She-Hulk and the Lady Liberators in Marinmer

I loved this story, except the villains were complete morons. So I decided to re-write it and spice things up a bit. The first 8 pages or so are mostly unchanged from the original except I shortened some of the boring bits. Oh, and I swapped out Thundra for Hellcat. Because Hellcat!

This is a work of fanfiction. All characters property of Marvel Comics, no claim of copyright is made, no profit is being made from this work.

This story contains scenes of ****, ****, ****, and other unpleasantries. If that’s not your thing, best to tap out now. These are fantasies only – I do not condone any of the above in real life and neither should you.

And yeah, I know these types of peril fanfics are usually written in prose, but I wanted to try writing it as a comic script. If anyone wants to try their hand at illustrating a frame/page/anything, please feel free! Let me know when you post and I’ll link to it.

Visual Notes

She-Hulk: I refer to her as She-Hulk when she’s big & green and Jen when she’s not. As She-Hulk she’s wearing the purple-and-white crop top and bicycle shorts. When she changes to Jennifer, her top comes down to her waist and her pants to knee-length.

The Invisible Woman: this version of her tight-fitting blue jumpsuit has black gloves and boots and leaves her arms bare. Her blonde hair falls past her shoulders.

Valkyrie: the Asgardian Warrior Brunnhilde. Tall and muscular, her black armor features steel boob cones but leaves her arms & legs bare. Two braids of blonde hair fall to her waist. She wears her enchanted sword Dragonfang.

Hellcat: Patsy sports her usual yellow jumpsuit with a blue hood, gloves, boots, and sash. Her thick red hair cascades to mid-back.

Jadzia: Skrull Shapeshifter. In her most common human form she’s a young woman with a trim athletic figure, modest breasts, short black hair, and brown eyes, wearing a t-shirt and tight jeans. In her true Skrull form she looks much the same but with olive-green skin and pointy ears above that split-jawline they all have.

The Winter Guard consists of:

Red Guardian: a muscular man in a red jumpsuit with white gloves & boots, round red shield with a white star.

Crimson Dynamo: red power armor with weird gears for shoulders

Darkstar: hot redhead in a black jumpsuit with yellow boot & gloves

Ursa Major: just an enormous brown bear