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Chapter 13
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Zeebop
What does Doctor Doom think of this development?
Doctor Doom Is Intrigued
"Susan Storm," Doom's gravelly voice echoed oddly from hidden speakers. "Is to be yours?"
Moonstone stiffened. She had unbuttoned her shirt, poured a couple fingers of whiskey into the glass, letting the **** deal with the residual headache of using Doom's implants. She mulled over a reply. On the one hand, this was Doctor Doom: certified mad genius, sorcerer, super-scientist, and her erstwhile partner. On the other hand, if she showed weakness, this partnership would devolve into her being Doom's puppet.
Best to play it cool.
"Is there an objection?" she asked.
Doom's holographic head, projected above the level of the desk, stared at her.
"You were to corrupt Susan Storm, use her to destroy the Fantastic Four from within," he said. "Not turn her into your...sapphic paramour."
"Why not both?" Moonstone said, and took a sip of her whiskey. It burned pleasantly on the way down. "In fact, that is how I plan to destroy the Fantastic Four. Making the Invisible Woman my cunt-licking love ****. A ploy which Reed Richards, for all his super-science, has no defense against. Because I'm not changing her mind using surgery, or ****, or psychic powers. I'm just talking to her. Sue Storm is coming to the realization that she can't cum without me on her own. I'm going to make myself the sole outlet for her desires."
"And then?" Doom said, his voice neither threatening or judgmental. If anything, he sounded...intrigued.
"Then I'll make her prove her love for me. Put her in a position where she has to choose between me and the Fantastic Four. Oh, not right away. We'll build up to that final betrayal. Until she's faced with all the lies she's had to tell, the things she's had to do, and the sham her marriage and heroic career have become. Then, we'll make a clean break. Leave Reed with the kids and disappear. Scotland, maybe. A nice little cottage, good whisky. Maybe get a dog."
Doom stared at her for a long moment.
"There are many obstacles to your plan," he said. "But the end result is...acceptable. What is the next part of your scheme to seduce the Invisible Woman?"
Moonstone smiled.
"I'm thinking...a little retreat. Just the two of us. Somewhere secluded. Off the beaten path."
Where does Moonstone take Sue Storm for a retreat?
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DOOMED
Susan Storm is Doomed...She Just Doesn't Know It Yet
Doctor Doom has decided to break up the Fantastic Four by targeting Sue Storm, the Invisible Woman. Yet Reed Richards knows too well the strategies that Doom would try. So Doom decides to enlist a partner to aid him in the downfall of the Invisible Woman...by whatever means necessary!
Updated on Jun 10, 2026
by Zeebop
Created on Aug 10, 2024
by Zeebop
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