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Chapter 8

What happened?

Unlucky guess

“Here’s what I think is going on.” The concierge removed her glasses, her eyes piercing into the couple’s. “I think you two wanted to do some hanky-panky in our hotel. And instead of renting a room, you stripped off your clothes in order to get pity from us and to pretend that you got locked out of your rooms. Am I correct?”

“No, I swear, that’s not what’s going on. It’s nothing but a big, dumb, stupid accident!” Pleaded Mary. “Just give us one last chance.”

The concierge sat silently, contemplating her options. “…I’ll know that I will regret this, but when did you two arrive?”

“Earlier tonight.” The two said in unison.

“…hmm. There weren’t a lot of check ins around that time. Just give me your room number. If that number happens to be one of the few check ins, I’ll guess we’ll know more.”

A glimmer of hope showed itself on Mary’s and Steven’s face. “Terrific! Just tell them the number, Jessica.”

Mary smile disappeared immediately. “Tyrone, I thought you remembered.”

The concierge stared back at them in contemplation.

Sweat dripping from his back, he stammered, “…1181?”

The concierge leaned over the desk. “Boy, we don’t have odd numbers in this place. SECURITY!”

Their faces turning pale at the sight of the security guards, the two decided to flee from the lobby. The two sprinted away, only for one of the guards to catch up and gram Mary’s wrist. She tried resisting, but couldn’t free herself.

“Let go of me, you motherloving piece of goshdarn doo doo!”


“…Motherloving piece of goshdarn doo doo?” Asked Cassie in confusion.

“Okay, not my exact words, but I don’t want you to learn those words.” Blushed Mary.

“Mom, I’m eighteen. I’ve know those words since I was ten when dad showed me his R-rated movie collection.”

“M-moving on.” Chuckled Steven, Mary staring daggers at him.


Seeing Mary get captured, Steven dashed back. He lowered his head, and ran straight into the guard’s stomach. He practically blew his lungs out, and crouched on the floor. Mary finally free, the fled towards further down the lobby.

They saw that they had multiple options to flee towards. They could take the stairs back up again, they could go to the spa and indoor pool, or they could go to the amphitheater.

Where do they go?

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