For a while, he simply existed in the space
He turned a page, the news of the world feeling distant and inconsequential compared to the stillness of the countryside. It was a rare moment of absolute peace. The rest of the house was empty; Jill’s parents and her sister had departed hours ago, eager
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The old grandfather clock in the hallway had a habit of skipping a beat every few minutes. It was a rhythmic glitch that usually went unnoticed, but in the heavy silence of a Tuesday morning, it sounded like a heart failing.
Martin sat in the lounge of the family cottage in North Wales, the broad sheets of the morning newspaper spread across his lap. The house smelled of old cedar and damp wool, a scent that always seemed to cling to the walls regardless of the season. Outside, the air was crisp, and the distant, jagged peaks of the Snowdonia range were draped in a thin veil of grey mist. He could hear the faint, rhythmic sound of Jill humming to herself on the patio, a sound that drifted through the open window and anchored him to the present.
He turned a page, the news of the world feeling distant and inconsequential compared to the stillness of the countryside. It was a rare moment of absolute peace. The rest of the house was empty; Jill’s parents and her sister had departed hours ago, eager to catch the Snowdon Mountain Railway. Martin had opted out, claiming a need for a quiet morning, though in truth, he just didn't feel like queuing in the cold. He had been to the summit enough times to know that the view rarely changed, but the solitude of the cottage was something he genuinely craved.
For a while, he simply existed in the space, listening to the clock skip its beat and the birds call to one another across the valley. He felt a strange, humming energy in the air, the kind of tension that precedes a summer storm. He shifted his position on the settee, the old springs creaking beneath him, and wondered if the others were already halfway up the mountain.
The humming from the patio stopped abruptly, replaced by the soft, rhythmic scuff of sandals on the stone threshold. Martin didn’t look up immediately, though he could feel the shift in the room’s energy. The silence that followed was expectant, almost heavy, as if the house itself were holding its breath. When the sound of footsteps finally moved across the rug, they were light and deliberate, carrying with them the scent of sun-warmed skin and something faintly floral.
Jill entered the room not with a word, but with a presence that seemed to push the morning stillness aside. She was wearing a strappy white T-shirt that clung to her frame and a short denim skirt that barely brushed her thighs. As she approached the settee, the sunlight from the window caught the golden hue of her skin, highlighting the effortless, youthful glow she always carried. She didn't stop at the edge of the furniture; instead, she pivoted and sat directly on his lap, her weight a sudden, warm reality against his thighs.
The transition from the quietude of the newsprint to the intensity of her proximity was jarring in the most electric way possible. She didn't hesitate, leaning in to kiss him a deep, demanding press of lips that tasted of summer and hidden intent. Her tongue forced its way past his teeth, claiming his mouth with a confidence that caught him off guard. Martin felt a surge of adrenaline snap through his chest, erasing any lingering thoughts of the mountains or the weather. He dropped the newspaper, the pages fluttering to the floor like fallen leaves, and wrapped his arms around her, pulling her closer until there was no air left between them.
As they kissed, Martin’s hand wandered, instinctively seeking the warmth beneath the thin fabric of her T-shirt. He found the curve of her breast, his palm cupping her firmly, while his thumb and forefinger found the peak. The reaction was instantaneous. A low, guttural groan vibrated in Jill’s throat, a sound of pure surrender that echoed in the small room. He felt her body shudder against him, a sudden wave of pleasure crashing through her that left her breathless and clinging to his shoulders for support.
The kiss broke, but they stayed locked in that breathless space, foreheads touching, their lungs fighting for air in the sudden heat of the lounge. Jill’s eyes were dark, focused entirely on him, and her voice was a desperate, airy whisper. "Oh yes! Please fuck me. I want you to take my cherry. Pleeease!"
The confession sent a jolt through Martin, a mixture of protectiveness and raw desire. He didn't answer with words; instead, he let his hand slide down from her breast, tracing the line of her ribs until he reached the hem of that short denim skirt. He lifted the fabric, his fingers grazing the soft skin of her thigh before finding the lace of her panties. They were already soaked, the silk clinging to her. With a slow, deliberate movement, he helped her wriggle out of them, the garment discarded somewhere on the rug, leaving her exposed and trembling against him.
