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Margo's POV: Drinking Ethan

by johm09

Chapter 39 in Breaking Mom

*I've pumped out thousands of words this week because I badly wanted to get to this scene. I think it's the hottest part so far and marks the real start of Mom's fall into depravity. I don't want to burn out though. Next chapter next week most likely. Comment below what you'd lik...

Mom watches you jerk off

by johm09

Chapter 38 in Breaking Mom

You don't waste any time getting to work. As soon as those words of resignation leave Mom's lips you grip your shaft tightly and begin to pump up and down over your cockhead with your clenched fist in earnest. At first Mom studiously maintains eye contact- shifting her gaze d...

You capitalise on Mom's guilt

by johm09

Chapter 37 in Breaking Mom

*Author's note: this chapter follows on from the chapter entitled 'Margo's POV: A Confession of Half-Truths'. This is to allow those who just want a true 2nd Person CHYOA following Ethan's POV to stay immersed. If you want the "full" story you can read both POVs. From now on that...

Margo's POV: A Confession of Half Truths

by johm09

Chapter 37 in Breaking Mom

*The first draft of this chapter was honestly just terrible. I originally wrote a much shorter, exposition-heavy chapter, giving a lot of detail about past events involving Ensemble that led to the current situation between Ethan and Margo. But it was super dull. The plan was the...

Mom learns your biggest secret

by johm09

Chapter 36 in Breaking Mom

*'The most remarkable observation is the apparent inconsistency of the treatment. After one series of sessions the patient was persuaded to implement changes that entirely upheaved their lifestyle, but would not for one second countenance supporting [REDACTED], a rival team to th...

You finally get some rest - but new challenges are brewing while you sleep

by johm09

Chapter 35 in Breaking Mom

*The poll is not yet finished, but it seems clear that the majority of readers want a mind control story where Margo remains aware of her own fall into depravity, but gives in anyway. This is in line with the original plans for this corruption route anyway, but I remained open to...

You strengthen your control over Mom

by johm09

Chapter 34 in Breaking Mom

*I am including a poll at the end for my own curiosity. It might affect how the next story arc plays out or even if it happens at all, but regardless things will continue to accelerate from where they are now...* ___ *...the patient [REDACTED] was able to reduce and finally...

You get Mom to return the favor

by johm09

Chapter 33 in Breaking Mom

*I've decided to include some excerpts from a certain Ensemble researcher's lab book in order to drip feed some more background lore. These shouldn't be interpreted as information available to Ethan or even to any particular character mentioned so far, but might give some insight...

You reap the benefits of influencing Mom

by johm09

Chapter 32 in Breaking Mom

*Note: I am conflicted on how corrupted Mom should be at the end of this chapter so I have put a poll to decide what happens next.* **Ethan's POV - then** Your gambit paid off. Just when you were sure that you had gone too far, that Mom was poised to break out of her vacant...

You get inside Mom's head

by johm09

Chapter 31 in Breaking Mom

**This chapter will be experimental in going back and forth from Ethan/your POV and Margo’s internal POV. Not sure if it will work but I can't think of a reasonable way to convey what is happening without showing both. That's also why it is so much longer than an average chapter...

You follow Mom downstairs

by johm09

Chapter 30 in Breaking Mom

To avoid looking like you are blatantly following Mom, you hang back on the landing until the creaking patter of her descending footsteps recedes before casually stepping downstairs. The last time you descended these steps it was with the resigned, slumping pace of a condemned ma...

You learn more about how mind control works

by johm09

Chapter 29 in Breaking Mom

*Note: I have decided to write separate optional "chapters" for things like scientific documents, notebooks or research records. The idea is to include them as extra background info or lore without distracting from the main story. Important info will be summarised and doled out i...

You put your plan into action

by johm09

Chapter 28 in Breaking Mom

Mom's webcam show continues for a while after that, until she abruptly gives up and jolts out of the recliner in obvious frustration. You cut the feed and quickly reset the spyware to its original setting, though you doubt that checking in on your writing progress is her priority...

You turn on Mom's webcam

by johm09

Chapter 27 in Breaking Mom

You are already pre-stroking yourself in hungry anticipation as the software covertly turns the webcam on. Maybe it's just the thrill of playing the voyeur, but somehow the prospect of watching Mom make herself feel good is more intoxicating than what you got up to with her at En...

You take the risk and spy on Mom's computer

by johm09

Chapter 26 in Breaking Mom

You decide that the benefits of seeing whatever Mom doesn't want you to see outweigh the risks of her catching you snooping. You hold your breath as you re-establish the link, listening out for an incredulous yell or furious exclamation from Mom. It doesn't come. The screen lo...

You take stock and learn more about Ensemble

by johm09

Chapter 25 in Breaking Mom

Back in your room, you start to run through a mental checklist you've built up throughout the day. You resist the temptation of *actually* writing it down, in case Mom stumbles across it. 1. *What happened to Mom?* Based on what both Melissa and Mom said, there exists some...

See Mom's POV in the shower

by johm09

Chapter 24 in Breaking Mom

The water practically scalds my skin as it hits my face. I arch my neck forwards and let it stream through my matted hair until its soaked. Normally I take my showers brief and cold after a workout, as it boosts immunity, increases circulation and improves the complexion. But ...

You compliment Mom's appearance

by johm09

Chapter 24 in Breaking Mom

Mom blithely strides past you towards the kitchen and begins to make herself a late lunch, apparently totally unaware of the impression her revealing attire is having on you. "Don't dawdle", she says imperiously while chopping up some celery with a large kitchen knife. Her sli...

Introduction

by johm09

Chapter 1 in Breaking Mom

You are awoken suddenly when a stray beam of sunlight slips through a crack on your tightly drawn curtains. Still fully dressed in yesterdays jean t shirt and hoodie combo, Your first thought as you jerk your head off of your pillow is how *utterly screwed* you are. You slept...

You clean her up as best you can

by johm09

Chapter 21 in Breaking Mom