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Chapter 4 by TheLeherengin TheLeherengin

A response awaits?

There is no Response so on with part 2 of Dahlia and Alide read Advanced Fantasy by Iam_DickMan

"Why is your name first again?" Alide asks leaning back in her chair, the two of them still in the strange dark room.

"Just sounds better that way I guess. Alide and Dahlia doesn't roll off the tongue as well as Dahlia and Alide," Dahlia responds, her arms spread out on the stabby table, again unbothered by the sharp points sticking into her skin, her chin laying on the edge of the table, looking bored.

"I guess it does..." Alide agrees reluctantly.

"You still mad about being unable to dom anything?" Dahlia asks and Alide glares at her. Dahlia looks up meeting eyes with her.

"That's a yes then..." she continues and then sighs, "Well we've been waiting days, I think we can continue," she adds.

"You said that three minutes after the initial read and then again every five minutes afterwards, but at this point in time you are in fact correct," Alide responds and snaps her fingers, the display returning, showing the story once again.

"Alright back to the world's greatest superhero... DickMan!" Dahlia says excitedly as she sits up.

"Mild Mannered Iam_DickMan's true identity?" Alide suggests and Dahlia nods with a grin.

"Of Course!" she responds and then giggles, "it's not a very well hidden secret,"

READING IN PROGRESS (BGM)

"You chose that song entirely for the joke, didn't you?" Dahlia asks and Alide responds with an amused chuckle.

"Alright so last we left off, Arthur was now as tall and strong as an Orc because he had just fucked the Orc lady Kira using the mind controlling ring he had found. Now the work day is over and likely he is heading home, except no! The luscious Kira has asked him over for dinner and ignoring the mind control **** stuff, the conversation between them is legitimately kind of cute, simple, but cute. They're both so awkward... even though Arthur has near complete control of Kira which ruins the cuteness a bit..." Dahlia speaks.

"They take a cab to her place and apparently Kira is struggling to maintain any semblance of self control, they get to her apartment and she excuses herself for a bit in order to not immediately try to fuck him on the couch. It seems however that Kira has a roommate who is some kind of small being. Probably a halfling, gnome or Dwarf," Alide surmises.

"Nope Goblin!" Dahlia yells excitedly.

"Stop reading ahead!" Alide counters.

"It's literally the next line after where you stopped to type that. Stop commenting in the middle of paragraphs!" Dahlia retorts.

"A goblin shortstack," Alide comments.

"A favourite of yours," Dahlia adds.

"Mmm... Yeah..." Alide admits.

"Anyway so we have a thicc goblin girl and a sweet orc lady living together. Sounds like a sitcom premise," Dahlia says and then snickers, "I'd watch it. Especially if there was sex,"

"Mata is certainly an interesting name..." Alide says her voice hesitant.

"Hmm something about that name, sis?" Dahlia asks.

"Well... It's probably just a coincidence, but I don't think I've heard the word Mata used anywhere, but outside of Bionicle... with the godly being Mata Nui..." Alide admits.

"... What the hell is a Bionicle?" Dahlia asks after a few seconds just staring at Alide.

"It's... a... fiction series... Look I only know about it because of pop culture okay!" Alide responds.

"Nerd..." Dahlia mutters.

"Shut it! We're moving on!" Alide yells.

"Alright fine. So, the ring wants Arthur to mind control and **** the cute goblin chick, Mata" Dahlia says, "which I support wholeheartedly and I'm sure Alide does as well!"

"I mean... I don't condone **** in any non-fiction context and I'd be happier if something consensual was to occur, but... yeah..." Alide admits, "Also why did Kira get a picture, but Mata doesn't?"

"My guess... The author couldn't find a picture for Mata..." Dahlia suggests with a shrug.

"This... This is why Leherengin doesn't use pictures. At least pictures that aren't custom made for the story. If you can't find a picture for one thing, but you can for another you get lopsided pictures where some things have them and others don't and in Leherengin and I's opinion, that's worse than having no pictures. Not to mention if you take pictures from various sources you have the problem of varying quality or style which can be jarring," Alide states.

"Lehe! I see you back there! Forcing justification for your actions into this read! Shoo shoo!" Dahlia yells and Alide blinks.

"God damn it, Lehe was using me as a mouthpiece there wasn't she?" she asks.

"Yeah," Dahlia answers.

"Right... Anyway so surprisingly Arthur does end up mind controlling Mata, but it's actually an accident," Dahlia says ignoring what had just occurred.

