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Chapter 21 by grimbous grimbous

What do you do now?

Rage and the visitor's big mistake.

You are beyond furious at having Abigail and Nuru humiliate you like they did, but you knew who really was to blame.

You pop up out of bed, pushing Nuru and Abigail to either side of you. You face off against the alien.

"You motherfucker! You knew what you were doing!" You dive towards it, wracking pain shoots through your entire body as the collar punishes you. "AHHHH!" You scream and your teeth chatter as all your muscles seize and spasm.

Nuru and Abigail are sat up in the bed. Abigail cries out. "What are you doing? What is happening?"

"You piece of shit, you got off on that. Floating around in here!" You point at your temple.

For it's part the creature just watches you. It's tendrils wavering. You still feel the buzz, it was loving this right now!

"If I could I would tear you apart you freak!" You spit. "You sick fucking bastard!"

SNAP! A tendril whips across your torso.

"Ah!" You shout, but you don't back down. You stand there fuming at it in impotent rage.

SNAP! Another lash, this time around your back. Each lash like being whipped with a live electrical wire. The pain was off the charts.

You swallow your scream, tears welling you stare it down. It is eating this up, but you didn't care. You just had to do something.

"AAARRRGGHH!" You try once more to grab it, to throttle it to within an inch of it's life. The pain of the collar stops you again, with a tendril soon to follow.

SNAP! Across the legs.

You whimper a bit despite yourself. You start to quiver in pain and rage. "You bastard..." You snarl.

"Back away! What are you doing!?" Cries Abigail.

SNAP! Pain flared up across your neck and shoulder. This one was different...something was different! You felt it...a thin ring around your neck was slightly numbed. The creature had hit your collar with it's buzzing tendril!

You stand there stunned a moment. You could just feel something was different now.

SNAP! The pain brings you back to the moment. It is still vibrating and waving it's tendrils and having a grand old time like nothing had changed.

"You son of a bitch!" You step forward, your big toe barely making contact with it's base. You touched it! You actually touched it! You feel a numbing tingle from the collar as it tried to activate, but it didn't stop you. The alien just kept carrying on, it hadn't noticed your contact with it. Neither had the girls.

Your logical mind steps up and tamps down your emotions. Get out of this situation, get out of it now, and hope that no one notices.

SNAP!

"Ah!" You tumble back and slump down on the bed.

The creature jumps and wavers. It has enjoyed your encore performance.

Then, it starts to become still. Like at the beginning. You feel the tingle in your mind slowly recede and before long it is gone altogether. The privacy screen fades away, disappointed zoo patrons on the other side of the glass.

The visitor's pass turns green and it rapidly exits the hut.

Nuru springs to her feet. "Wowee! We're getting a gift for sure! What a session! I don't think I've ever seen a visitor so happy." She turns to you. "I'm going to wait outside for the gifter, be back soon." She heads out the door.

You sit and bow your head, putting your face in your hands. Abigail crawls up and lays behind you, completely spent and exhausted. She strokes your back and kisses the side of your leg.

"...ohhhh...that was so much fun...it was amazing...was it good for you?" She whispers.

How do you react to Abigail after all that?

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