Monica and Jess read Hard Candy by Gambio

"Hey, Jess, I got another story here."

"Great, more dickgirls."

"This one is a branch of Cursed Punishment."

"So its basically a cringey fanfic."

"I don't think thats how it works. This is a path called Hard Candy written by Gambio."

"Isn't he the guy who writes this stuff?"

"Yes, this is Marcie and Gina's story. The concept is that Gina is a horrible person who the universe itself decides to punish with a curse."

"Pinochio nipples? A stick up her ass? Chasitity? Which is spelt wrong by the way! Incontinence? Clit growth? Clothing destruction? Everything eaten or drank becoming cum? Everything eaten or drank becoming shit? Gender swap? These people are degenerates!"

"In the path we're following, Gina gets obedience."

"Can't we follow the one where she gets chastity?"

"No, we're following Hard Candy."

READING IN PROGRESS

"On this path, Gina has come across a shy girl named Marcie."

"Candy up the ass?! Gambio is a degenerate!"

"We're only on the first chapter, Jess. For someone is supposedly shy, Marcie does not waste any time taking advantage of Gina's predicament. I do think Marcie should have had Gina show her boobs."

"Er... Monica, I don't think you should throw stones. It takes twenty chapters in our story for you to have a sex scene. Gambio is probably going for a slow burn approach like our own creator has done."

"Wait, are you defending this story? What happened to all that Gambio is a degenerate?"

"Marcie reminds me of myself."

"That thing about perfect attendance? Come to think of it, both her and Gina remind me of you. You're like... if Marcie and Gina made a baby. Its a public story. Maybe, we could write a branch where Marcie and Gina become your parents."

"No, just straight up NO!!! Further reading shows that Marcie is a degenerate who has Gina keep the candy bar up her ass."

“Forgive my impudence, but I do believe you are quite overweight. I also don't really know you, but given your glasses and overall homely appearance I assumed you probably had good grades.”

"Fuck you, Gina! I might not be ugly like Marcie but I assure you, I get good grades!"

"Really, Jess, thats what you take issue with?"

“Forgive me, but do you know how many slices of bread you had in your lifetime?”

"Hey, Jess, its a JoJo's Bizarre Adventure reference."

"I don't know what that is. Is it some kinda children's story?"

"I do feel that Mr. Gambio should have shown us how Marcie has been bullied and dominated. Maybe a scene of Gina's cronies doing something to her. Also, if he was going to shift the story into 1st person, I think he should have done it on his first chapter. Doing it three chapters in is... weird. Also, having Gina run round naked at school is a missed opportunity. I can imagine all the things that could have happened. Running into those nerds, maybe her cronies or even being caught naked by a teacher and getting punished for it."

"I for one am glad that Gambio skips on the details."

"But other than that, I can't wait to see what Marcie has cooked up for Gina."

"I actually agree with you on that. Gina is clearly a degenerate and she has apparently turned Tom into a degenerate."

"How am I supposed to masturbate to this? The whole smelly sock thing is grossing me out."

Shoes are part of the dresscode. It would be utterly boring to have you get expelled now, would it?

"But you had Gina run naked round the school yesterday. What if she had been caught? And Marcie has Susan stripped in the same chapter that she brings up the dress code."

"Er... Monica, I don't think Gambio has thought a lot of this through."

"And he also should have shown Susan bully Marcie before. The way this scene is written, it makes Susan look like Marcie's victim which seems to be the opposite to what Gambio was intending."

"I for one thought that her plan to recruit Susan by manipulating Gina into betraying her was brilliant. Wait, a minute, wouldn't Mrs. Tompkins have said something about Gina being in her underwear?"

"If having Tom dress Gina in lame outfit would ruin her plans, why did Marcie have him do so at all? Still, it does get more interesting once we learn more about her bid for power."

"OMG! Marcie and Marel kissed! Gambio is a degenerate!"

"It was just a kiss! You make it sound like they had sex!"

"I don't care much for the fatty thing either."

"Yeah, I can't masturbate to ugly things."

In short, I had to prove myself and that unfortunately included the rather distasteful means with which Gina held her iron grip on the school.

Bullying.

"WHAT?!"

"Whoa, calm down, Monica."

"I will not calm down! This makes Marcie no different from Gina!"

“Cutie” was a slender, short boy who had the misfortune of having natural blond hair.

"Oh come on! I thought this was a girl school. Why is there a boy in this story?"

"Really, Monica? That's the thing you're complaining about? Not the misspelling of "blond"?"

"This is worse than the other one. At least dickgirls are still girls."

Of course as a bully victim myself I absolutely despise this. Unfortunately for Cutie, I had to prove my worth in front of the girls.

"Like a dirty coward."

"Seriously, Monica, you don't understand the complicated political issues that go on inside schools. Besides, it was just an act. She didn't actually make Cutie lick her ass."

"Gambio should have at least made Cutie a girl. Tom as well. There is absolutely nothing cute about boys. They're like EWWW!"