"Of course once that's done he doesn't hesitate to take advantage of the situation and immediately starts in with his rapey mind control, first forcing her to be okay with Kira dating him, which she apparently wasn't originally, though I don't think that was made very clear, she seemed suspicious, but didn't seem to outright be against them dating, anyway now she's fine with it, though interestingly she resisted the direct command to be happy about it and it only worked when Arthur went indirectly, playing with the idea that if she trusts Kira she should trust Kira's judgment of boyfriends, which worked and is quite clever,"

"He also of course makes her attracted to him and makes her okay with the idea of Arthur being polyamorous, essentially covering his bases when he inevitably starts cheating on Kira and now Mata with the rest of his soon to exist harem, he also makes her eternally wet again which... Really is kind of a dick move honestly... It's going to be very uncomfortable..." Alide continues.

"Speaking of uncomfortable, he also mind controls her into being incapable of being harmed by anything he uses to penetrate her... Mostly because he's worried his cock is too big for her, but damn is that pretty general... He could shove like... swords and stuff into her if this works... Hell if this works, he could straight up make any of his girls or anyone he wants invincible... assuming it works. I mean he can change how their biology works in terms of making them constantly wet, but can he just straight up give them essentially super powers like that? It seems that way," Dahlia continues.

"Yeah... If this works how he thinks it does, then this ring is way way more powerful than it first seemed. He could make people into gods if he can just rewrite their personal reality like that... Instead he's going to use it to fuck hot chicks... Kind of a... 'you could cure cancer' 'I don't want to cure cancer I want to turn people into dinosaurs moment'" Alide states.

"Is that another nerd reference?" Dahlia asks.

"Yes, move on," Alide shoots back.

"He also makes her a size queen and makes her want to humiliate people with tiny cocks, specifically stating that Goblin cocks are pathetic, which... is honestly just kind of a dick move to any male goblins that she might ever encounter, like what the fuck did Goblin dudes ever do to you Arthur?" Dahlia states.

"It's smart of him to specify his own cock as being better than everyone else's though or she'd probably just end up leaving him for like... a troll or dragon or something. Also now she can't cum without his permission... So she's constantly wet and unable to orgasm on her own, that's pretty fucked... Especially since I imagine he's not going to be around her all the time," Alide says.

"Yeah... Arthur is definitely kind of an asshole with specifically the body control stuff," Dahlia says with a sigh.

"It is hot though. I mean this kind of fucked up torturous stuff is the kind of thing bad endings for chosen in the Tower might be, it's just a bit weird as something casually done to a person that presumably the male character just wants to fuck and isn't trying to punish or ****," Alide concedes.

"Yeah... I mean having a harem of women constantly on the edge of orgasm, begging you to let them cum is very hot, but not something you do unless you're straight up a villain and Arthur doesn't seem to have fully acknowledged his villainy yet so it feels kind of out of place, he still seems to consider himself a good person, or at least not a completely irredeemably monstrous person," Dahlia adds.

"Ooh Yuan-Ti mention, another specifier that this is specifically in the D&D core setting, also so... Yuan-Ti Bones? Interesting," Alide mentions.

"Also so now she's just a self-racist... God damn Arthur... making her dislike and judge her own race like that," Dahlia says shaking her head disappointedly.

"Once again I am a fan of the POV change showing her own reactions even if the subject matter, mostly being SPH focused with Mata thinking about how pathetic Goblin cocks are and how she should insult them for Arthur's enjoyment isn't really doing anything for me," Alide states.

"Yeah... While a fun bit of dommy mommy is cool, I don't personally care much about cock sizes, small large, as long as they're inside me it hardly matters," Dahlia agrees with a nod and then licks her lips, "mmm... Cocks inside me..." she adds.

"So then Kira arrives back with extremely expensive food... Eladrin food apparently... I've never quite understood Eladrin... Are they like... High High Elves or something? It's weird, but anyway extremely expensive difficult to get food, implying there's something special about Kira, but we don't know what. Also Arthur gropes Kira to orgasm before they eat and... I get the idea that the line following this is supposed to be after recovery, but even with the specifier, it feels like she just responded with a casual line right after being touched to orgasm, but anyway... It seems Mata is returning from the bathroom. I hope Kira brought food for her too..." Alide says and then sighs, "I'm sorry I'm having trouble continuing to read, something about this is just making me really hungry..."

"Me too honestly," Dahlia responds.

"We'll get something to eat and then continue once we've got full stomachs," Alide responds.

"My stomach might be full of more than just food when we come back!" Dahlia teases.

We only did 6 chapters that time... We did like thirteen on the first one... Anyway response, Y/N?

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