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Chapter 9 by Marsalad Marsalad

What is the enhancement going to be?

A 'nursing' experience for one, but for the other...

When James entered Room 101, someone was quickly fixing her clothes with her back facing the door.

"Uh...hello?"

"Yes?"

The blonde-haired woman swiveled around her chair to face him with a warm smile.

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"Ah, you must be James Gardner, correct? My name is Akagi Ritsuko. I'm from Neon Genesis Evangelion, if you ever want to get me as a character.

I myself am going to be your enhancer for this session. Please, take a seat."

Ritsuko waved a hand to an empty chair on the side of the table.

James took the chair and sat their nervously as Ritsuko typed something on her computer.

He scanned the office for a hint of how the enhancement would go, but their weren't any tools or informal posters that might give him a picture of the procedure.

"Are you new here? At the emporium, I mean."

"What? Oh, yeah...I am. How did you know?"

Ritsuko chuckled with her eyes still on the computer screen.

"I can see it from a mile away with how you're acting so nervously...and you also only signed up for a standard upgrade."

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Ritsuko explained whlie sliding the white lab coat off her shoulder, revealing her sleeveless purple turtleneck shirt and, more importantly, her armpits.

"What's wrong with that?"

James asked, trying and failing to not glance at the more suggestive clothing of the doctor...or enhancer, in this case.

"Oh, nothing is wrong.

It's just, that's how everyone starts—at first, they are all nervous to change their body...but once you realize how great the enchantments are, they come back for more.

And now...it's time for your first enhancing experience..."

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Ritsuko leaned forward as she unzipped the middle of the turtleneck shirt.

James had no idea what kind of shirt would have a zipper in the middle, but when Ritsuko's huge tits bounced free in front of his eyes, he found it hard to complain.

Ritsuko smiled and slowly removed the coat and shirt entirely, leaving her top bare.

She shifted over to the bed in the back of the office and gestured at James to join her as well.

"Oh, I nearly forgot. Make sure to take your clothes off first."

James hesitated.

"All of them?"

"All of them."

Ritsuko nodded and pat her knees.

"Then you can lean here on your mommy's lap."

James wasted no time in taking off his clothes and scuttling over to the hospital bed.

Ritsuko giggled softly and handed a pill.

"What's this?"

"It's for your enhancement. Take it and lie down."

After a brief pause, James took the pill. He was never good at swallowing pills, but this one was designed to be easily wolfed down.

"Very good."

Ritsuko guided James's head onto her lap.

Her massive tits naturally touched on his fave and chest.

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Ritsuko ran her fingers through James's hair like a loving mother with one hand, while gently closing her fist around his erect cock with the other.

"The enhancement itself will carry out for 3 hours by the pill you just took. It will strengthen your stamina and fertility, including the size of your cock.

However, for the pill to do its work, your testicles and cock must be stimulated like this..."

Ritsuko slowly began rubbing the erect cock in her hand. James grunted from the pleasure, his fave covered by the

"Now, be a good boy and suck on mommy's tits."

It was an order James was never going to refuse.

As soon as Ritsuko gave the offer, he cupped the pink areola into his mouth and began sucking away like a starved newborn.

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"Aaahng..."

Ritsuko shuddered slightly with a heated moan. She looked down at James with a loving gaze, slowly stroking his cock to stimulate it.

"Once your enhancement is done, we can check how well's it is done together..."

The enhancer whispered with a tinge of giggle.

Meanwhile, at the right wing of the center...

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"This should be enough..."

Valentine from Skullgirls flicked the edge of the syringe in her hand. She was in a dimmly-lit room of the Character Rehabilitation center.

It was where, after a check-up, a malfunctioned character got their errors sorted out one way or another.

If they couldn't fix the errors, then there was only one future awaiting the malfunctioned charaters—getting thrown away and eliminated from the word.

The one-eyed nurse walked over to her current patient with the syringe in hand.

"Now, let's check one last time.

Currently, you have a small malfunction in your obedience chip. This usually happens when, one way or another, a character become aware of the modifications implanted in them."

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"..."

Saber sat silently in her spot.

For one, the restraints were strong enough to prevent her from moving an inch.

For second, she understood this was the best choice for her.

"The chip usually supress the actual, humane will inside you...but sometimes, a defective product like you try to break free..."

Valentine poked a finger between Saber's breasts. Saber grunted slighlty as the nurse slid her finger between her cleavage.

"So it is my job to make sure that naughty characters like you don't forget your place; an obident servants for the real humans of this world."

Although Valentine's monolog suggested she was fully devoted to her words, Saber couldn't help but notice a tinge of resentment in her voice.

"At least you...you are smart enough to request that I do a proper job with you. Once I'm finished, you'll never, ever dream of having your free will ever again. Understand?"

Valentine glared at her patient.

Saber, after a brief paused, nodded the best she could.

Valentine bit down on her lower lips.

"...very good."

She muttered in a ever-so slightly trembling voice.

"One last check. Try and break out with all of your strength."

"Hmmmph!!"

Saber put all of her strength into her arms and legs.

She did her best to pull away at the cuffs and break free, but after a few attempts, it was clear that she wouldn't be able to break free no matter what.

"Good. We are going to reset your obedience chip to fix the error.

During that process, you'll temporarily be free from the chip's effect...which would most likely cause you to make a scene.

Hopefully, you won't break out. I don't want to write another report explaining why I had to dispose another character..."

With the explanation done, Valentine poked the needle into Saber's tits and injected the blue fluid. It was a small present she had prepared for the patient.

"Alright then, let's begin. On the count of five. Five..."

As Valentine slowly counted down from the numbers, Saber closed her blindfolded eyes and thought about James.

"Four..."

'If the obedience chip stops working...would I recent you?'

"Three..."

'I hope not. I want to believe that my feelings for you are real, not something manifested by a chip.'

"Two..."

'But if it is...then I'm glad I'm taking this surgery for you, my master...'

"One..."

Valentine activated the machine.

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"—————MMMMPPGGGHHHH!!!?!?!"

Saber shuddered violently against the restraints as unfathomable pain coursed through her mind and body.

She desperately tried to run, free herself from the bindings, but as she had checked herself several times before...it was useless.

Valentine watched a few steps away from her patient, screaming and twitching in the rehabilitation machine.

"Idiot..."

The nurse closed her eyes and looked away.

"...whoever your master is, I hope he is a damn good one..."


A/N) Hey, I know authors bere usually don't do this, but I have to ask:

How do you all feel about the stort having some dark elements like this one?

Some of you may know, I have another thread in 'Characters for sale', but I had abandoned it pretty early-on, because I felt the story dipping into too dark territories when most stories here are more light-hearted.

Originally, I took another shot with the intention to keep it that way, but I couldn't help it here as well—for me, the concept of this story is just perfect to slip in some dark fragrants of stories here and there.

So...I want to ask the maybe a dozen of you out there reading my story; do you like this kind of dark elements? Or would you prefer it never appear again?

Leave a comment on the chapter! Thank you, have a good day!

Well, that got dark. How is James doing?

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