"Are you five? Tom was established to be Gina's brother in the introduction. You gotta be consistent."

"But I don't want boys in my porn. Just keep it girl on girl!"

"If you're gonna complain every time a boy appears in a story, its gonna get old fast."

"Says the "he's a degenerate" girl."

I suddenly remembered that I had a role to fulfill. I mean as a Hand of Queen Gina I can't get too soft on this boy now, can I? So i totally have to do this right now.

"The girls are gone! There is no reason to do that?!"

"Its a necessary evil, Monica. You gotta put the lesser people in their place."

"Don't give me that crap. Marcie outright states she's just doing it for fun. As far I'm concerned, she is just a bully no different from Gina."

"I do take issue with Gambio not capitalising the i."

Despite wearing rather tight underpants the bulge he had was...tiny.

"Its just a pity that the bulge exists at all."

"Monica, there is going to be a lot of men in the stories we're gonna review. Are you seriously gonna complain every time we see one?"

Up until now, I have to admit that while this was no doubt pretty awful for Cutie, I could appreciate the erotic appeal. But messing with his actual scholastic endeavors...suffice to say, as someone who takes studying very serious this pissed me off to no end.

"See, Monica, she has some standards."

"I probably shouldn't write Marcie off just because she did one bad thing."

Yes, don't worry we are back to your regularly scheduled F/F program soon

“Actually” I smiled. “I have a way for you to prevent further weight gain.”

"Alright, Gambio seems to have worked out that nobody likes dudes or fatties."

"Monica, this story was written way before we started reading it."

“Well, too bad because until Cutie gets his compensation we are going to keep stuffing you like a goose.”

“Now.” Susan took over. “We want this to be entertaining for us, so here is what you will do. Cutie is currently waiting in a classroom. He has no idea what is going on. You will go to him, beg him for his forgiveness and end by getting his permission to suck his dick.”

"Don't you dare! You just promised there'd be no more of this weight gain crap. And what happened to our F/F program?!"

"Yeah, Marcie should have had Gina marry Cutie before she does things like that. Gina and Cutie are going to go to hell, now."

"Wait a minute, Jess, wouldn't **** Gina like that have a mental effect like what Marcie mentioned before? She's not very consistent."

"And don't get me started on the grammar. Its "through", not "trough"."

"We can't throw stones on that."

"CaptainAngel77's crimes against spelling and grammar do not excuse Gambio's."

My main source of income is trough extortion. Plenty of bullying consists of taking money from my victims(90% goes to me, while my lackeys generously get to split the rest between themselves) However in order to maintain my status I need this money to buy a lot of important things like designer clothes and new phones.

"Priorities, am I right, Jess? Marel gives me the creeps."

"I thought you'd be into her."

"I like girls but there's something off-putting about her."

I still need Gina to look the part of a queen after all.

"Then why were you having her dress in stupid outfits and walk round in her panties? That's not very queeny!"

"I don't think Marcie quite knows how this whole thing works, Monica. I'm starting to think she might not be so smart."

“Who cares? We where supposed to fatten her up until she can't even walk anymore! You told me this change was all according to plan!”

"Please don't tell me Susan has a fatty fetish."

“I don't care!”, Susan barked back. “You had it way too easy today! You where supposed to get fucked in the ass for 5 bucks, instead Marel just hands you the money like this!”

"Can Susan be the main character of this story? I think she'd make a better protagonist, fat fetish aside. Its so frustrating! I can imagine her fucking Gina in the ass with a strap on but I can't masturbate to something that hasn't actually happened in this story because that would be cheating."

"Its a public story, you could just write it yourself, Monica. But don't insert me into it like you did with Ringmaster."

If only I accepted Marel's offer. Then Susan would be the one getting fucked in the ass. Or me. I heard Marel had a fondness for strap-on's. In any case, it would be worth it.

"That just makes me wish Gina had gone with Marel's offer."

"You said she was creepy."

"But the image Gina describes turns me on."

“Five years in which I was your bitch! Well, now the roles are finally reserved! Now you will be the one fetching me coffee and doing my homework! I have you massage my feet and much more!”

"I am liking this story now, Jess. Go Susan, make Gina your bitch!"

"I still prefer Marcie and I don't approve of trusting someone else to do your homework."

"I can really feel for Susan. Gina has treated her like dirt and all that time Susan still thought she was her friend. And she was betrayed by her and learned she never cared about her at all. Also, the flinching when Marcie brings up her scar leads me to believe she might have PTSD from whatever incident Marcie keeps bringing up."

"Can we stop now? We're been through like twenty chapters."

"Lois Lane's Night Out was longer but we certainly had a lot more to talk about with this one. There's about sixty more chapters left so I think we should stop right here and ask the masturbation question. So did you masturbate, Jess?"

"No, that is degenerate."

"Well, I did."

"But how?"

"The scene where Susan had Gina kiss the trash, rubbed a banana peel on her, kicked her in her own vomit and then pissed on her. I've got to give it to Gambio, he's helped me discover fetishes I didn't even know I had."

"Degenerate!"