Lindsey and Susan read generic body control story, by Gabio

"Okay, we're taking a break from Hard Candy while we try to process some information Gambio gave us"

"Yeah, apparently Marcie didn't feel sorry for Gina because she wasn't living in luxury, she was just annoyed it clashed with her image of her.

"A distinction without a difference" said Lindsey, "she's still making really weak excuses for her"

"And Gina didn't **** other me" said Susan, "she was fairly privileged in her position prior to her introductory scene. Wait a minute, why was she terrified of Gina to the point of committing a felony for her, then?"

"Yeah, simply being a coward is not enough for that, Gina would have to do have done something. But enough about that, we're gonna be focusing on generic body control story, by Gabio"

"Apparently, there are penguins in it"

“Who titles a story 'generic'? I take it this must have been Gambio's first story. Anyway, this one has multiple options. We'll flip a coin to decide who makes the decisions here. I'm heads, you're tails”

Lindsey flipped the coin. It landed on tails.

"Okay, Susan, you're in charge" Lindsey said.

READING IN PROGRESS

"Okay, so this Rina Franklin character downloads an app that allows her to control her brother who is actually named Benjamin Franklin"

"Really?" asked Lindsey, "Ben and Rina? And this is just a downloadable app version of Gina's curse. Marcie and Vanessa show up too. Ben also gets called Ora and Cutie"

"Wouldn't it have made more sense for Gambio to put all that malesub stuff from Hard Candy here?"

"Well, it turns out Susan plays CHYOA like grandma so we got the dead end that cursed us to be sexually attracted us to penguins. Its a good thing that telling the reader that they're cursed doesn't actually make it so"

"Wait a minute, Lindsey, we're both fictitious" said Susan.

"Oh fuck, that means the curse applies to us" said Lindsey.

"I'm having erotic thoughts about penguins! This is so wrong!"

"I am going to kill Gambio for this!"

LIFTING THE CURSE IN PROGRESS

"That was not easy" said Susan, "we had to sneak into Crazy Blue territory to steal notes from Daniel but we've lifted our curse"

"Well, back to our review" said Lindsey, "after Susan hit the dead end, we went through Rina trying to get round Ben's commands"

"Eventually, she tricked Ben into thinking she had used the phone to stop herself from breathing unless he removed her commands"

"Why would Ben want to restore Rina's breathing? She obviously deserves to die. Also, if Rina does love Ben, why is she being so horrible to him? You don't do that if you love someone. You do that if hate them. This story doesn't make any sense"

"Rina has Ben undergo gender reassignment surgery against his will though it turns out that part was some kinda simulation. I couldn't really follow it"

"I know it wasn't real but it would have caused severe psychological damage. Ben probably felt like a freak"

"According to Rina, thinking this makes you a drama queen" said Susan, "wait, shouldn't he be drama king?"

"Er... Susan, that's not what-" said Lindsey.

"Oh, yeah, she called him the female version to suggest he looks like a girl. I did feel ripped off when we got teased us with a maledom route only to go back to Rina controlling Ben again"

"Yeah, it would have been better if Rina was the one being humiliated. Like Gina, she has all the qualities that make it enjoyable to see her suffer"

"Why does Gambio always do this? He teases us with better storylines than what we end up getting. First, he has Gina get money from Marel instead of getting fucked up the ass for five bucks, then he has the Leaders crossdressing instead of Gina being gang banged by them and now this"

"I mean anyone who would do that to their own brother deserves the most painful **** imaginable. Its unforgivable. She's worse than Marcie, same level as Gina. I wanna kill her, kill her dog and bring back her dog so it can eat her corpse. Fuck this review"

Lindsey got up and walked off.

"Okay, I guess I'm on my own" said Susan, "well, sorry, Mr. Gambio, I think Lindsey might have projected some feelings about her own brother onto Ben. Err... There's not much else left to say, I guess. Well, at least he doesn't try to make Rina sympathetic and I don't think she's as bad as Marcie or Gina or Hard Candy's Rina"

Susan sat there trying to think of something else to say.

"Well, er... I better go see if Lindsey's okay. Until next time, readers"