When his finger finally slipped between her labia, the wetness was an invitation. He found her clit, circling it with a rhythmic pressure that made her arch her back, her fingers digging into his shoulders. She began to cry out, the sounds small and frantic, as she succumbed to a series of rapid, pulsing orgasms that left her shaking.
"Are you sure?" he whispered, his voice gravelly. "Are you absolutely sure you want this?"
"Yes, more than anything," she breathed, her eyes searching his with an intensity that bordered on hunger. She didn't just want it; she was demanding it, her body humming with a tension that had been building for years.
Martin didn't waste another second. He stripped off his clothes with a hurried efficiency, the cool air of the lounge hitting his skin for only a moment before he moved back over her. He pushed her gently back onto the settee, the old cushions dipping beneath her weight. He positioned himself between her thighs, his chest brushing against hers, the scent of her skin sweet, warm, and expectant filling his senses.
He placed the head of his cock at her entrance, feeling the slick heat of her readiness. He didn't rush. He paused there, letting her feel the size and the pressure of him, wanting her to be fully aware of the moment the line was crossed. He leaned down to kiss her, a slow, deep exchange that anchored them both, while his hand moved to cup her breast, his thumb grazing the nipple to keep her on the edge of delirium.
Then, with a steady, firm thrust, he pushed forward. He felt the initial resistance, a sharp, sudden tension as he broke through, entering the promised land of her virginity. Jill let out a sharp, sudden gasp not of pain, but of overwhelming discovery. Her eyes widened for a heartbeat before fluttering shut, and a long, low moan escaped her lips as she felt him fill her completely.
For a few moments, they simply remained there, locked in a breathless stalemate. Martin kept his weight braced on his forearms, his chest heaving against hers, allowing her body to adjust to the sudden, profound fullness of him. He could feel the rhythmic pulsing of her internal muscles, a tentative exploration of the intruder now occupying her space. Jill’s breath came in short, ragged hitches, her fingers clutching the fabric of the settee as she processed the sensation.
"You okay?" he whispered, his voice barely a ghost of a sound.
She didn't answer with words. Instead, she arched her hips upward, a subconscious invitation to move. The movement was enough to break the spell of stillness. Martin began to withdraw, slowly at first, feeling the slick grip of her walls hugging him all the way back, before sliding forward again. The friction was exquisite, a slow-burn heat that radiated from the point of contact through the entirety of his lower body.
As the rhythm established itself, the lounge seemed to shrink around them, the rest of the world the mountains, the family, the skipping clock vanishing entirely. Jill began to move with him, her legs wrapping tightly around his waist to draw him deeper. Her moans shifted from tentative gasps to a steady, melodic cadence that urged him to pick up the pace. He shifted his grip, his hands sliding down to her hips to anchor her, driving into her with a deliberate, crushing intensity.
The friction built into a searing heat, a frantic energy that threatened to snap the old settee beneath them. Martin felt the world narrow down to the point of contact, the rhythmic slap of skin on skin echoing in the sudden vacuum of the room. Jill was no longer just receiving him; she was actively pulling him in, her hips snapping upward to meet every thrust with a desperate, hungry precision. Her nails dug into the skin of his lower back, anchoring her to the storm of sensation that was currently tearing through her.
"Don't stop," she whimpered, her voice broken and breathless, "please, Martin, don't stop."
The request acted like a catalyst. He shifted his weight, pinning her more firmly against the cushions and increasing the angle of his entry. Every thrust felt deeper, more invasive in the best possible way, hitting a spot that made Jill’s entire body stiffen and vibrate. She let out a long, high-pitched keen that vibrated against his neck, her head tossing back and forth on the floral fabric of the couch. He could feel her internal muscles clamping down on him in a series of rhythmic, involuntary spasms the first waves of a massive release.
The tension in Martin's own body reached a breaking point. He felt the familiar, electric surge begin at the base of his spine, rushing downward with an unstoppable momentum. He gripped her hips tighter, his knuckles white, and delivered three final, powerful thrusts that buried him deep within her. As he reached the peak, he felt his muscles contract violently, firing three long, hot sprays of sperm deep into the promised land.
The silence that rushed back into the room was almost as heavy as the tension had been. For several long minutes, the only sound was the synchronized, ragged gasping of two people trying to remember how to breathe. Martin remained draped over Jill, his weight a comforting anchor, as the adrenaline slowly ebbed away, leaving a warm, humming exhaustion in its wake.
