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Page Seven
6 panels
[1] Jen’s POV. Par stands alongside the bed, looking down at her. The bastard has changed into an evening jacket and bow tie, and is holding a glass of scotch.
Par: The Kolokol-1 deadens your nerves. Acts as a sort of mental suppressant.
Par: Between that and the power-dampeners, you cannot even maintain your She-Hulk physique. Which is a tragedy. But, even so…
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[2] Looking over Par’s shoulder at Jen on the bed, too woozy to even struggle properly.
Par: …having one’s way with a superheroine, even in her more mortal form, counts for something, doesn’t it?
Jen: (Her words blurry) Kill you…I’ll…
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[3] Looking across the bed, over Jen towards Par, as he bends over and runs his hand alongside her face. Jen can’t help cringing.
Par: Oh, I’m sure you’ll want to. And the Invisible Girl—
Jen: (weakly) …Woman…
Par: …whom I have secured in a similar manner, will likewise share your desire.
Par: Fortunately – thanks to these marvelous power dampeners my Russian friends supplied…
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[4] Close on Par’s leering face, as he reacts to a sound out of frame.
Par: … there won’t be a thing either of you can do about it.
General: [out of frame] Fortunately, there is something I can do.
Par: Eh?
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[5] Par’s POV. The General has entered the room and is closing the door behind him.
Par: General Eng? What are you doing here? I ordered you to oversee the capture of the remaining women--
General: I don’t think that’s going to happen, actually.
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[6] Jen’s POV from the bed. The General is crossing the room towards Par, who has turned and opened the top drawer of a dresser. A pistol is visible inside the drawer.
Par: I don’t have time for this foolishness.
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