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Chapter 2 by EyeOfHorus EyeOfHorus

You go to sleep

Slumber into a deep dream

I look around, and I can't really see anything, and it is freaking me out. I'm not panicking because it's dark, it isn't dark. It is an absence of anything at all. My brain is having trouble understanding this, even if I can understand what I'm seeing. Normally when you say you aren't looking at anything, you're looking at the wall, or the sky, or even into darkness. But I can tell there is literally nothing around me.

I look down, and I see a circle of light, illuminating a small platform I'm standing on. Where that light is coming from, I can't tell, as it seems to come from nowhere. I don't know why I'm here, in this lack of location. I look around, and suddenly I'm staring at something. Or a better way of putting it, something is staring directly at me. From the absence, the void, I see a large eye, blood red, staring directly at me. The eye is 60 feet tall, and although it is like a person staring at an ant, this eye is staring directly into my soul. Nothing is hidden from it, regardless of whether I want to hide something or not. It sees all of me. If this wasn't a dream, I would definitely have peed myself.

Two fingers appear from the void, so large that they could squash me as easily as I could squash a pea. From the tips, long, sharp, animalistic nails juts out. When the finger reaches me, I close my eye, ready to be crushed. Instead, I feel it pressing against my chest and forehead. Out of nowhere, I hear a deep, powerful, ancient voice, reach out to me.

TAKE CONTROL

Suddenly, a flood of knowledge gets bestowed upon me, filling my head.


Mind Control Power Rules

Although this is mind control, it might be easier to understand as more of a computer program that your brain runs. What this means is that commands are created like a loose computer code in your head. Loose, in the sense that the creator (Yourself) is able to create rules and conditions, but doesn't have to adhere to a strict code and syntax in order to make it function properly.

Additionally, in order to allow the user to better create commands, the intent of the creator matters greatly. This is to avoid any mistakes from miswording a command. The creator has a 300 feet range for applying commands, but they can apply a code to the command that makes it replicate (100 feet range). For example, a command that anyone who sees you is made happy by your presence can be applied to anybody (or everybody) in a 300 feet radius. If someone is within 100 feet, the command gets applied to them. In turn, anyone who is within 100 feet of them has the command applied, so on and so forth, allowing for an almost virus like expansion.

As for technology, commands work perfectly fine. In fact, in some ways, they greatly increase the strength of your powers. If someone is outside your range for command, and the range of the replication code, they would be isolated enough that a command could never reach them. However, calling them on the phone and telling them the command through the device would apply it. As would a text, although they would have to actually read the text for the command to apply, it's not enough to just receive it. The replication code works this way as well, allowing someone with the replication code to automatically apply the command to whoever they call, allowing for a long distance replication.

In order to save the creator from any excess trouble, all commands made are applied a code that makes the subject affected think the action made was their idea. For example, if you walk up to someone and tell them to give you their wallet, they will give it to you, justifying it in any way that is normal to them, even if it logically doesn't make sense ("That poor kid looked like he needed it more than me. He only had a golden Lamborghini"). Additionally, it also has an area of affect version applied, so it branches off to others when the command action is mentioned or observed. In the previous example, if the subject tells their spouse they gave their wallet away to the stranger on the street, they won't press the issue, as it will seem like a normal thing to them as well. However, unless there is replicator code in the command, it won't apply to the spouse. These codes can be removed from any command if the creator wishes to. Additionally, any command can be erased at any time, from any distance. Additionally, you can connect commands to destruction codes, allowing for one command to destroy another whenever it wants.

Finally, as mentioned previously, any command can be erased from any distance. However, they do have to be in your range in order for it to be changed. The way this functions is by creating a small backdoor into the subject, which, as a side effect, can also be used as a sort of GPS in your mind. As long as that backdoor is open, a person can be located.

Examples of command options

Creating a command that covers an area. As soon as someone enters the area, the command takes place.