Jill’s fingers, which had been clenched tight in his shoulders, slowly relaxed, her touch turning into a soft, rhythmic stroking of his back. She let out a long, shuddering sigh a sound of absolute contentment and pressed her forehead against his collarbone. The air in the lounge had grown heavy and humid, the scent of their shared exertion mingling with the old cedar of the cottage.
"I think," Jill whispered, her voice raspy and small, "that I might have underestimated how much I wanted that."
Martin chuckled, the sound vibrating through his chest and into hers. He shifted his weight, rolling slightly to the side to avoid crushing her, though he didn't move far. He looked down at her; her cheeks were flushed a deep rose, her eyes hooded and glazed with a lingering sense of euphoria. There was something transformative about the look on her face, a sudden shift from the playful, flirtatious girl he had known to a woman who had just discovered a hidden geography of her own pleasure.
The spell of the afternoon lingered long after they had finally disentangled themselves. Jill disappeared into the bathroom to shower, the sound of the rushing water echoing through the quiet house. Martin remained in the lounge for a few minutes, staring at the ceiling and listening to the grandfather clock. The skipping beat didn't seem like a glitch anymore; it felt like the heartbeat of a secret they were now keeping from the rest of the world.
He stood up and looked down at the settee. The floral fabric was dampened, a dark, spreading stain marking the spot where they had collided. He felt a strange sense of ownership over that mark. With a focused intensity, he spent the next ten minutes scrubbing at the upholstery with a damp cloth and a bit of soap, working the fibers back into place. It was a domestic task, almost mundane, but he performed it with the care of a man hiding evidence of a crime or a miracle.
When Jill returned, she was wrapped in a fluffy white dressing gown that made her look smaller, softer. Her hair was damp and clung to her neck, and her eyes were bright, shimmering with a playful kind of mischief. She didn't say a word as she walked toward him; she simply stepped into his space and leaned her head against his chest, listening to the rapid thrum of his heart.
"Lunch is probably a good idea," she murmured, though she made no move to head toward the kitchen.
They didn’t make it to the kitchen for another twenty minutes. The air in the lounge was thick, the kind of heat that makes skin feel tacky and hearts race for no reason. Jill’s hand slid up under his shirt, her fingertips tracing the line of his ribs with a slow, agonizing precision. Martin felt his resolve crumbling; the hunger hadn't been satisfied by the first encounter, but rather ignited into something more demanding. He pressed her back against the wall, the old wallpaper peeling slightly at the edges, and kissed her with a desperation that left them both lightheaded.
The meal they eventually prepared simple ham sandwiches and a pot of tea tasted like an afterthought. They sat in the kitchen, the sunlight streaming through the window in long, dusty shafts, talking in low voices about everything and nothing. The conversation was a facade, a thin veil draped over the electric current still running between them. Every time their knees brushed under the table, or their eyes met for a second too long, the memory of the settee surged back.
"They'll be back soon," Jill noted, though she didn't sound particularly concerned. She was leaning back in her chair, her expression one of dreamy contentment.
"Probably an hour," Martin replied, glancing at the clock. The skip in the rhythm was still there, a subtle reminder of the secret they now shared. He looked at her really looked at her and realized that the dynamic of their relationship had shifted irrevocably. The innocence of their previous years had been stripped away, replaced by a heavy, pulsing awareness of one another.
The rest of that afternoon was a study in tension and timing. Every time a car door slammed in the distance or a neighbor’s dog barked, they jumped, a shared jolt of electricity snapping between them. They spent the hour in a state of suspended animation, pretending to tidy the kitchen while their eyes constantly drifted back to each other, calculating exactly how much time they had left before the house filled with the noise of the returning party.
"I forgot my book in the bedroom," Jill said, her voice trailing off into a suggestive lilt. She didn't wait for an answer before slipping away from the kitchen table.
Martin followed her, his footsteps heavy on the floorboards. The bedroom was small, smelling of lavender and old linens, with a single window that let in a sliver of the afternoon sun. As soon as the door clicked shut, the pretense vanished. He caught her by the waist, pulling her back against him, and the suddenness of the contact drew a sharp, delighted gasp from her lips. There was a frantic energy to this second encounter, a lack of the slow build-up they'd had in the lounge. It was a race against the clock, a desperate need to reclaim the intimacy they had just discovered.
