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Chapter 16 by Ai-R Ai-R

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'Kneeling Forward on One Knee' ---> 'Swearing Herself to the Viewer's Service'

I think about it for a bit, before metaphorically shrugging and deciding to be a little ambitious and set myself up as the hero of the story here, just in case I somehow wasn't already despite all the tropes.

To that end, I replace 'Kneeling Forward on One Knee' with 'Swearing Herself to (James Jordanson's) Service.' Well, 'hero' might be a strong word, heh.

Arma stands up and my phone tilts in my hands to track her. The hallway seems to thin and shrink around her, bare brick replaced with plastered wall wooden beam. The lamps disappear as well, replaced with natural light from the windows.

Concurrently, most of Arma's skirt shrinks up into itself until it doesn't even reach her knees and it falls to ride on her hips,. All the gold trimming of her outfits is replaced with intricate filigree, and she's now wearing what seems to be a string bikini if one were to replace the strings with silvery chain. Likewise, her crown-braid falls into a pair of twin-braids that fall to her breasts and some fur cuffs appear on her biceps.

Arma's crown seems to grow larger and more intricate and she gazes down at me with a solemn, gentle face. She cocks her hips just slightly to one side as her raised hand falls to rest beside them, and... that's it.

Hm. Visually speaking, she doesn't look like she's swearing much of anything: Her pose is a lot more neutral than I expected. I'll just have to trust the Prompt that my change has taken effect, I suppose. Maybe I should do something more physically overt if I want to see her shift?

Or maybe it's already fine: Ostensibly there is an Amazon Princess in front of me swearing to serve me so I should be set right?

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(princess-amazon, pink hair, braided hair, innocent expression, tilted head, one hand forward, swearing herself to the viewer's service, fur bikini, modest skirt, tiara, inside a castle hallway)

[AN: I waffled a fair bit about what to drop here to help this along. In the end, I decided to pair the obvious change with a less obvious change, and the less obvious change (our preceding chapter) with a more obvious change.]

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