Jane's Ranch Adventure

Jane's Ranch Adventure

What could go wrong?

Chapter 1 by Farkeld Farkeld

Jane looked herself over in the airplane bathroom, touching up her make-up before her flight from Boston landed and she de-planed. 5'4", light skin, freckled face, with short red hair and blue eyes - and she still had her figure from college that had driven the football team crazy. Stepping out of the tiny bathroom, Jane adjusted her new tight jeans and put on her cowboy hat, she figured that if she'd be visiting Texas, she might as well look the part.

Thirty minutes later, Jane stepped off of the plane and found her college friend Lisa waiting for. Although it'd been five years, Lisa didn't seem to have aged a day, she still had her white smile, curly blond hair and bright blue eyes. Soon, they were in a limousine and on their way to the Tyson family ranch, which Lisa's family had run for generations.

Jane and Lisa were met at the entrance of the large estate by Lisa's older sister Elizabeth, who ran the ranch now that their parents had retired to Florida. Elizabeth shared Lisa's blue eyes and blonde hair, but she was about ten years older than Lisa, and that time and motherhood had aged her slightly.

Before they went inside for dinner, Jane noticed a few of the muscular ranchers that were heading home for the day and bit her lip, it was supposed to be a vacation after all.

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As embarrassing as this is, I've only recently figured out how to make this story public. Someone commented that this was an original story, however, it isn't - I've taken the plot from Julien Sorel's "Jane Becomes Livestock" which you can find here:

It's a fantastic story that I encourage you to read.

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