Fred and Farsel read King Edward, by AlexandraS90

Fred and Farsel appeared in the Break Room.

"Okay" said Fred, "our task is to review King Edward, by AlexandraS90. Its supposed to be really good so maybe I could learn something from it"

"Don't Lindsey and Susan normally do this?" asked Farsel.

"Apparently, Unknown7 thinks we should do the medieval fantasies. We should start from the beginning. Of course, those pages will have no bearing on our assessment of King Edward. This is just to give us the context"

READING IN PROGRESS

"So, we're supposed to guide a family through the ages" said Farsel.

"It looks like Game of Thrones and JoJo's Bizarre Adventure had a baby" said Fred, "basically the story follows King Bryce until he is Ned Starked and gets some demon preggers. Lets get to the actual reading now"

READING THE ACTUAL KING EDWARD CHAPTERS IN PROGRESS

"I'm supposed to believe they just let Marissa Loon, yes that is her name, off the hook" said Fred, "the story of Bryce getting possessed and **** her is hard to believe. I understand they would want to wait until she's given birth to the new heir before executing her but-"

"Some people were skeptical" said Farsel, "but we just jump to 18 years and everyone ignores it. Anyway, now we follow Bryce's son, King Edward"

"If Edward has supernatural blood, how does he have cerebral palsy? Shouldn't the demon heritage have cancelled it out. If the demon was just using Marissa as a vessel, it would make sense but its stated he has demon blood in him"

"Maybe demons work differently in Fantasy Dynasty. I mean demonic possession wasn't a thing in Dark Lord"

"Also, he wanted to bang his mom when he was eight? You'd think he'd have run away screaming when he saw her demon form. I'm not sure what Marissa is planning but she's a very stupid demon. She decides to have sex with her son in the throne room where anyone could walk in and cause a scandal. Edward is also an idiot for going along with it. That's not fearless, that's retarded"

"And now Edward has been offered minotaur cum" said Farsel.

"Well, this brings so to our fifteen chapters for today" said Fred, "the pacing of this story is slower than Hard Candy thought to be fair, King Edward did start deeper into it. We're probably have more to say in part 2"

"Until next time, readers"