly, as she knew what was coming. But, she easily complied. Sliding off Mr. Brady, she climbed over their seat and settled comfortably onto the backseat. She found herself twisted lik...
459 Words 1 Likes 1,281 Views -
"Yes. I'll take the money."
by pablosantori
Chapter 9 in In Debt To The Mafia!
“Yes. I'll take the money.” Elyse's heart beat quickly. She couldn't believe it. All her worries mere seconds before were about to vanish. The skies may change, but never does fortune so quickly! But, in spite of herself, she still had to make sure: “Are you absolutely sure,...
480 Words 1 Likes 1,293 Views -
"I still need a car!"
by pablosantori
Chapter 8 in In Debt To The Mafia!
“I still need a car!” “A car? My car??” It took him a moment to recover. “Yes, your car....the one you always drive around the block with.” “Come.” he said, taking Elyse's hand and leading her through a door that enters into the garage. Turning on the light, he poi...
447 Words 2 Likes 1,359 Views -
"A child."
by pablosantori
Chapter 7 in In Debt To The Mafia!
“I need...a child.” Elyse's eyes shot wide open and she immediately catapulted out of her seat. “What..??” “Please, let me explain everything to you. I know it's not something you've had need to entertain. But, look at me. I'm getting older for my age. I have no one. Ti...
374 Words 1 Likes 1,471 Views -
"Money."
by pablosantori
Chapter 6 in In Debt To The Mafia!
“Money.” Elyse made the choice to be straight to the point. “I came here for money. I'm in dire straits, Mr. Brady...I owe some people some money, and they're really mad at me.” She expected him to be mad at her, to throw her out of the house. But, to her surprise...
291 Words 1 Likes 1,473 Views -
"Right! I'll go to Mr. Brady's house!"
by pablosantori
Chapter 5 in In Debt To The Mafia!
“Right! I'll go to Mr. Brady's!” She turned toward Mr. Brady's house. With easy money to be made, in a short distance, and in a nicer neighborhood, it wasn't a difficult choice. Mr. Brady was outside watering the grass as she approached. “Hi Mr. Brady,” she said nearly...
343 Words 1 Likes 1,528 Views -
"This is what I owe you, Joey."
by pablosantori
Chapter 4 in In Debt To The Mafia!
"This is what I owe you, Joey." With a giggle, she turned her head, patted her butt, and walked on. And Joey was furious. He jumped up and down on the porch pointing his finger. "You snub me, Elyse! You always snub me. I told you! I knew you would. One day, you'll come to me....
526 Words 2 Likes 1,723 Views -
"What more do you expect, Joey? A picture to make it last longer? I mean, really!"
by pablosantori
Chapter 3 in In Debt To The Mafia!
"What more do you expect, Joey? A picture to make it last longer? I mean, really!" She was infuriated. What a waste of time and dignity. She bumped against him as she stepped off the porch. There were plenty of guys around town who would be willing to do a whole lot more in...
218 Words 2 Likes 1,834 Views -
"Actually Joey, I was coming to see you."
by pablosantori
Chapter 2 in In Debt To The Mafia!
"Actually, Joey, I was coming to see you." "What, why?" She even surprised herself she said it. Despite the nausea, Elyse knew right away what she needed, though: Some wheels. "I need your car, Joey." You see, Elyse didn't have a car. Usually, she would just t...
353 Words 0 Likes 2,682 Views -
Introduction
by pablosantori
Chapter 1 in In Debt To The Mafia!
Elyse Bouvier had just stepped out of the shower and was wrapped only in a pink towel when a pounding at the front door brought her to a halt in the living room. 'Well, I'm not going to answer the door like this!' The young brunette decided. She quickly made her way toward...
844 Words 2 Likes 5,189 Views -
Flee.
by pablosantori
Chapter 21 in The boys want to knock up Melissa
You rise up and run. You don't even look. Headlong into the dark night, your feet tread dangerous pathways. He's dead. He's dead. It barely seems real, but, you saw it happen! Out of breath, you stumble alongside the road. The distance, you realize, is far. Running, or walking,...
103 Words 8 Likes 4,965 Views
No chapters yet
pablosantori has not published any chapters.
No awards yet
pablosantori has not earned any awards.