They didn't make it to the bed. He pressed her against the wardrobe door, the heavy oak thudding under their combined weight. Jill’s legs wrapped around his waist with a strength that surprised him, her fingers tangling in his hair as she pulled his head down to hers. The friction of their clothes still partially dressed, hurried and clumsy only added to the urgency. When he finally slid inside her, it felt like a homecoming, a lock clicking into place. They moved together in a fast, rhythmic blur, the sound of their breathing the only thing competing with the distant sound of a car pulling into the gravel driveway.
The sound of the car door slamming was like a gunshot, shattering the bubble of the bedroom. They froze, mid-stroke, their hearts hammering in a frantic, synchronized rhythm. For a second, neither of them moved, suspended in a state of sheer panic and lingering pleasure.
"Oh god," Jill whispered, her eyes wide.
The suddenness of the intrusion forced a hurried, clumsy disentanglement. Martin scrambled to pull up his trousers, nearly tripping over his own feet in his haste, while Jill frantically smoothed her skirt and adjusted her T-shirt. There was no time for the slow, lingering afterglow they had experienced in the lounge; now, there was only the desperate need to look unremarkable. Martin shot a quick glance at the wardrobe it had shifted an inch from the wall and shoved it back into place with a dull thud just as the front door creaked open.
"We're home!" her mother’s voice rang out, cheerful and echoing through the hallway. "You wouldn't believe the queue for the train, absolutely mental!"
Martin stepped out of the bedroom and into the hallway just as the family began to filter in, their faces flushed with the crisp mountain air and the excitement of the journey. He felt a strange, shimmering duality; to his mother-in-law, he was simply the quiet son-in-law who had spent the day reading the papers, but beneath his shirt, his skin was still humming from the heat of Jill’s body.
"You look a bit peaked, Martin," her father remarked, clapping him on the shoulder with a heavy hand. "Too much time spent indoors. You need some fresh air in those lungs."
Martin forced a smile, his mind racing. He caught a glimpse of Jill as she emerged from the room a few seconds behind him. She was playing the part of the dutiful daughter perfectly, though there was a predatory glint in her eyes a secret knowledge that made her smile seem slightly more luminous than usual. As she passed him to head toward the kitchen, her hand brushed his hip, a fleeting, electric touch that served as a silent promise.
The evening unfolded with a domesticity that felt almost surreal. They sat around the dining table, the air thick with the smell of roasting chicken and the chatter of the day's events. The sister described the ascent of Snowdon with a vividness that made the mountain feel present in the room, while the parents argued over who had spotted a mountain goat first. All the while, Martin felt like an interloper in his own life, a man harboring a clandestine fire in the middle of a family gathering.
The tension didn't dissipate with the meal; it only shifted, becoming a low-frequency hum that Martin felt in the soles of his feet. Every time Jill reached for the salt or leaned over to clear a plate, the sudden proximity of her the faint scent of her soap and the memory of her skin sent a jolt through him. He found himself staring at the way her T-shirt clung to her shoulder, wondering if she was thinking about the wardrobe door and the frantic, interrupted rhythm of their afternoon.
As the coffee was poured, the conversation drifted toward the weekend's plans. Jill’s father was insisting on a long hike through the valley, something that would inevitably keep the group outdoors and away from the cottage for hours. Martin nodded along, pretending to be interested in the trail maps spread across the table, while he caught Jill’s gaze. She wasn't looking at the maps. She was looking at him, her lips curved in a small, knowing smile that suggested she was already planning the gaps in the schedule.
"I'll help with the washing up," Jill announced, sliding out of her chair with a grace that felt deliberate.
"I'll give you a hand," Martin added, perhaps a bit too quickly.
The kitchen was a sanctuary of steam and soap suds, the noise of the living room fading into a muffled hum of familial contentment. For several minutes, they worked in a choreographed silence, the only sound the clinking of cutlery against ceramic. Jill stood at the sink, her back to him, the hem of her denim skirt riding up just enough to expose the curve of her thigh. Martin felt the familiar, heavy pull in his gut, a magnetic attraction that had become the dominant force of his existence since that first afternoon on the settee.
