She-Hulk and the Lady Liberators in Marinmer

I loved this story, except the villains were complete morons. So I decided to re-write it and spice things up a bit. The first 8 pages or so are mostly unchanged from the original except I shortened some of the boring bits. Oh, and I swapped out Thundra for Hellcat. Because Hellcat!

This is a work of fanfiction. All characters property of Marvel Comics, no claim of copyright is made, no profit is being made from this work.

This story contains scenes of rape, torture, abuse, and other unpleasantries. If that’s not your thing, best to tap out now. These are fantasies only – I do not condone any of the above in real life and neither should you.

And yeah, I know these types of peril fanfics are usually written in prose, but I wanted to try writing it as a comic script. If anyone wants to try their hand at illustrating a frame/page/anything, please feel free! Let me know when you post and I’ll link to it.

Visual Notes

She-Hulk: I refer to her as She-Hulk when she’s big & green and Jen when she’s not. As She-Hulk she’s wearing the purple-and-white crop top and bicycle shorts. When she changes to Jennifer, her top comes down to her waist and her pants to knee-length.

The Invisible Woman: this version of her tight-fitting blue jumpsuit has black gloves and boots and leaves her arms bare. Her blonde hair falls past her shoulders.

Valkyrie: the Asgardian Warrior Brunnhilde. Tall and muscular, her black armor features steel boob cones but leaves her arms & legs bare. Two braids of blonde hair fall to her waist. She wears her enchanted sword Dragonfang.

Hellcat: Patsy sports her usual yellow jumpsuit with a blue hood, gloves, boots, and sash. Her thick red hair cascades to mid-back.

Jadzia: Skrull Shapeshifter. In her most common human form she’s a young woman with a trim athletic figure, modest breasts, short black hair, and brown eyes, wearing a t-shirt and tight jeans. In her true Skrull form she looks much the same but with olive-green skin and pointy ears above that split-jawline they all have.

The Winter Guard consists of:

Red Guardian: a muscular man in a red jumpsuit with white gloves & boots, round red shield with a white star.

Crimson Dynamo: red power armor with weird gears for shoulders

Darkstar: hot redhead in a black jumpsuit with yellow boot & gloves

Ursa Major: just an enormous brown bear