Hyper-Suggestible

Hyper-Suggestible

When hypnotism gets magical the possibilities are limitless

Chapter 1 by Tonyrollo Tonyrollo

This is a spin off story from The Total Humiliation of James by Beckys. Thanks to Becky for letting me use her character and reproducing some of her work here. This story has been set to public and contributions and requests are encouraged! I want this to be as interactive as possible so likes and comments will help decide which chapters get continued and what happens next.

James wasn't a bad guy or somebody who was owed any sort of comeuppance. He had just been unfortunate enough to have earned the scorn of a particularly spiteful witch and was now being punished by her for it.

James had found himself hitting the dating apps hard of late and, as a tall, dark and handsome man with a decent job and well written bio, he soon found himself dating a number of potential partners. It was on one such date that disaster struck in a way he couldn't even have imagined.

His date that fateful day was Rebecca, an exotic looking brunette. He had been attracted to her looks but found her personality a little odd. She claimed to be a witch which he found a little immature and off putting and, when they went back to her place, he found that she really did believe in that superstitious nonsense, Her place was full of mystical looking books, vials containing strange looking liquids and various other trinkets and curious. After sleeping with Rebecca, James decided she wasn't exactly relationship material and to end things there.

The next morning, James received a message from Rebecca who, apparently, had thought the date had gone better than he did and wanted to meet up again. Ghosting wasn't his style so he sent what he considered a very polite and diplomatic message to let her down as gently as he could. From the response he received, it seemed it wasn't diplomatic enough.

"Guess What, jerk. You don't get to fuck a witch then ditch her without getting cursed. You are now about to experience a world of humiliation you never would have even believed possible. And here is how..."

James' initial reaction was to thank his lucky stars he had dodged a bullet with such a crazy person. But he did begin to feel a little strange. Was there any possibility he could have genuinely been cursed? He waited for the next message that was currently being typed with a strange sense of trepidation.

"I have put a spell on you to make you hypersuggestible to hypnosis. Actually it is more like hyperhyperhypersuggestible. If anyone so much as attempts hypnosis on you then you will do everything they say and believe everything they tell you completely."

James read the crazy sounding text back a second time wondering what Rebecca was talking about. Witchcraft? Hypnotism? He had really dodged a bullet with that girl. He decided to just forget about it and move on with his day. But, as he would soon find out, the curse on him was very real.

What's next?

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