He stepped in close, ostensibly to reach for a drying towel, but instead let his chest press against her shoulder. The contact was electric, a sudden spark in the domestic quiet. Jill didn't pull away; instead, she leaned back into him, a soft sigh escaping her lips. The facade of the "helpful son-in-law" vanished, replaced by the raw, hungry familiarity they had cultivated in the shadows of the cottage.
"They're still arguing about the trail map," she whispered, her voice dropping an octave, vibrating with a playful kind of mischief.
Martin didn't answer. He reached around her, his hands finding the swell of her hips and pulling her firmly against him. He could feel the heat of her skin through the thin fabric of her clothes. He turned her around in the narrow space between the counter and the sink, his eyes searching hers. The look in her eyes was a mirror of his own a desperate, starving need for the touch they had to keep secret.
He didn't wait for her to speak. Martin leaned in, capturing her lips in a kiss that tasted of salt and urgency, his hands sliding up from her hips to bunch the fabric of her white T-shirt. Jill responded with a fervent energy, her arms winding around his neck to pull him closer, her body molding itself against his with a desperate precision. The clatter of a plate being set down in the other room sent a momentary shiver of panic through them, but the risk only served to heighten the electricity.
With a low groan, Martin lifted her, her legs instinctively locking around his waist. He backed her into the corner of the kitchen, the cold tiles pressing against her skin as he hoisted her up onto the granite countertop. The sudden elevation put them eye-to-eye, their breaths mingling in the small, humid space. Jill’s fingers scrambled at the buttons of his shirt, her movements frantic and clumsy in her haste to feel his skin.
"Quickly," she breathed, her voice a jagged whisper. "Before they realize we're not doing the dishes."
Martin didn't need further encouragement. He slid her denim skirt down her legs in one fluid motion, the fabric pooling on the floor. He found her already drenched, her readiness a testament to the tension that had been simmering since the afternoon. As he entered her, the sensation was overwhelming a tight, searing heat that seemed to consume everything else in the room. He groaned into the crook of her neck, his movements rhythmic and powerful, driven by the thrill of potential discovery.
The sound of a chair scraping against the hardwood in the lounge acted like a starter pistol. Martin froze, his chest heaving against hers, the sudden silence of the kitchen amplifying the frantic drumming of their hearts. Jill’s eyes were wide, locked onto his, her breath hitching in a silent plea for stillness. For several agonizing seconds, they remained suspended in that precarious balance, the granite of the counter cold beneath her thighs while the heat of their union burned white-hot.
"Martin? Jill?" her father’s voice called out, sounding closer than he had been a moment ago. "Have you lot finished in there, or are you planning a feast of plates?"
The tension snapped. Martin didn't withdraw immediately; instead, he delivered one last, deep, shuddering thrust that drew a stifled moan from Jill’s throat a sound she managed to disguise as a cough. He slid out of her with a wet, visceral sound that seemed loud enough to wake the dead. In a blur of panicked coordination, he helped her slide off the counter, her denim skirt snapping back into place with a frantic tug of fabric.
Martin scrambled to fasten his trousers, his fingers fumbling with the button in a way they never had during the actual act. He caught his breath, wiped a stray bead of sweat from his forehead with the back of his hand, and glanced at Jill. She was breathless, her cheeks flushed a deep crimson, her hair slightly disheveled. She looked like she had just run a marathon in a very small space.
“Coming!” Jill called out, her voice an octave higher than usual. She shot Martin a look of pure, adrenaline-fueled mischief, a silent acknowledgment of their narrow escape. She smoothed the front of her T-shirt with a quick, decisive slap of her palms and stepped toward the doorway, leaving Martin to gather the remnants of his composure.
He followed her out into the lounge, his legs feeling strangely heavy, as if the gravity in the room had shifted. The family was gathered around the coffee table, the map of the valley spread out like a battle plan. Her father was pointing emphatically at a ridge line, while the rest of them listened with varying degrees of interest. As Martin stepped back into the circle, he felt a surge of illicit triumph. He was standing right there, in the center of the family unit, and yet he was carrying a secret that felt like a physical weight in his chest.
“There you are,” her father said, glancing up. “You’ve got a far-away look about you, lad. Still thinking about those newspapers?”
“Just zoning out, sir,” Martin replied, his voice returning to its normal, steady register. He caught Jill’s eye as she sat back down. She was leaning back, her posture relaxed, but her gaze was hungry, tracing the line of his jaw with a possessive intensity that made his skin prickle.
