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Chapter 16
Does Gary give you Ellie?
What the fuck did I just do!
Gary was on the ground making an odd sound.
"Gary, are you okay man?" You walk up to the still kneeling man and realize he is sobbing.
"What the fuck did I just do! Ellie! Are you okay Ellie? Ellie, can you hear me?" You were starting to get worried. So far he hadn't given any accidental commands, but you were sure it wasn't going to be long.
"Gary, man, I am sorry. It is just a prank. Here, hand me that card and I will help you up." Would the curse count that as a trade? Hopefully. "Now Maisie, take these cards to the other room and then Ellie and Holly, come back out perfectly normal." It was an awkward way to phrase the order, but you had a fine line to tread here. Gary handed you the card and you gave it to Maisie who popped around the corner. A second later she walked back in the room with her sister and cousin in tow.
"Gary, I am sorry. We were just trying to play a trick on you, make you think we turned into those cards. I didn't mean to scare you." Ellie seems genuinely concerned, but Gary was regaining his composure.
"Its, its ok. You couldn't have known it would freak me out so much. Sorry for being such a wimp." Gary wiped his nose with his sleeve. "Thanks for the fun night. I am going to head home now." Gary picked up his jacket and left, leaving you all stunned.
"Well that wasn't the reaction I was expecting. Did it work, are you now my controller?" Ellie turned to you.
"Lets test it. Ellie, you are now a ginger." A similar transformation happened with her as it did her sister. Her hair turned red, and her skin turned pale and freckled to compliment it. "Looks like it worked. Ellie you."
"Stop. I like this look, I am going to stay this way, if it is ok with you." She gave you a challenging look.
"Hey, it is your body, just give me a call if you ever want to change back. Do you want any of the improvements I gave your cousins?" Ellie looked at Maisie and her eye's briefly flicked down to her cousins enhanced bust. "Not that one, the other ones." Maisie and Holly had filled their cousins in on more of their changes on the way to the bar.
"Yeah, give me the food processing one and the full nights sleep one. Can you also make it so I can push myself twice as hard and long without getting tired?" Ellie looks between you and her cousins. "And make my boobs bigger."
"Sounds good to me. Ellie, your body now breaks down food and water perfectly, getting every atom of nutrient out. Any excess waste is expelled through your breath, but will be undetectable. You get the effect of 8 hours of sleep after closing your eyes for 30 seconds, your stamina is doubled, and your breasts are two sizes larger." You watch as her shirt stretches across her chest. She closes her eyes for a few moments and when she opens them she has a huge smile on her face.
"Damn. That is amazing. I am going to be able to outrun any of the losers in my running club." She was pulling her shirt down to check herself out.
"I could just command you to be physically fit, you know." You point out.
"True, but I like the meditative feeling I get from working out. Plus, I will have a lot more time now that I don't have to sleep." You exchanged numbers with Ellie and heard Melanie speak up tiredly.
"I am going to head home. Some of us still have to sleep." She yawned.
"Yeah, I should probably head home too." You added, you had only been awake since noon, but you were still pretty tired from all the drinking and excitement.
"Melanie, you can stay here if you want." Ellie called out to her sister. "You can have my bed." Melanie nodded gratefully and trudged to the bedroom, wishing her sister and cousins a good night.
"Do you want us to come with you?" Maisie asked you.
"No, no need for that. You can go home, or wherever you want. You don't have to ask my permission to live your life." With that you walk out the door and start the long walk home.
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"Ok. This is fucking weird. Right?" Ellie turned to her cousins. Maisie had plopped on to the couch next to Holly and snuggled against her. "Do you actually think your friend is being legit?"
"Honestly, I don't know. He is a good person, I wouldn't have told him about the curse otherwise, but you know how the curse corrupts people. And now he has four of us, does that mean it will corrupt him faster?"
"I think he is legit. He was upset with himself when he accidentally almost made me fuck him, and I practically had to beg him to let me help him get off. Every order he has given has been either benign, beneficial, or on accident. Is his heart pure as snow? Probably not. Will he eventually fuck us, or at least one of us? Probably. But we knew we would eventually be found out, and I am glad my curse is under the command of someone as nice and smart as Brad." Maisie realized the Brad's command to trust Maisie's decisions was probably influencing Holly's level of acceptance, but if it kept her from being mad at her little sister she was ok with it.
