feedback

Hello readers and writers.

I would like some feedback for my new story (The Hallow Game)

Please send me a message (Not in the comments) of things you would like to see, or things I should add.

some of the chapters are sent in from my ghost writers, so if there are errors there. I will let them know.

All feedback is welcome, if your going to be negative. (please add something positive as well)

Please no hateful comments please.