  • I want all women in my work building to take off their clothes when they walk in, and behave as if nothing has changed. No one notices the difference.

Aura commands are independent of your range. While you have to be in range to create them, they stay until you wish to destroy them, regardless of range. An aura command is represented by a sphere, where the range is 100 feet from where it was placed. However, as intent matters, you can make an aura command that covers a building, and the command will automatically make enough aura spheres to cover all of the space you intend it to.

Since the command creation is like a code, you can apply commands that you might find in regular coding languages.

_- If a girl in my class gets over a 90% on the upcoming test, then they will invite me to a threesome with their friend. Else they will give me a blowjob to apologize for the bad marks.

Basically, if there is a girl in the class you teach that gets a 90% on the test, she gets her best friend to have a threesome with you, the teacher. However, if they get an 89%, they will offer you a blowjob. You can make it much more complicated than that if you wish, this is just to show off the idea.

Creating a replicating command in order to control specific people outside your range is possible.

  • If you are Selena Gomez, then visit me in my town and make a sex tape with me. Else, ignore command.

As this command is replicating, it would apply itself to everyone in a 300 feet radius. The command would then replicate itself onto any person who is within 100 feet of someone affected. An affected person travels to LA, the command would spread harmlessly through the population, replicating, until it reached Selena. The command would then affect her differently, making the first part of the command work. Additionally, as intent matters, no one who is named Selena Gomez, but isn't the famous singer/actress, would have the first part of the command apply, as it isn't meant for them, even if their name matches.

Consistent or timed commands are possible

  • If you come in contact with a staggeringly beautiful woman, then you will record as much information as you can about her, and send it to the creator.
  • 3 days after you receive this command, you will transfer over all your wealth to the creator.

These commands show two different functions. The first shows that a command can stay in someone for as long as the creator wishes, and will work whenever the effect applies. If the person meets a model, they will forward any info to the creator, to see if they're interested. The second command shows a timed command, allowing you to apply a command, but have it wait however long you want it to. You can even set conditions to the timer.

Body Control Power Rules

The control of the human body is completely within your control. You may only make changes to someone who is within your range (100 feet). The speed of the change is as quick as the creator wishes. A persons appearance may be changed in as quickly as a few seconds, or as long as a lifetime. That being said, appearance is not the only thing that this power changes.

Health is an important aspect of the human body, and this is where the rule of intent comes into effect the most. Making a command to get rid of cancer in someone's lungs might be harmful, if the cancer has spread on too much of the lungs. Therefore, that command would simply clean the persons lungs, rather than removing cancerous parts.

Additionally, you're able to control everything, meaning if you want to impregnate a girl, you would be able to choose whether your sperm is going to produce a female or male baby. Not only that, but you'll be able to control that baby's genes, meaning you'll be able to control how they develop. Considering red hair is a recessive gene, its more likely to be overridden by a brunette hair gene. However, you can choose whether or not that baby will have the red hair gene dominant. Beyond that, you don't even have a limit, as you are able to change the babies red hair gene, to blonde. So even if neither of the parents are blonde, the baby can still come out like that. Or with unnatural hair colors, like blue or green.

Finally, you are a human being yourself, so you also have control over your own body. Make yourself 6 feet tall, muscular, handsome, perfect health, anything of the sort.


I rub my head, as it feels like someone just cut it open, poured in a manual of some sort, and closed it once more. I just feel pain, like I've never felt before. And then it stops, as quickly as it began. The fingers recede once more into the void, and the eye closes. I am once more alone, terrified at the idea that something exists here.

And then I wake up in my bed. What the fuck was that? I think. That was unlike any dream I've ever had before. It feels like I'm almost still there. But strangely enough, I'm not scared like I was in my dream. I feel warm. Like I have some sort of power that lets me look into that eye once more. I feel different.

I sit up in my bed, and look around at my room. It all looks so strange, but at the same time, I know that it's all the same it's ever been. I was changed. Suddenly, I hear the door open.

Who comes into the room?

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