Change Log (What I've edited and how it has changed)

First Edit:

Purity and Canon Routes:

• Added in purity, canon, and corruption route switches on chapter 1.
• Edited chapter 1 to remove present tense writing. Made tense consistent.
• Added slight increases to detail to chapter 1. Added a new line of detail that will become important later.
• Edited chapter 2 to remove present tense writing. Making tense consistent.
• Added slight increase to detail in chapter 2.
• Edited chapter 3 to remove ""
• Added slight increase to detail in chapter 3.
• Edited chapter 4 to remove ""
• Added slight increase to detail in chapter 4.
• Edited chapter 5.1 removed present tense, added more detail.
• Chapter 5.2 was a mess, missing words, missing details, and rushed writing. Fixed, added a bunch of detail.
• Locked readers into canon and purity routes with changes in chapters 5.1 and 5.2 routes will remain similar for some time but will change more as the story progresses.
• 6.1 is now locked to canon route, added more detail, removed present tense.
• 6.2 is now locked to purity route, added lots more detail, removed present tense.
• Added minor detail to chapter 7 removed present tense.
• "" for chapter 8 as well.
• In chapter 9 Changed Alex's name to Allen. Allen was always intended to be Mark's friend from his class, but by using the same name as Alex from later in the story there is likely some confusion. Especially with the line "long time no see" and the actions of the two being so vastly different.
• Added more detail to chapter 9 removed present tense writing.
• Added more detail to chapter 10.1 changed present to past tense. Changed Deliah's introduction. I later decided she wasn't going to be some pseudo Harley Quinn rip off with an excitement for killing, but a more detailed character with real reasons for acting. Thus this needed to be changed.
• Added more detail to chapter 10.2 changed present to past tense, chapter now locks reader into the corruption route, deviating toward the darkest ending.
• Chapter 11. Light editing, tense adjustment.
• Chapter 12. Change of tense. Changed Deliah's Magical Girl name. I originally wrote Shadow Bless, forgot I had, and came up with the far more bad ass sounding Darkness Grace. Her name has now been retroactively changed to match the later chapters.
• Chapter 13. Minor edits removal of present tense, grammar fixes.
• Chapter 14.1 - React - Added to purity route, fixed grammar, added details, removed present tense.
• Chapter 14.2 - You can't think - Added to canon route, fixed grammar added details, and removed present tense.
• Chapter 15.1 - Yes "Chrystal Flash" - Added to canon route, fixed grammar and removed present tense.
• Chapter 15.2 - Yes: You Open Your Mouth (Bad End) - Minor grammar fixes. A few tense changes. Add more detail in future edit?
• Chapters 16.1 & 16.2 Transitionary chapters. Added to purity and canon routes respectively.
• Chapter 15.1 - Visiting The Pleasure Hole - Fixed the present tense writing to past tense. Fixed a few spelling and grammar mistakes. Deleted an old stump that was a plan to continue the story as plans have changed.
• Chapter 15.2 - Just Pass the Time - Edited the tense, fixed a few grammar issues, prepped for the continuation of the Purity route.
• Chapter 16.1 - Sure - Edited the tense, fixed grammar issues.
• Chapter 17.1 - Thursday: The Morning, **** - Edited, fixed tense.
• Chapter 18.1 - You give in... - Edited, added slight detail. Removed present tense.
• Chapter 18.2 - You run... - Added as a purity route option. Finished a previously started stub, copied the interaction with Deliah and edited it so that the tense and scene made more sense.
• Chapter 19.1 - Yes sir... - Edited, barely needed any work outside the final paragraph.
• Chapter 19.2 - Please... no... - A harder more **** planned imagining of the scene. Work in progress. I may abandon this chapter unless there's significant interest. I think the original chapter might just be better anyways.
• Chapter 20.1 - Save Alex, Fight Deliah. - Lots of tense changes. A few added lines of dialogue and detail to clarify the scene better.
• Chapter 21.1 - Thursday Evening: The Pleasure Hole - Lots of minor editing. Addition of dialogue and details.
• Chapter 22.1 - Thursday Night: Confronting Deliah - Lots of minor editing and tense changes. A few rearranged words to make the story read better. I think the chapter could still use some work but I'm not quite sure how so I'll come back to it again another time.
• Chapter 23.1 - Deliah - Minor edits addition of contents.

Corruption Route Branch:

• Chapter 11 - Back To School... - Edited minor issues and added a few missing letters etc. This chapter was already well written had little in terms of issues and explained things well so little editing was needed.
• Chapter 12 - Tuesday... Vulnerability - Edited and fixed a few issues, added detail.
• Chapter 13 - Wednesday - Wrote the chapter including editing details from Purity and Canon route chapter by the same name. Change the direction of events.