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Chapter 2
by MindGuy
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The Goddess of Order
I'm still trying to wrap my head around this weird dream, at least I have a nice view of a gorgeous redhead goddess, and her curves look amazing; but I gotta admit, it feels kinda embarrassing being nude with an erection in front of a woman who I don't know.
I ask her "If I'm aware that this is a dream, does that mean I can control everything around me?"
Alice is a bit confused, but then she uses her hand to pull my ear. I scream "OW!" Then she tells me "Stop mocking me! I'm not a fucking dream, you have to show more respect when you're in front of a goddess."
After she lets go of my ear, that's when I realized... Her touch, I even touch my hands to make sure... They feel real...
I then begin to panic as I place my hands on my head and think "No... This can't... IS THIS REAL!?"
While I'm entering in panic, Alice sees me and then says "Oh right! You're not from this world, I guess I should explain..."
Alice uses her magic to project a 3D image of a planet, it looks similar to Earth but the continents look different. She then explains, "This is the world of Calis, a planet filled with forces of nature both good and evil, chaos and order; my role as a goddess is to take care of my assigned purpose, that being 'Order', but I'm one of the newer gods and sadly the last older god passed away..."
I then interrupt her and I ask "Wait! WAIT! What do you mean by older gods? How- How the hell does a god die?" Alice then rolls her eyes and tells me "If you LET ME EXPLAIN IT, he passed away because we are entities who work on cycles, the universe changes as the millenniums go on and on, and us gods are part of those changes... My role is to replace the previous God of Order, and my first mission assigned to me is to get a champion."
I confusedly ask "A champion?" Alice then answers me "Yes! The universe and destiny have chosen you to become my champion, and your new role as the champion of the Goddess of Order is to... Well... Bring order to the world of Calis from all its dangers."
After I heard that I immediately thought to myself "HOW THE HELL IS THIS REAL? Have I lost my mind or something? Did I watch too much fantasy?" but then I told her "Wait, wait... Miss I'm honored, but I'm a normal ass dude, How in the hell I'm going to even put up a fight against anything remotely dangerous without dying?"
That is when Alice smugly smiles and tells me "Well... If you accept to become my champion, the universe will gift you with a powerful ability of your choosing."
I then blink surprised as I ask "Say what now?"
And then Alice just grabs my hand and takes me to another room.
Alice takes me to her library where I can see the outside through her windows, I get surprised and think "Are we FUCKING FLOATING IN SPACE!?"
Alice then searches at her desk "C'mon... It should be here... HERE!"
She pulls out a white crystal, it's quite big (like the size of my head), and tall but thick (like my di-); Alice then explains to me "This is a Mana Crystal infused with cosmic energy, they require a lot of energy so the universe can grant you an ability, they're quite rare so you'll only have one shot at this-"
I interrupt "Wait! But what exactly do I have to-"
She then gets pissed off and screams "LET ME FINISH!" I then step back, get quiet out of fear, and then she just smiles and continues "As I was saying, these crystals are rare because it takes a lot of energy to gift your mortal body with one ability, plus your body would disintegrate if you try to wish for more than one, so don't do it... Basically, if you accept being my champion I'll use this crystal to gift you 1 powerful ability of your choosing."
This is quite insane, all my life being a fan of ridiculous fantasy stories and now it seems that my dumbass is in one right now. If I accept that would be a goodbye to everything I've known... But on the other hand, I would have powers in a new world where I could finally accomplish this dream that I had all my life.
After enough thinking, I say "Okay, if this is my destiny and you promise to gift me with a powerful ability... Then I accept to become your champion, my goddess."
Alice smiles after I say that, shakes my hand, and says "Perfect! Thank you! You're not gonna regret it, you're gonna be the best champion of champions."
Holy shit, her hand grip is strong! I say "Okay! But please! You're crushing my hand!" She then let go of my hand and said "Oh sorry, I think I got too excited." I then rub my hand and sarcastically tell her "Yeah, I think I notice it."
We then return to the room where Alice summoned me, now with the Mana Crystal.
I stand in front of Alice while she tells me "OK, now... You have to tell me what powerful ability you want..." I then think to myself "Oh shit!... There are so many options that could be useful."
But then Alice adds "Oh! I almost forgot, there're some rules that need to be followed..." After she said that, I thought "Of course, it was too good to be true."
"There are only 3 rules: The first one is that you can't use your power to harm me or any other god, as deities have the best senses in the universe, so we can neutralize the effect of any powerful abilities the instant that we detect someone trying to attack us; the second one is that you can't wish to have the powers of an actual god for yourself, and the third one is that since you're my champion your power has to be related to me, and after I approve it, I'll cast the spell on you," Alice explained.
I then ask "Wait, what do you mean related to you?"
Alice continues to explain "Think about it this way: the Goddess of Nature grants powers related to nature, the God of War has abilities that are helpful in battles, the Goddess of Time could grant an ability that affects time, etc... And I'm the Goddess of Order, so you have to chose an ability that helps you bring order."
I'm a bit confused by that so I ask "Bring order? Like to help people or..."
She tells me "Not necessarily, order is neutral, is not god nor evil... Order helps to keep things stable and stops things from becoming unbalanced, all your future missions will involve keeping things in order, so you have to choose a power that helps you do that."
That makes me think more deeply about this. "Keep things in order?" Maybe telekinesis so I can control things with my mind... or hypnosis so I can control people, I can give ORDERS... But the only issue would be that if someone is faster than me or if someone can attack me while I'm sleeping if that person sees me as a threat or enemy, I could get killed before I give an order...
Wait a minute...
What if I wasn't perceived as a threat? You don't resist or defend yourself from something you don't consider a threat, that would make my orders more effective... Maybe my power could focus on how everyone perceives ME, my power could maybe help me alter their common sense... Their perception... Wait! I think I got it!
I tell Alice "OK... I think that I know what power I want." She then smiles and says "Well that was fast, which ability do you want?"
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The Champion of the Goddess of Order
What would you do if you had the power of absolute control? Follow this (original) story of Jack Knox, a man who got reincarnated in another world with an interesting power. (Art by Ie)
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Updated on Jan 1, 2025
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Created on May 14, 2024
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