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Chapter 8
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SimpleWriter
What is Maisie's reaction?
Anger and avoidance
Maisie is pissed. Her eyes burn into you as her hand grips your shoulder much too tightly.
However, there's something else. She leans her head forward slightly, and a lock of hair falls in front of her eye alluringly. She releases your shoulder and stands, unconsciously shifting her weight so that her hips are cocked, emphasizing her figure. Her angry snarl is light and puckers her perfect lips. She's never been this angry with you through your entire friendship, but she's also hotter than she's ever been. Yet there's something more. It's not just that she's flaunting her assets, she has an authority in her stance that you've never seen before.
Your brain freezes up. You know you should apologize. You understand that you need to undo your last command. You can't. The fact that you broke the rules she laid out feels like a crushing failure under the weight of her glare.
Maisie doesn't say anything either. She turns and walks out. However, she pulls off her white tank top as she walks out your door. Her back is to you, but you get a glance of prodigeous side boob as she turns towards Brad's room and walks away.
You lay in bed for a few seconds feeling crushed. Then you hear Brad through the wall yelling, "Fuck, you're hot!" You listen intently, and within a minute you can hear creaking noises and muffled exclamations.
"God dammit! ... mouth... so tight!"
"... tits... fucking soft!"
"... can't wait ... that pussy!"
Then the moans start from Maisie. You notice that you're jerking off, as if your hand started without the rest of you knowing. You feel ashamed for invading this private moment, but also excited because you'd given up on experiencing any kind of sex with Maisie in real life, and now you're jerking off to her screams. It doesn't take long before Brad seems to hit his limit.
"... inside you, right?"
Then Maisie screams one more time, and everything goes quiet.
For about fifteen minutes, then the noises start again.
You'd stopped jerking out of shame, but it's hard not to stop again when you hear the obvious creeking of Brad's bed start up again. The jerking feels really good. Then Brad's muffled comments get odd.
"Your finger feels so big!"
That was even louder than his other outbursts. What is she doing with her finger? The possibilities make you jerk harder.
Then, from your open door, you hear Tess yell, "Oh my god! Close the door when you do that!"
You glance up just in time to see her scooting away. You get up and close the door. You sit back on your bed and feel sorry for yourself.
"Yes!" shouts Brad through the wall, "I like it! Keep doing that!"
You have to keep jerking. Soon, you cum really hard. The noises from the next room go quiet soon after that, too. However, they start again twenty minutes after that. Not as loud, but they last a lot longer. A half hour after those noises end, they start up again. You barely get any sleep due to the enhanced stamina that you gave Maisie for cheerleading.
Eventually you fall asleep and don't wake up until ten. You get up and see that Maisie and Brad are the only ones who haven't woken up yet, everyone else is lazily snacking on fruit around the big table in the main room.
"Good morning!" says the Clemson guy whose name you still haven't learned yet.
"Morning," you say back to him. You get some juice and listen to everyone talk about what they're going to do today.
Eventually Ari gets up and says, "I'd better check on the loud couple." Everyone laughs as she heads down the hallway. She quickly comes back with a big smile and says, "They're being loud again! God, I never thought Brad would be the screamer."
You sit at the table and try unsuccessfully not to sulk. After about ten minutes you hear a door open, but before you can turn around the door to Maisie and Ari's room has already slammed shut. Brad walks out of his room with a goofy grin on his face.
"Welcome to the land of the living," says Todd. He holds out a glass of OJ.
Brad takes the juice, but just smiles instead of saying anything.
The girls all giggle, then Jayda says, "Are you okay, Brad?"
He says, "Bruised, but terrific!"
Right then, Maisie rushes out of her room in a tight, pink T-shirt, grabs Ari's hand, and pulls her out the front door. "Come on, I need to do some emergency shopping." She glances at the others on the way out, but specifically avoids making eye contact with you.
Everyone is a little confused, but they all go back to the brunch as they talk about a party tonight down the beach.
An hour later, Maisie and Ari aren't back yet. You feel terrible so you write a text saying, "I'm sorry. It just slipped out. I'll undo it, or change it, or whatever you want. I'm really sorry."
You get back an "undeliverable message" notification. Is her phone turned off?
Another hour goes by, and your phone vibrates. You hastily check it, but it's not from Maisie, it's from her sister, Holly.
"Stay the fuck away from her or I'll find you and cut off your balls with old scissors."
Crap! Crap, crap, crap! What are you going to do?
Then everyone else in the house gets a text at the same time. They all check their phones, and Tess says, "I wonder why she changed her number?"
Jayda shushes her and whispers, just a little more loudly than she meant to, "Read the rest of the message!"
Tess glances at her phone again, glances at you, then narrows her eyes in a **** glare.
For the next couple of hourse, everyone in the house keeps their distance from you. They're not trying to get away from you, they just aren't eager to share a couch or a table with you. The guys don't even seem mad, they just don't want the girls to see them talking to you. What did Maisie write in that group text?
Eventually Maisie and Ari come back. They're all smiles, as if there's been no drama. Again you notice something is slightly different about Maisie. The way she walks seems to sway a tiny bit more, and the way she waves and smiles at Brad is... it's impossible to describe. She does not at all look like she's trying to act sexy or flirtatious, but every movement is subtley mesmerizing. You look around, and even the Clemson guy holding Jayda's hand seems to be staring at Maisie a little more than yesterday.
Still, she doesn't look at you and quickly heads out to the deck. You try to follow her, but Ari gets in front of you.
"Hey. I don't know exactly what's going on, but Maisie would like it if you didn't crowd her right now. It's not a problem, nobody is saying you have to leave or anything, but maybe don't engage her for a couple of days, okay?"
"Um... okay." You smile, trying to play off how devastating this is.
Ari gives you a reassuring pat on the shoulder. "You two have been friends since preschool. Whatever it is, I'm sure it'll be fine." She gives you one more smile, then heads over to Todd who hands her a beer and puts an arm around her waist.
The one piece of good news is that everyone moves their stuff around so the couples can be together, solidifying your room as being a private room. You now have a place where you can lock yourself in and take your time jerking off. Which you do.
That night you all go to the bonfire party down the beach. Nobody specifically looked at you when they discussed going, but they didn't say you couldn't come, so you just followed. Every single girl puts herself between you and Maise while holding onto their guy, so she ends up at the front of the group and you end up at the back, as far from her as possible.
There's music at the party, and soon people are dancing. This is pretty normal for awhile, but that ends when Maisie and Brad get up to dance. She's amzaing! She's the best dancer out there, but she's also the sexiest by a mile. Her hands often come close to caressing her big breasts without quite doing it. The piercing eyes you've been in love with forever hold Brad like a snake charmer. Soon he goes slack and stops dancing as she dances around him. He's not the only one, half the party is watching Maisie dance.
This only lasts about five minutes before Brad can't take it anymore. He grabs Maisie's hand and pulls her away. They both laugh as they run back to the house. You stay seated in front of the bonfire for another two hours before the group leaves the party.
Maisie and Brad are still having loud sex in his room when you get back. Then again when you try to go to sleep, then more throughout the night. You wake up to Brad yelling, "How can you keep going like this?!"
You have to jerk off before you can get back to sleep.
How do you handle this?
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