The Nightmare after Christmas

“IT’S JANUARY!”

“Gina please.”

“Why the fuck are we reading the fucking Halloween story in fucking January!”

“Look Gina. Sometimes things just don’t work out how they should.”

“You can say that again.”

“Anyway we are back with Paul or rather Vyki.”

“UGGGGGHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!”

“Gina.”

“I don’t want to read a Halloween story in January!”

“Gina please, you are acting childish.”

“But I don’t wanna!”

“You know we still have that bet going.”

“Oh.”

“Don’t you want to see who wins?”

“…”

“Well?”

“Alright, fine. This is worth it.”

READING IN PROGRESS (BGM)

“So when last we left off, Vyki was just returning with Lou from a night out town. Because they are horny as fuck they quickly get it on but are interrupted by Molly.”

“Who understandably is not all too happy about her husbands infidelity.”

“Eh, the migraine bitch had it coming. Lou fucks off like the coward he is but unfortunately for Vyki he has the key to the safe in which is the key for his fake vagina.”

“That is certainly a sentence.”

“Obviously Vyki attempts to call Lou but…”

“Normally I would, baby girl, but I’m so tired I nearly veered off the road. I stopped off at the motel off the highway to get a nap. I got a new job in the morning I can’t be late for.”

“Jesus fucking Christ, this bitch is useless.”

“Molly then decides that the only appropriate punishment for her husband is to send him after Lou to get the key. I approve.”

“So Vyki drives to Lou. Apparently the lazy shit is not too tired to fuck, so they fuck and then in the morning he fucks off but not before charging her vagina back up and then the landlord shows up because Vyki needs to leave and then Vyki kicks him in the balls and runs away but her car is out of gas so she has to drive to a gastation but she has no money so she has to suck off the gas station gaskeeper but only gives her five bucks off gas, so Vyki goes out to get the gas but then some other asshole shows up and steals her gas, so Vyki has to go back to the gas station gaskeeper and let him fuck her in the ASS! And then…”

“Gina, slow down.”

“Huuuuuuhhhhh….”

“I must admit, I quite like this sequence, Gina. Vyki’s quest to get home has an almost slapstick quality to it.

“She gets molested by three different guys!”

“As I was saying, very amusing.”

“Urgh, she does eventually manage to make it back home, were Molly goes apeshit again on Vyki.”

“With good cause. If Cutie were to do this I would keep him caged until Halloween.”

“Speaking of. You’re fucked, Marcie!”

“I am?”

“It’s Halloween!”

“Actually, it is January.”

“IN THE STORY!”

“Oh...I guess?”

“They aren’t having a party!”

“Well, not yet.”

“They are going out to eat in town! There ain’t a party!”

“Well, it’s not evening yet.”

“Yeah right, better prepare yourself, hehehehe. I’m sending you trick and treating in the most humiliating costume imaginable!”

“Yes, Yes. Speaking of humiliating, Vyki receives plenty of that.”

“Yeah, because Molly’s a bitch.”

“Vyki apparently is normally the dom in that relationship, which is rather hard to believe.”

“Meh.”

“I quite like it. We get some nice humiliation here but unfortunately Vyki is just too much into it. Subs should not enjoy themselves.”

“Well, she sure as fuck isn’t enjoying herself when **** #5 tried to push her into his van at knife point!”

“Fortunately Molly shows up to save the day.”

“don’t you EVER attempt to harm or touch another woman, bitch. And the only time you ever touch another blade like that, it better be to cut off your ball sack, or I will personally rip of your puny <twist> little <twist> pre- <twist> pubescent <twist & press>. Understood, cunt?!?”

“I can almost approve of that, except...this fucker isn’t just your garden variety Moe Lester, he attempted to abduct a girl at knife point! Shouldn’t you call the fucking cops?”

“I do not trust the police, Gina.”

“Molly is like an older version of you, fucking hell.”

“After that close encounter the two are understandably a bit shaken. But Vyki really wants to continue this trip, so they do. This time to visit a dom club.”

“Hah! It’s evening and still no party!”

“True.”

“Knowing you I would have expected you to say this dom club is a party or some bullshit like that.”

“Gina please, I would never resort to something so cheap. I will win this bet fair and square.”

“But if you betray him, break his heart, or dishonor him in my house,” Heather continued with a sicking sweet and manic grin, “I rip out those pretty red locks, tie your titties so tight they’ll be ready to explode, rip off that pretty little thong, shove it in your mouth, hog tie you, and toss you under the bridge by the tent city and let them finish you off. Capisce?”

“At least no threat of ripped out cunt this time.”

“This Heather girl is interesting but she is clearly no Miss pfff...Fit.”

“Alright Marcie. Are you fucking kidding me? What the actual fuck!”

“Gina. Context.”

“So, after a bit of mingling with the perverts in the club, Molly excuses herself to the toilet. SHE THEN FUCKS OFF BECAUSE SHE HAS ANOTHER MIGRAINE, LEAVING VYKI ALONE! AGAIN! AFTER SHE ALMOST GOT STABBED TO ****! BY A ****! WHO WAS UGLY!”

“To be fair, Heather pretty much forces her.”

“Oh, fuck off, Marcie. That’s just like…”

“Just like…”

“I can’t even describe how fucked off that is!”

“Fucked up, Gina.”

“FUCK UP!”

