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Chapter 2 by yundme yundme

Who are you, and in what situation does the prompt appear?

Stephanie - A scholar who sees the truth

Hey everyone. This branch takes a different interpretation of the concept. I hope you like.

This into might be a little long, but please stick with it. I think its going to be a lot of fun.

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The massive oaken doors groaned open with a **** elegance, their hinges exhaling centuries of dust and silence. Stephanie stepped forward, her boots echoing against the vast stone floor of the forgotten library. Her breath caught in her throat as the doors shut behind her with a slow, seismic boom.

Before her stretched a chamber so immense and labyrinthine, she momentarily questioned the reality of it. Towering shelves climbed impossibly high into shadowed arches overhead, their rows disappearing into dim, fogged distances. Every inch of the place seemed alive with age, with the scent of ancient parchment, candle wax, and mossy stone.

Stephanie adjusted the glasses perched on her nose, the lenses catching a shard of filtered sunlight pouring in through a stained-glass window above. The colored rays painted her pale skin in patterns of emerald and gold, matching the deep green of her linen dress. She looked every bit the scholar—young, determined, and slightly out of place amid the grandeur of forgotten knowledge.

Her fingers brushed the strap of her worn leather satchel, the weight of it comforting on her shoulder. Inside were notebooks filled with scribbles, translations, and increasingly frantic hypotheses about the cult she’d devoted the last two years to studying. A nameless sect, as far as the outside world was concerned. Rumors whispered of rites older than language, of worship not of gods, but of memory—of knowledge itself.

She walked forward, her steps reverent. Her guide—an old monk with few words and a face folded like parchment—had left her at the entrance, claiming this place could only be entered alone. That had been hours ago. She had crossed a rope bridge high over chasms lost to mist, wandered crumbling steps carved into cliffs, and passed through groves of whispering pines. All to reach this place. And now she was here.

Stephanie paused at the base of a spiral staircase wrought from blackened iron. It wound up like a serpent into one of the upper galleries. She felt something stir inside her—fear, yes, but also hunger. Intellectual hunger. She was close.

The cult—known only in hints and fragments—had vanished centuries ago. The last mention of them was found in the margins of a forbidden treatise on dream rituals, buried in the archives of a monastery in Nepal. Every lead since then had brought her deeper into the forgotten corners of the world.

And now, here she stood.

She climbed the staircase, each step groaning underfoot. As she rose, she caught glimpses of titles etched in dead languages, some carved into the spines of books that looked more like relics than reading material. Glyphs shimmered faintly in the gloom, reacting to her presence.

At the top, she found a reading chamber, its walls circular and lined with scrolls. In the center stood a lectern bearing a massive tome bound in green leather so old it was nearly black. A candle flickered to life as she approached, though she had touched nothing.

Stephanie’s heart pounded. This was it. She knew it, as surely as she knew her own name. Her fingers trembled as she reached out, brushing the cover.

It felt warm.

She opened it.

The ink inside moved.

The letters rearranged themselves as her eyes scanned the page, aligning into forms she could understand. Her lips parted in awe. This wasn’t translation—this was revelation.

"We are the Keepers of the Gate," the first line read. "We guard what must not be changed... and what cannot be forgotten."

Stephanie sank into the chair behind her, heart pounding like a war drum.

History had just opened its eyes—and looked back at her.

Stephanie turned the page of the tome slowly, reverently, afraid that too sudden a motion might startle whatever slumbered between its covers. The words continued to reorder themselves in real time, flowing like ink spilled in reverse, snapping into phrases in perfect English—phrases that bent her sense of reality further with each line.

The air in the room had grown dense, almost pressurized. The candlelight no longer flickered randomly but pulsed in tandem with her heartbeat, casting rhythmic shadows along the stone walls. Stephanie's fingers hovered above the parchment as if it might respond to touch.

Then it did.

The words on the next page formed more slowly this time, dragging themselves across the parchment with deliberate effort. They weren’t written in the tone of prophecy or history anymore. These felt... present. Immediate.

She narrowed her eyes.

"She reads this now," the book declared. "She sees. She becomes aware."

Stephanie blinked, taken aback. The sentence continued to expand.

"Aware of herself. Aware of her surroundings. Aware of... me."

She froze. Her breath hitched in her throat. "Me?" she whispered aloud.

