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Chapter 4 by Zeebop Zeebop

How does Reed Richards respond to Sue's hypothesis?

As A Man of Science, Reed Richards is Intrigued

"Fascinating," Reed Richards said as he studied the photos. Sue frowned as she watched him scrolled carefully through the photos, as if to memorize every detail of the naked woman. A pang of jealousy shot through her as she realized that Reed had slipped into the mode of scientific interest in which Sue very rarely took part. The one that kept him up at all hours of the night, and away from the kids...from her.

"Digital images like this won't hold anything of the quantum signature that would let me trace an interdimensional incursion," he said. "But it's possible I might be able to find something in the metadata...excuse me darling, I'll need to borrow your phone for a bit."

Mister Fantastic didn't wait for her permission. He stepped out of the room, phone in hand. Sue Storm watched her husband leave, and felt that burn of unhappiness in her chest.

Somehow, she wished she'd never showed it to him.


A mother rarely has time to feel sorry for herself. Sue threw herself into helping the kids. Made them snacks. Talked with Ben and Johnny about their lives. Ben was half-way through the latest Stephen King novel. Johnny was trying to sell Tony Stark on something he called "Tinder, but for superheroes." The Invisible Woman listened and smiled.

She ordered Mexican together. The kids screamed in joy as they dug into fish tacos and enchiladas. Sue broke one of her normal dietary rules and cracked open a cerviza. The cold Mexican beer cut through her throat, and perfectly set off the spices in the food. As the Thing lifted a massive, custom-made burrito to his maw, Sue grabbed two tacos and a bottle of beer and headed into Reed's lab.

The frown on Sue's face seemed burned into her very soul as she saw the naked photo of alternate-Sue blown up to the size of a movie screen, so that it took up an entire wall of the lab. She could feel her teeth grind as she knew Reed had utterly forgotten that the lab wasn't secure. Anyone could have walked in there and seen the massive nude portrait.

Yet she took a deep breath, let it out, and stepped forward to where Reed was perched on a stool.

"Dinner?" Sue said.

Reed turned from the screen, blinked. For a moment, Sue knew that he didn't see her. He saw the other Sue. The one who had never had kids. Body tighter, tits firmer and smaller. Her cheeks flushed. Maybe it was the ****, but she felt the green-eyed monster within. She wanted to do something about that.

"I found her!" Reed said, excited. "I mean, not where she is right now, but I found the dimension the other Sue is from! I was able to correlate the metadata tags with the bit decay..."

Sue closed her eyes. She could almost feel the tacos get cold. When she opened them, the massive breasts projected on the wall were still there, the stiff pink nipples as big as hubcaps.

"Eat first," she said, as she **** the tacos toward him. As he took them from her, she cracked open the beer and took a sip.

"Then tell me who she is."

Who is the alternate Sue Storm?

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