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Might as well! by Avidguy

Chapter 7 in Her Promise

It's not like you are exactly on schedule anyways, and you do feel a bit nervous about getting back on the road again. Walking around might help sooth your nerves. You're surprised that at least from the outside the bathroom looks like it might be relatively clean. Not the best,...

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Right turn by Avidguy

Chapter 3 in Her Promise

You head down this direction. You know your parents visited the church more than anything, and the driveway is worn in a way that looks like there were more left turns out of it than right. That, and a right turn is easier, you don't have to cut across the road. The road's comple...

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It's as if she would have taken that right turn by Avidguy

Chapter 8 in Her Promise

Nah, you can just check in the car by Avidguy

Chapter 7 in Her Promise

"But... I do need to get going." And with that, you swing yourself into your grandparents automobile and buckle in. Checking yourself in the rear view mirror and seeing you still look perfect, you realize how silly you were to worry. "Next stop, the city! Here we go! ... Uh... r...

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Thank him and pass on the offer by Avidguy

Chapter 6 in Her Promise

Standing there for a moment and weighing your options, you finally decide that you just can't take him up on it. "I'm sorry" you say in your sincere, apologetic voice. "I really just don't have the time. Thank you so much for your help though! I mean it!" An obvious look of dis...

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Whatever he wants by Avidguy

Chapter 8 in Her Promise

"U-okay" you meekly agree. "Whatever you want." *But what in the world would he want?* you think to yourself, only conjuring up two types of police activities: noble police fighting crime and corrupt police extorting money. "I knew you were smart. Don't worry, this ride won't...

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No! by Avidguy

Chapter 8 in Her Promise

Overcome by a wave of self-assurance, you muster up as much courage as you can and hold yourself proudly. "This isn't right! If I've done something wrong, then I've done something wrong. If I haven't, I haven't. So... take me wherever I need to be taken!" The officer chuckle...

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Flag down the police officer by Avidguy

Chapter 7 in Her Promise

"Excuse me?" you begin in your normal, sweet voice, unheard by pretty much anyone around you. "um... excuse me! Officer!" you exclaim louder in a pathetic but higher pitched tone. The officer turns around and walks toward you and you let out a sigh of relief. He appears to look.....

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Dart blindly forward by Avidguy

Chapter 7 in Her Promise

Shaking off the frozen fear, you dash forward, breaking out of the grasp and darting past the rest of the crowd that was crossing. With a glance back, you scan the sidewalk but realize you do not know the face of who you should stay away from. Gulping and questioning your decisio...

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Decide against it and just wait by Avidguy

Chapter 7 in Her Promise

(more to come)

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