“I am surprised you care that much about Vyki.”

“I don’t care about Vyki, I just really hate Molly!”

“Besides, it is not that Vyki is completely on her own. She is put in the charge of a group of gentlemen, very creatively called “The four Whoresmen.”

“Here’s a free tip: If you ever find yourself in a group named “The four Whoresmen” it’s time to remove yourself from the genepool.”

“There is also a little fling with an ABDL fan or so they claim. Because I am pretty sure that so called ABDL fan is not wearing a diaper.”

“What a shame. Maybe I make you go trick and treating in a diaper.”

“Is that a request, Gina? You do look pretty cute in a diaper. Especially the big, poofy one that makes you waddle.”

“Stop talking about diapers!”

“Alright, alright. I am only bringing it up because the writing in this chapter is especially rough.”

Not bringing a king eye contact as she boldly lifted her hand up and pressed a manicured finger between Fi’s thighs,

Fiona is quickly approaching her climax as she’s been edging for hours again and needed release Fiona is breathing rapidly, quickly approaching her climax as she’s been edging for hours again and needed release badly.

“Your energy and joy brighten up the rooms d thrill everyone around you,

“Was the author high or something?”

“The writing in general leaves a bit to be desired. Incidentally, here is my batch of mistakenly used words for this batch of chapters.”

“you should just be able to poor some on it.

Seeing the week point between her breasts,

she figured shed could at least plead on the man’s good gracious to let her use the phone.

as he got it off his chest and was only know able to pay attention

You are here to please and server me; yes?” Molly greats Paul at the door

“then why aren’t are Doms with us?”

Vyki contemplated diving out to one of the other rooms, but new it was pointless as the only real exit was out the front anyway

“her Daddy couldn’t make it tonight and sense she’s new,

oddly turned on by the sexy complement and attention

“Damn, you are a hot slut,” Mock complemented

and tried to act like she was fixing her hair as she got her barrings

Taking amount to glare the wannabe sub with a sideways glare

“I’m just hear to help.

Jasmine just looked at hear with her wicked smiled and giggled

they would have assumed the inane giggling and need to lean on her companion where do to alcoholic inebriation.

However, he wasn’t wanted the most patient man

“Fucking hell, cross-guy.”

“Cross-guy?”

“Still working on my nickname for this loser.”

“At any rate, I reiterate my criticism from last time. The author should invest a bit more time into proofreading.”

“Alright, so back to the four horsewhores and holy fuck these guys are the cringiest motherfuckers ever! Everyone’s a “Sir” but they can’t be addressed by just that, nooo that wouldnt’t be cringy enough! It’s always Sir Mok Tok or Sir Rance or some bullshit like that.”

“It is somewhat cute? Vyki gets really into the serving part. Receiving spankings for being too slow is a pretty cute example of casual domming.”

“Nothing about this is cute, Marcie. These Sirmians need to get back to the zoo.”

“Speaking of Sirs, shall we talk about Sir Bill?”

“Oh, fuck me.”

“Vyki gets “saved” from the four whoresmen by Sir Bill, who is her trainer and metamour.”

“The fuck’s a metamour?”

“I have no idea and I am too afraid to google it. Anyways, Sir Bill is an acquaintances to Vyki, or Paul and offers to bring her home, if she helps him with the small errand of training his sub.”

“WHO IS A COMPLETE PSYCHOTIC BITCH!”

“Gina.”

“So, we get some hardcore sadistic flogging session with nipple ****. Probably too vanilla for engin, but unkown would cream her pants to it. And after, when the sub bitch was supposed to calm down with Vyki in the girls room she almost kills her! And then Sir Bill shows up, grabs the bitch AND FUCKS OFF! WHY IS EVERYONE IN THIS STORY FUCKING OFF ALL THE FUCKING TIME!”

“I like the part were Sir Bill forbids his sub to shower as a punishment. A man of culture I can see.”

“At this point Vyki gets tossed out of the club and almost loses it. I can’t really blame her. Everyone in this story is a psycho.”

“Fortunately” the four whoresmen show up again and finally offer Vyki a ride home.”

“But not before some more psychopathic **** when they make her beg for what they think is her inhalator.”

“But eventually they get in the car and drive off. And in that nature, I think this is a good opportunity to finish off this follow up.”

“WHAT!”

“We made it all the way to chapter 104, Gina. Well beyond our fifty chapter limit.”

“You just want to get out of our fucking bet!”

“Perish the thought. Vyksin can always demand another follow up. In three months, that is.”

“Grrr…”

“This was an interesting batch of chapters. Somewhat more to my taste then the last. The story has a nice flow to it and keeps moving. Vyki getting herself in all manners of shenanigans is quite amusing too.”

“Don’t tell me you masturbated to it, Marcie.”

“Alas no. In that regard the same criticism like last time remained. Vyki is simply too old for me and matters were a tad too consensual. Still, I can appreciate the story from an artistic viewpoint. Well, apart from the rough writing of course.”

“How nice for you. I hated everything about it.”

“Oh, come now, Gina. It had its charm.”

“I don’t want to read about an old fart crossdressing on fucking Halloween and then not go to a fucking Halloween party!”

“Well, you know, Gina. The night is still young. There might still be a party in the story.”

“There better not! And there better be a request for a follow up! And this time you better do it in time for Halloween, you fuck!”

“Happy Halloween, everyone.”