Jane Shepard, Commander of the Normandy

Jane Shepard, Commander of the Normandy

How Many Wrong Ways Can it Go?

Chapter 1 by Largetalons69 Largetalons69

Jane Shepard lived a life of peace, or at least she had done so for the past few months. Before being called up by one of Earth's high-ranking captains and the human ambassador, her service in the military had gone just as well as the majority of her life. There was always someone who needed their skull cracked or a good smack across the face to hopefully knock some sense into them, and every once in awhile there were cadets and officers who looked down upon the way she treated some of her female compatriots. She'd served some time guarding and escorting carriers to other planets and most panned out fine. But there was one mission on Akuze that no one would've expected would take such a violent turn. Batarian slavers--dog-faced, four-eyed freaks--ambushed several cargo shipments and small fleet soared through the skyline of the major base she was stationed in. Mainly because they were taken by surprise, many human officers and soldiers lost their lives. Most were under her command; little was really known about Jane's background nor how she became a commander. Some people looked into it, but were only met with wasted time and stress. Her record was spotless, minus a few scuffles with subordinates and superiors when she was first acclimating to military environment. More so, she was recommended by two different Commanders at the time before she was promoted. One by a Mishka Bruin, mother of two, and another female commander named Jennifer Van Hale, a recent mother--she even sent the recommendation 6 months prior to birthing her child. Coincidences, nonetheless.

Ambassador Udina made the call and Jane found herself on board a small transport ship leaving Earth, soon she'd be arriving aboard the Normandy, one of the best ships alliance fleet and it was ran by Captain Anderson. She'd crossed paths with him a time or two, but they were mostly in passing. She'd taken a look at his record, impressive lists of missions and accomplishments and the leadership to go with it. Obviously, she had no clue what this could mean for her. There would be no concern of trouble, at least to begin, but something didn't quite sit right with her, and she hated being kept in the dark.

Luckily for her this transport ship wouldn't land on the moon for another hour. The transport was a small shuttle consisting of four crew members, two pilots in the foremost section and two others would be positioned in the holding area where she would be. The two in holding were both women, one was about her age at 30 and the other was more than likely closing in on 20. Both were extremely attractive and it almost seemed to Jane that they were there more for her comfort than they were trained soldiers. Lt. Marlow was oldest of the two and Pvt. Cupp was the youngest. Marlow had a very distinct look about her, all business and an sly grin creeping across her face. Cupp on the other hand couldn't help but reveal her cards far too early, her head only came up to Jane's breasts when they both stood at full height and her body size seemed to only be half of hers. It was also very noticeable to the commander that the younger girls trousers were darker between her legs as they sporadically twitched every few seconds as she stood next to voluptuous redhead. She walked up to the commander and commented on her natural beauty and that she'd heard all about her tremendous strength and endurance.

Okay, this was clearly meant to be some sort of setup, that...or these girls really don't know how to act the part.

PARAGON: Let them work their magic, someone obviously paid them to do this and it wouldn't hurt for them to get a little taste of real-world experience.

RENEGADE: This is embarrassing, even for you, get these sluts on their knees already and blow your load inside them. Lord knows they'd be better off carrying your offspring than being in this line of work.

NEUTRAL: I should go.

NOTES: IF YA'LL HAVE ANY REQUESTS OR SUGGESTIONS, FEEL FREE TO LEAVE A COMMENT OR SEND ME A MESSAGE!

NOTES, Pt.2: Story Threads that consist of 5 Likes will Continue with whatever Choices have the most points, More PARAGON options will produce more Paragon options, vise-versa with RENEGADE. If it get to a point where neither has the upper hand then I will continue the story thread with NEUTRAL options. If a single Thread gets 10+ likes, then I'll post threads for each outcome, like I've already done for the first chapter of Shepard's story.

How Does Shepard React?

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