Obey! It's Common Sense

Obey! It's Common Sense

The Champion of the Goddess of Order

Chapter 1 by MindGuy MindGuy

[Author's Note: This is an original story that doesn't take place in any existing fictional property; I just had a fun idea for a story and said 'Eh, why not? I'm gonna write it'... Also whenever you see Bold Text that means that the protagonist is giving an order. I hope you enjoy it :)]

"FUCK ME!"

My name is Jack Knox, I'm a man with black hair, age 22 and a height of 1.80 m. My parents sadly passed away, so I've been living completely on my own for these couple of months.

The good news is that I managed to get a job at this big shipping company, the bad news is that I'M LATE!

I'm running as fast as I can to the building, it's not that far from my apartment but FUCK! I can't risk being late AGAIN!

(sigh)

I know that I shouldn't complain but sometimes I wish that I could just fly away somewhere else. And I don't say it only because of my job.

I also tried to date and be more social over the years but I haven't really managed to make a friendship that fully stuck with me, much less having a romantic relationship (It also doesn't help the fact that I moved a lot so from one place to another).

Honestly, the best part of my day-to-day is that after I finish work, I can just sit back and enjoy watching some fantasy/sci-fi shows, and also play some games. I always loved the concept of going to another world and fighting to become more powerful...

But I stopped daydreaming, as I arrived at the building entrance. I say to myself "Ok! Hopefully, they won't notice that I arrived a bit late."


In another plane of existence...

We can just see the vast view of space, planets, and stars floating in this seemingly infinite universe. However, our focus is on this floating island with a white temple. This island is inside a magical field that allows it to float and travel through space without being able to be perceived or located.

Inside the temple, we hear a female voice saying "SHIT! This is bad!"

Someone's panicking in one of the temple rooms. In this room we see small stars floating giving light to the room; in the middle, there's a crystal ball, and we also see an attractive woman walking fast from one side to another.

We can see that she's a redhead woman, she has a tiny star floating above her head all the time, her eyes are golden and she's only wearing white robes with golden accessories and white shoes. As she walks in panic from one side of the room to another, her breasts bounce from side to side thanks to how fast she's moving

She says to herself "The last one of the older gods is dead! FUCK! What's gonna happen now? I'm still new in this whole thing, I don't even know-"

Before she could continue, the crystal ball began to shine. Some incomprehensible sounds come out of it; well, incomprehensible for us, she's actually able to understand it. The crystal ball is sending her an otherwordly message.

She has a surprised expression as she says "My mission is to get a champion.... To bring... Balance?"

She then thinks about it for a moment, she never had a champion before. But after enough thinking, the redhead knew that if that's what she had to do, she had no other option.

...

We later see the redhead in another room of the white temple, this room has a big summoning circle and we can see the woman casting some spells. The circles begin to shine and rings of light begin to appear at her hands.

She says to herself "Okay, I think this is the correct spell... Now let's see who's the perfect match."

The spell begins to search outside of this realm into others. She thought that the person she was searching for would be close by, but to her surprise, it seemed that it was located in another world far away.

She seems a bit confused and says "Really? Not even someone nearby?" After rolling her eyes, she just sighs and says "Fine, I guess I'll need to find the scroll with the other teleportation spell."


"God! I'm so tired of this job!"

That's what I thought as I was walking back home, the manager saw that I was late so he made me do extra work organizing a bunch of boxes inside the warehouse to compensate for not being on time... Even tho I arrived NOT EVEN 10 MINUTES LATE.

Either way, I returned home and prepared some dinner dinner; at least eating some nice food helps me to get my mood up.

I'm eating in my living room while I watch a fantasy movie. After that, I decided to chill and drink some coffee on the terrace of my apartment.

But then I begin to feel... Weird; like I'm lighter or something, that's when I look down and realize that I'm slowly floating up.

I begin to panic as I scream "WHAT THE HELL!?" I dropped my cup and it shattered on the floor. I then asked concerned "What the fuck was in that coffee?"

That's when I look up and see a dot of light in the sky that is getting closer and closer, it's a light ray from outer space at high velocity coming towards me. So I just screamed "AAAAAH!" As the ray struck me, making me disappear; my clothes, underwear, and watch all fell to the floor after my body disappeared.


We return to seeing the redhead casting a lot of energy at the summoning circle, she's focusing while thinking to herself "Please work! Please work! Please work!"

And that's when we see a sphere of energy floating in the middle of the circle, shining its light brighter and brighter until she sees someone manifesting and appearing right in front of her.

...

Meanwhile, I was screaming while seeing lights moving so fast since I was flying at high speed, but then... Everything went dark... Well, that was until the light returned and I just appeared at the center of this room. I then fell on a flat floor.

I'm feeling dizzy, confused, and my body hurts a bit since I fell on my back. I slowly open my eyes and say out loud "Ow... What... What the fuck just happened?"

That's when I heard a female voice celebrating and saying something like "YES! I DID IT! You're here and you're not even missing a limb!"

I then slowly turn around as I try to use my arms and legs to get back up. But just as I'm slowly standing, my vision becomes less blurry and returns to normal; that's when I realize "Wait... WHY I'M NAKED?" I'm completely nude without any clothes or underwear.

Then I slowly look in front of me and I see a woman with red hair, golden eyes, white clothes, nice curves, and... Wait, does she have a star floating on top of her head?

The woman then tells me with excitement "My name is Alice, and you are lucky enough to be in the presence of one of the newer gods also known as the Goddess of Order... You've been chosen to be my champion, you will bring balance to the world of Calis!"

I then blink a couple of times in silence as I try to process what's happening, I just close my eyes, take my palm to my face, and ask myself "Fuck... How hard did I hit my head?"

Next Chapter

Want to support CHYOA?
Disable your Ad Blocker! Thanks :)