The next few days at the cottage became a choreographed game of stealth. The air in the house had changed; it was no longer just the scent of old wood and damp Welsh stone, but a thick, electric current that snapped whenever Martin and Jill were in the same room. They learned the geography of the household the exact creak of the third step in the hallway, the duration of the tea kettle's whistle, and the predictable patterns of the parents' conversations.
The "valley hike" her father had insisted upon became their greatest tactical advantage. While the rest of the family spent hours debating the merits of various hiking boots and studying topographic maps, Martin and Jill developed a silent language of glances. A tilt of the head meant *they’re distracted*; a lingering look at the clock meant *we have ten minutes*.
One Tuesday afternoon, the house fell into a sudden, heavy silence. The parents had ventured out to the local village to stock up on supplies and perhaps a few bottles of wine, leaving Martin and Jill alone for a window of barely an hour. The tension that had been building since that first encounter on the settee finally snapped. There was no slow build-up this time, no hesitant questioning.
Jill didn't even make it to the lounge. As soon as the sound of the car fading down the gravel drive confirmed their solitude, she turned on him in the narrow hallway. She didn't say a word, simply grabbed the front of his shirt and pulled him toward her with a ferocity that nearly knocked him off balance. He responded by hoisting her up, her back slamming against the floral wallpaper with a dull thud.
The urgency of the moment stripped away any pretense of patience. Martin’s mouth found hers in a kiss that was less about affection and more about a desperate, starving need. He could feel the frantic beat of her heart against his own chest, a mirrored rhythm that drove him to pull her even tighter. His hands moved with a focused intent, sliding beneath her T-shirt to find the warm, velvet skin of her back, while Jill’s fingers dug into his shoulders, her nails scratching through the fabric of his shirt as if she were trying to merge her body with his.
There was a raw, primal quality to their movements in the narrow hallway. Every breath was a jagged gasp, every touch a spark. He shifted his weight, lifting her higher until her back was pressed flat against the wall and her legs were locked firmly around his waist. The friction of their clothes became an intolerable barrier. In a flurry of frantic motions, Jill managed to yank her shirt over her head, tossing it blindly onto the floor. Martin followed suit, the air of the cottage feeling suddenly cool against his skin, though the heat emanating from Jill was enough to keep him burning.
He buried his face in the crook of her neck, his teeth grazing her skin, triggering a high, sharp moan that echoed through the quiet house. The risk of the parents returning early was a distant thought, eclipsed by the immediate, crushing demand of their desire. He shifted her, his hands finding the hem of her skirt and sliding it up and away. He didn't wait for her to be fully undressed; the sheer necessity of their connection overrode the need for formality.
As he entered her, the sensation was an electric shock, a sudden, violent alignment of two forces that had been pulling at each other for years. Jill let out a strangled cry, her head snapping back against the wallpaper, her eyes fluttering shut in a moment of pure, unadulterated sensation. They moved together with a frantic, uncoordinated energy, the sound of their breathing filling the corridor. Martin drove into her with a rhythmic intensity that shook the very walls they were leaned against, the physical effort leaving them both breathless and dizzy.
The intensity reached a breaking point where the fear of being caught merged with the pleasure of the act, creating a volatile cocktail of adrenaline. Martin gripped her thighs, his knuckles white, as he drove himself into her with a final, desperate cadence. Jill’s fingers clamped onto his shoulders, her nails digging in, as she let out a muffled, shuddering scream against his neck. He felt his own release trigger a violent, pulsing surge that left him blind for a second and he fired deep inside her, both of them collapsing into a heavy, trembling stillness.
For several minutes, the only sound in the hallway was the ragged, synchronized gasping of their lungs. Martin kept his forehead pressed against hers, their skin slick with sweat, the cool air of the corridor finally beginning to penetrate the heat of their bodies. They stayed locked together, a tangled mess of limbs and heavy breathing, savoring the sudden, profound silence that followed the storm.
"We're going to get caught one of these days," Jill whispered, her voice a raspy, exhausted shadow of itself. She didn't move to let him go; instead, she squeezed him tighter, a small, triumphant laugh bubbling up in her throat.
"Probably," Martin breathed, his heart still hammering against his ribs like a trapped bird.
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