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Chapter 17 by Orpheus Orpheus

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Why not? (Overview of Soul Links and an experimental 'Author's Corner' segment, no new story content here so feel free to skip!)

Jessica Marshall, Rank 2

  • Much more likely to initiate and accept conversation with Leon. This effect is permanent.
  • Will no longer notice Leon's camera unless it is mentioned by him or someone else.
  • Will agree to one arrangement of Leon's choosing, as long as it is not (initially) perceived as sexual.
  • Is now comfortable with wearing less layers of clothing around Leon. She'll still wear heavy layers if other people can see her, due to her trauma.
  • Will now spend her free time with Leon whenever he asks, unless she has prior commitments.

Lily Fairchild, Rank 1

  • Much more likely to initiate and accept conversation with Leon. This effect is permanent.
  • Will no longer notice Leon's camera unless it is mentioned by him or someone else.

Marlene Fairchild, Rank 1

  • Much more likely to initiate and accept conversation with Leon. This effect is permanent.
  • Will no longer notice Leon's camera unless it is mentioned by him or someone else.

(Author's Corner)

We need to get Holly in the story soon, now that she's our cover girl... I'd have liked Jessie to be the cover girl, but none of her darn pictures were framed quite as brilliantly as that excellent Holly art.

To be honest with you guys, it's a surprise to me that I found character art I liked in the first place. I thought that if readers wanted art (well, one reader, but hey no one else voted!), I was going to have to settle for discarding my vision of the characters. But in my opinion I think things worked out pretty well! There's some more art hidden away that I may add to the character galleries later...

I didn't originally plan to extend Jessie's scenes so much, but I really enjoy writing her. I think my characterization skills could use some work though. I've reread and slightly tweaked my old chapter's more than I care to admit, in an effort to make them more organic, but the soap opera shenanigans always seem to find their way back.

I was worried all of this character building (and admitted rambling) would scare people off, so I can't tell you how glad I am to see a few familiar names still reading the new chapters.

There might be a slight decrease in output over the weekend due to some unforeseen medical issues, which is a real shame because I wanted to churn out a lot of chapters! We'll see what I can do though.

Until next time, enjoy the story!

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