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Chapter 4
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What's next?
They attempt to swap back
You needed no extra prompting. Immediately you picked up the remains of the orb with the broken glass shards now in the 'bowl' of the broken base. Carmen placed his own large hands over yours. He was still in contact with the glass. You looked at Jackie to signify you were ready, this time bracing yourself for an expected dizzy spell.
Jackie held the note in front of her and read the magical words "Evella Kordora Nesti". You held on waiting for something to happen.
You told Carmen "Keep holding the glass. The swap didn't happen immediately before. Let's give it a couple of minutes"
You looked into Carmen's face, your face, as you waited. You realised you were rather handsome. You had a haircut yesterday and the barber had did a good job. You and Jackie would make an attractive couple in the wedding photos.
"I don't think anything is happening" Jackie said after a several minutes. "Perhaps we try again with one of you reading the words"
This time you read the word as Jackie held the piece of paper in front of you. Carmen continued to hold the bowl. His large hands over yours. "Evella Kordora Nesti" you said in Carmen's voice.
Several minutes later you tried again. This time Carmen read the words "Evella Kordora Nesti" as you looked him in the eye. Inside you were starting to panic. Was the orb broken? Were you stuck as Carmen?
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Wedding Day Swap
Your bride swaps bodies with someone you know
PLEASE ADD CHAPTERS! Premise: You are Gerry (Gerald) Duncan, a 28 year old software developer in good physical health. Today is your wedding day - you are marrying Jackie (Jacqueline) Driscoll, a beautiful woman you've dated since college. Due to an accident with a mysterious wedding gift, Jackie switches bodies with another member of the wedding party shortly before the wedding. The three of you decide to keep the swap secret and go through with the ceremony and honeymoon, hoping to find a way to reverse the transformation later. Themes: Throughout the story the characters will have to deal with the ramifications of the swap. Can Gerry and Jackie carry on their relationship secretly, hiding the swap from everyone else. How will they handle the honeymoon? The early days of the marriage? How will the person in Jackie's body handle this? What about Gerry & Jackie's hopes to quickly have a child? One aspect of the transformation makes the victims comfortable in their new bodies, i.e. they won't go crazy at the shock of the change. I leave it up to the individual author whether or not they gain anything else from the switch (access to skills, memories, knowledge, personality traits, etc.).
Updated on Oct 30, 2025
by fantaghiro
Created on Jan 17, 2021
by fantaghiro
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