Noir City

Noir City

The cold and Wet city

Chapter 1 by lilguy lilguy

Noir City. It is a place of broken dream and shattered hearts. It places where the hot lead fly and even hotter women roamed the streets. There a lot of dangerous women in this city. Recently star detective both private and professional were getting killed by various means. Some were ripped in two.

Sam Slade was tracking the killer down. He ran up the fire escape and followed the suspect, leaping off roof from roof. The cold was like a dagger to his heart and he had a sense of the dread. The rain roared into the night. He grabbed his gun and went to fire at the suspect. He caught the suspect in a dead end. It was a tall and busty woman with red hair. His heart was pounding with a of a locomotive. She was calm and collective and took a drag of a cigar

“It’s over sweet cakes” He said

The woman grabbed the gun. He shot her two shots

She kept coming. He fired one in the head. She dropped like a stone

“Sorry Dame. You been great…but the law are the law” He said

Then she got up wounds healed instantly. She grabbed his gun and lifted him up by his neck

“What are you?”

“Wouldn’t you like to know sugar? But not in a mood to talk. Think my mouth will be occupied on..Other things”

That night Sam was torn apart and never seen again.

The story takes place 5 days later. It is in 3rd person but you can have the character’s do first person narrations between the actions if you choose. The Characters

Lisa Bomb the Dame- She is a hot black haired girl with legs to die for. She is 6.4 with deep blue eyes and well tones body. Her breasts are huge and stick out like two torpedoes. She could suck the color of a lemon. Men like putty in her hands when she get them into bed
She speaks in a sultry voice and the girlfriend of head mafia boss Tony Corizine, also secretly sleeping with his brother Jack Two Bones. Little do they know she using her body to takes the crime boss down. Lisa Boom is not his real name. Her littler brother was a cop name Timmy. The crime Bossed killed him. She was secretly taking the head of the family down one by one. She was giving secret to his rivals, getting them to fight with one another, seducing them, and sometime getting her hands dirty. She keeps up a bimbo demons but she a genius and tough fighter. She also experts at weapons and poison

Bambi the Showgirl- She is a Showgirl/Hooker who works freelance. She is blond, busty and leggy. She stands 6.2 and has killer legs. Her eyes are blue. She bit of a bimbo but she is tough. Her father was a prize father. She has fists of steel and can crush a man with her legs. The men in her life are Jeff Slade (Sam’s Slade younger brother who a detective), He not as tough but pretty smart. She likes to keep and eye on him. Then there is her Bellboy Tony Ray, a young cute black guy who does errands. There some cops and gangster she has as client’s ass well. One is a high Politician name Corey Manfied who in his 40’s. He like the kinky stuff. Also had runs in with a detective name Lester

May Belle Girl Friday- She is a secretary to a detective in the city. The detective is a 5.8 Black guy name Lester who doesn’t like to use but might be the smartest detective around. May is a fire cracker, very sassy. She 6.2 with black hair and has been meaning to fuck Lester senseless. May has green eyes and loves to carry her Tommy gun around and loves adventure.

Kelly Wong Private Dick- She is a Detective in the city. She is 6.4 with green eyes and a big busty. She runs her own detective/massage place in the city. She becomes one of the top detectives. She has a high sex drive and always falling for a wrong guy or girl. She is sultry and dangerous woman who don’t mind using her body and martial arts skills to get her way.

who does the story follow?

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