"I guess you have good points. Most guys probably wouldn't have let me pick my augmentations, or have them be beneficial to me and not him. And he didn't even seem to consider ordering me to fuck him." Did Ellie look disappointed or annoyed at that, or was Maisie imagining things. "Still, I don't like being at the beck and call of a man I barely know."
"Would you have preferred if Gary kept you?" Holly asked.
"No! I. I don't think so. Gary is sweet, but he is kinda a loser. Every time we talk he brings up how he used to be bullied, like he is trying to get me to pity fuck him. But he was pretty impressive outside the bar. I don't know. I have just been so horny. I haven't slept with anyone in over two years. The last time I hooked up with a guy I actually told him about the curse. I told him he could do whatever he wanted to me and I would obey willingly." Maisie gasped at Ellie's confession.
"How did you get out of that?"
"He was a typical dumb jock guy, only thinking with his penis. I never said 'i have a curse that will make me obey you if you know about it,' so when he heard me say I would let him do whatever he wanted to me he thought I was just submitting to his manliness. He used it as an excuse to finger my ass while fucking me, and then made me suck his cock clean when he was done. I had to wait until he left to finish myself with my vibrator and thank god he was too dumb to realize what he was missing out on." Despite the annoyance in her voice, thinking about the last time she had a dick in her was turning Ellie on.
"I get what you mean. I have never actually had sex, but every day that went on without my curse activating made me hornier and hornier. Honestly, a small part of me was hoping that Brad would command me to strip and sit on his dick." Maisie moaned as her hand slid into her waistline. "And he has a surprisingly nice dick. It tastes pretty good at least, and I imagine it would feel amazing filling up my pussy. Hopefully I can convince him to fuck me soon."
"Insane to me that any man could have complete power over you and not fuck you. Not to be weird about it, but you are pretty hot, cousin." Ellie blushed.
"Hey, nothing weird at all. Although, I might feel that way because Brad commanded Holly and I not to think **** was taboo. At my request!" She cut in when she saw Ellie start to form a protest. "Holly was riding his face and I wanted to suck his cock, but felt weird sharing him with my sister. Speaking of which, Holly, how was your sex life." Maisie nudges her sister.
"Hmmm? Oh, it was ok. I have had a few short term partners, but not for over a year. The last guy to make me cum, besides our master, was about 8 months ago."
"Hold up. Two things. First, 'our master?' What the fuck is up with that." Ellie was back to looking angry.
"Oh, sorry. He uh, made us more receptive to our kinks, and one of mine is being dominated. I guess I am kinda leaning into that one more than I expected. I heard Maisie calling him master and something about it felt right, so I started."
"It was one of his first orders to me, before he really believed, but he rescinded it. He never ordered Holly to call him that, she is just a kinky slut." Maisie grinned at her sister.
"Ok. On to number two. He has made you cum?"
"Yeah. Twice. When I was riding his face." Holly sighed in a dreamlike contentment. "He wasn't sure what to do at first but he is a quick learner."
"Damnit, why do you get all the fun. Why couldn't Brad have made me cum too." Maisie pouted.
"I am sure you will have a chance soon. Just let him know that you really want it, and once he realizes it isn't just his control over us, maybe he will fuck us." Ellie didn't seem to notice that she had accepted her need to get fucked by Brad, but Maisie and Holly did. The three girls stayed up all night talking and catching up, not realizing how late it was getting until Melanie walked in.
"Morning ladies. Hope you all had a good night." She had stolen some of Ellie's clothes, which were a bit tight, and cleaned herself up. "I need to get to work. Call me if you or Brad figure out who you are going to trick into claiming and giving me away."
Do you find a target that day?
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Controlling Maisie
How far are you willing to take your crush's curse?
Your hot friend confides in you about a curse that allows you to do anything you want to her just by saying it after her name. She trusted that you wouldn't take advantage of it. But did she get that wrong?
Updated on May 27, 2026
by DakotaDave
Created on Jan 3, 2026
by Tonyrolo
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