Freezing time

A magic gift for a magic time

Chapter 1 by Robby roberts Robby roberts

It was a cold November afternoon, and I was on my way home from school, it started raining. The rain soon turned to a thunderstorm, and I could barely see as I drove. I soon began to worry about wrecking, and then I hydroplaned right before I crossed a bridge. I flew off into the frigid water below, and couldn’t seem to escape the car as it starts to sink into the river. All of a sudden, there was a bright flash of light all around me, and everything went quiet. Lightning had struck my vehicle. The shock from the lightning made me pass out.

When I came to, I was in my bedroom. Turns out, after I had been rescued from the water, I had little to no injury. I was in the hospital three days, and while I was there, Maggie and Kami had come to visit me. But, in a coma state, I missed the two beautiful girls. I’m the meantime, since I was alright, life would start back to normal.

Note**** :This is the first story I’ve written. No, it’s not the greatest. Yes, the chapters aren’t the most in depth. This won’t be one of the great stories. Just my first one.

If you want to start a new storyline/ add chapters, you are more than welcomed to and encouraged.

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