Then something impossible happened. The page faded—just slightly, like looking through sheer fabric—and beyond the parchment, Stephanie saw movement. Not ink. Not symbols. A screen. A glowing screen.

She leaned forward, her eyes wide with disbelief. Through the veil of the page, she could see a dim room. A keyboard. Fingers.

A person.

She could see *me.*

Our eyes locked, though separated by dimensions of time and substance. Hers, green and inquisitive behind the reflection of her lenses, met mine through the page. The ancient book sat like a window between us.

"Wha..." she gasped, pushing back slightly. "Who... are you?"

Her voice echoed faintly through the chamber, tinged with disbelief and something more—fear, or wonder.

I hadn’t typed that line.

I stared at my laptop. The words were still appearing, but not under my command.

"What screen?" Stephanie said aloud. Her tone grew sharp. "What is this? Where are you?"

Her words appeared on my screen even before she finished saying them.

I fumbled for the keyboard, my heart pounding. I typed.

'Hello.'

The word manifested instantly in the book before her. She saw it. Her lips parted. Her hand covered her mouth.

"You can see me?" she whispered.

I typed again.

'Yes. I was... writing'

I felt embarrassed to say what I was writing, or the website it was intended for.

I didn't type that omission. What is going on? Is it reading my mind too?

She stood, the green tome clutched to her chest like a shield. "This isn't possible. This can't be."

But the library did not reject her fear. It held it, like everything else ancient and unexplainable, and waited.

The candlelight pulsed again. A draft rustled the pages, but she held them down. Her gaze didn’t leave the page.

"Are you real?" she asked.

I didn’t know what to say. But even as I hesitated, the words appeared anyway, as if the book had already read my thoughts.

'More than you know.'

Stephanie turned the page.

What she saw stole the breath from her lungs. The illustration was beautifully rendered in rich, inked lines—there was no mistaking it. The figure in the drawing wore her dress. Her glasses caught the light the same way. The same curls framed her face. The picture showed her standing beside one of the old wooden shelves, frozen mid-step.

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It was her. Drawn into the book.

And as she stared, she felt the shift.

Everything stopped.

The flickering of the candles froze in place, their flames still as painted brush strokes. The musty scent of old parchment hung in the air, unmoving. Even the ever-present creak of the library’s wood and stone silenced. Stephanie tried to move, but her body no longer obeyed. She stood exactly as the picture depicted: mid-step, mid-reach.

Only her mouth moved.

"What's going on? Why can't I move?" she asked, panic creeping into her voice.

I stared at my screen. The words were appearing faster than I could type them, as if the story was dragging me along for the ride.

"I... I don't know," I answered truthfully, typing the words as I spoke them aloud. "This was going to be the end of the chapter, but... you're still going."

Stephanie’s voice was sharp now. "What? What does that mean? What happens when you end the chapter? Do I end?"

I hesitated. "I don't know."

I tried to type more—to explain, to guide the story forward—but the screen rejected me. The text blinked, flickered, and erased itself the moment I struck the keys. It was as though the story had reached a boundary.

"Maybe..." I started.

"Maybe what?" she demanded.

I swallowed. This wasn’t just a story anymore.

"This world. Your world. It was created through a communal writing website," I explained. "The idea was that every chapter ends with a prompt, and readers suggest changes. Edits. Modifications."

Stephanie’s brow furrowed. She could still move her eyes, though her head remained locked in place. "I don't understand."

"The photo," I said quickly. "There’s a prompt under it. A list of descriptors."

Her gaze shifted downward, eyes straining to look at the bottom of the page she’d turned to. And there it was—faint text beneath the picture of her frozen form:

*Ginger. White, very curly hair. Small breasts. Tall. Smart. Glasses. Dress.*

She read the words aloud. "But... that’s me."

"That’s how you were described," I said. "And until someone changes the prompt—adds something, changes something—I don’t think the story can go on."

Stephanie’s breathing quickened, though her chest did not rise or fall.

"So I’m stuck."

"For now."

The library remained silent. A cathedral of stillness. Time, story, and motion suspended between chapters.

"You have to get them to write," she said. Her voice was calm now, but undercut by quiet desperation. "You have to get them to *change something.*"

I nodded slowly at my screen, even though she couldn’t see it.

"I will."

Then the screen went still.

And the chapter ended.

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