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Chapter 13
by
jk300020
How's the conversation with Maisie?
Too Well
I see her sitting in the distance, I don't want to seem to eager but my legs have other ideas, I half run towards her completely unprepared for what I'm going to say
"Hey Maisie" I blurt out, smiling before I even realise it.
"Heyyyyy" She slurs back.
"Are you drunk?" I ask earnestly
She just smiles, "Sit cutiepie." she says patting the floor next to her.
I look at her confused, she's never called me cutiepie. I figure I shouldn't question a good thing.
"Are you alright?" I ask, genuinely concerned for her current condition.
"I'm better than alright" she says again with a slight slur, "Im doing great!"
"Do you want to do this another time?" I ask, knowing this conversation could be the difference between us staying friends and falling apart "Maybe you should just sleep this off" I say noticing that she doesn't seem herself.
"I do want to do this" she says
"Really?" I ask, "It's a pretty important conversation"
"Oh" she pauses moves her finder repeatedly between the two of us "not that. I want to do this" She says with an irresistable smile.
I pause, confused and thrilled. My brain racing through what could have possibly brought Maisie to this conclusion how I want to jump in but It feels wrong to take advantage of her drunk though.
She interrupts my thoughts "Do it, make me kiss you" she says with a smile.
I cave "Maisie, Kiss me."
She leaps on top of me, mounting me, firmly pushes my back against the floor. Her lips find mine, and I kiss her back, heart hammering. My hands trace her, and hers trace me, a tangle of curiosity and desire. Years of dreaming, of imagining this moment, all building to now.I go to put my hand under her skirt, "Wow, slow down cowboy." She looks around "Lets go somewhere more private"
It was a fair point, we weren't far from the house, someone could easily walk in.
"Want to go back to our rooms?" I ask earnestly.
"Let's find somewhere more private" she pauses "We can tell them another time, but tonight, let it be just us."
Words I never imagined her saying, and words I would never argue against.
"What about the Hulk hike? There's probably noone there" She says.
"That's meant to be a bitch... Oh I know, Lake Marvel, you didn't come up with us. It's amazing and it's secluded."
She hesitates, if I didn't know better she was searching for a reason to not go but she lets up and says with a positive voice "Let's go"
On the way their I notice her texting someone. Probably letting people know she's safe if they go out looking for her I think to myself. I notice she's gotten a new phone case, I make a note to ask why, I know she loved her old Kirby one.
We're not far from the Lake and she starts sprinting, I follow and shout "Maisie, slow down" as I chase after her, she doesn't seem to slow down which confuses me. After a bit of thought it makes sense. I guess, if she can't hear the command how can she commit to it.
We're at lake Marvel, continueing where we left off. As our clothes come off I have an adventurous idea, "Lets go skinny dipping" I announce, grinning.
"I don't know" she responds, looking at the water, "Lets just stay here and have fun"
"Maisie lets go skinny dipping" I say a little more commandingly. "Trust me it'll be fun" I add positively.
Somewhat begruginly she takes of whats left of her clothes and runs towards the water. I follow her, heart racing.
The water is cold but her body is warm, we're passionately kissing in the water, our hands under water, exploring eachother like we hadn't before. Both my hands on her plump ass I pull her in slightly closer, I feel her tits against my chest, my shaft grows to it's maximum potential, I feel it against her stomach. She stops kissing for a moment, eyes wide open in shock, her hands find their way down there, almost as if to check she isn't imagining it.
"You're so big" she says in shock.
"Uhh I think Im around average" I humbly respond
"Average for what? Porn!" she teases a grin lighting up her face.
My hands around her ass I pick her up, the water helps, it feels like she weighs nothing. I quickly suck on her nipples and I gently lower her onto my thick shaft.
"Ohhhh" I hear her moan as I slowly enter her. Her head slowly tilting back into the moonlight the deeper I go, I kiss her neck unable to resist and start with a steady motion, just up and down, occasionally kissing her neck. I can tell its working from her heavy breathing and moans. Eventually I feel her orgasm, I find it harder, the pace is fast enough to be enjoyable, but not fast enough for me to come. "Are you ready?" she asks
Not sure what to expect I say "Yes".
She squeezes her vagina tighter and it works like magic, In seconds I'm right on the edge and soon after I finish inside her. "That was amazing" I saw in genuine awe.
"Thanks Sweetie" she says "You were great too"
We head back to the shore. Start dressing up again when a Van pulls up not to far from us. We scurry away, hiding behind a tree. A person approaches us, I try and put myself between Maisie and the person as I here her going through her bag. "Sorry about this" She says.
I turn around, she's holding a taser. She presses it once, it lights up the area for a second the buzz echoes over the water.
"Maisie stop" I shout instinctively, but she just tazes me without hesitation.
How did she resist the command?
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