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Chapter 5 by FINN 0815 FINN 0815

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Tokens. Tokens! TOKENS!

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Message from the author: Okay, I should have guessed that. So just click on the link and then vote. Please also tell me if I should give more information about the different perks and of course, I'm happy to answer any questions you may have. I'm just as happy (maybe even more) to accept suggestions for further perks. After that I'll turn my attention to Rose. I won't let her fans down more than twice and then I'll definitely expand the list of potential subjects. Again, if you have an idea that you'd like to see, please let me know.

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Chapter 4

Okay, I don't know, maybe it's the shock of what I'm going to do to my mother, or maybe just the excitement of the MCD and its capabilities, but basically it's only logical to click on what's new and exciting. Not that the prospect of a better life with my family isn't new and exciting, but getting user and subject perks, whatever that is, is compelling enough.

I leave the list of potential subjects with a promise to myself that Rose, as nice and mean as she is, will definitely be my next choice. She has so much potential. But for now...

Welcome Finn Lynchwood! With your collected milestones, you will be given 100 tokens for every 10 points earned at the progress score! With this currency you can now upgrade the profiles of subjects as well as your own profile.

Attention! Each subject has three sockets in which you can anchor perks, that's all. But don't worry. You can change the perks at any time.

Once you have bought a perk, you can use it and swap it around as many times as you like in as many subjects as you like.

Double Attention! The subject will notice any changes in their life, body, or otherwise if you swap the perks around in them or another subject.

Current tokens. 300.

The MCD activated. 100 tokens.

Michelle Lynchwood down to -90. 100 tokens.

Michelle Lynchwood down to -80. 100 tokens.

Okay, that's... unbelievable. But everything about this device is unbelievable. And judging by my mother's behavior... it's no joke. And there's another menu item.

List of user/subject perks: ****https://chyoa.com/chapter/List-of-User-Subject-Perks.1638774

Of course I click on it, after all, that's what I decided to do.

"What the..." When the MCD lights up and shows me what I'm dealing with, I quickly look over at Rose, but behind her curtain it's quiet, no movement. She always sleeps in the fetal position, huddled under her thin blanket in her rickety bed.

Yes, I'm going to activate her next, explore her path and see what can be done.

And what I see on my MCD makes me incredibly excited.

Well shit. It looks like I'll have to grind a bit more. 300 tokens is only enough to buy one thing. I look over at Rose, still sleeping, and imagine what would happen if I bought the Extremely Sensitive Erogenous Zone (Vagina). What would it look like? Would Rose immediately go into a finger-banging frenzy at the slightest touch? Or would it all be focused on me? That seems to be the case with Mom, at least that's what it says in her path. Why would it be any different with Rose? But then again, it would take some time before she would be able to enjoy sex with her adopted son. Okay, fuck, there's still the possibility of ****. But would that work? Not with my ability to subjugate a woman, years of humiliation and neglect enable me to do such things, I think. But more importantly, my family and other people will notice the changes the MCD will bring about in Michelle and soon Rose.

What if Rose's changes are even more ****? A sensitive pussy wouldn't help. And the other perks? That sounds like magic to me. Invisibility, the ability to stop time, pregnancy control.

Okay. One step back. Am I really thinking about having sex with my mother?

Yes. Simple.

And Rose?

The same answer, maybe even more so.

And I don't mind that they will change either. Okay, I only have one example, Michelle, but as I listen to myself, I realize that I am excited to see what will become of my little middle sister once the MCD is ready again.

It's late today and Rose is locked out until the MCD gives me access to her profile again. So I roll over and try to go to sleep.

Tomorrow I will try to get mom to -70, maybe -60. Then I will have at least 400 tokens. That would give me access to pregnancy control, exhibitionism turn on, orgasm denial, extremely sensitive erogenous zones mouth, vagina and hands. Hands? What nonsense. Would that mean Rose's or Mom's hands were as sensitive as a clitoris? I find that hard to believe, but at least it's better than the ability to stop time. But as always, there is only one way to find out if all this is true and I...

Next to me, separated by two curtains and a narrow corridor, I hear Rose breathing quietly. Apparently she has already fallen asleep and even the sound of my bare feet on the cold floor with the thin, rough carpet does not wake her up.

Okay, I know that's creepy, but soon the relationship between me and my little middle sister will change anyway. And besides, Rose is pretty sexy the way she lies there, her slim body under the thin blanket, in the fetal position, long brown hair on her face that goes so well with her deep brown eyes.

Mom lets her put on makeup and with the money she saved up from her birthday and Christmas she bought herself a little nose ring that I still don't really know what to think of, I find her body attractive enough as it is.

Okay, I don't want to compare myself to a prisoner or anything, but hey, somehow it fits. Me and Rose, trapped in a family that doesn't want us, just enough love (and sometimes food) that we don't starve. For fun they let us fight against each other, divide and conquer, and even if it hurts both of us, even if Rose hits more often, harder and meaner to survive, that's exactly what she does. Survive. Just like me.

I respect her, even more than I love Tammy and Jasmine. Even more than I love mom, I like Rose.

I like her, as a brother, a protector and a survivor.

And fuck yes I luft after her... sometimes.

A quiet whimper escapes her throat and I quietly lean forward and pull the blanket tighter over her body.

"Fuck... off..." she murmurs almost incomprehensibly and I have to grin.

I could control her. Or I could work with her.

The MCD on my bed weighs heavy and powerful and that is a decision for later. For tomorrow.


"Good morning," I greet the family. Everyone is there and looks at me angrily. My own fault if I stay awake all evening, thinking and planning about Rose and the Perks.

"Where have you been for so long?" mom asks me reproachfully while Jasmine is already eating her breakfast.

"I overslept," I admit and look at Rose, who, as always, doesn't help. Then I sit down, fend off a few verbal attacks and taunts from Tammy, and eat. Nothing can spoil my mood today. A few more points and I can choose from a list of various perks.

Last night, after I covered Rose up, I realized that the perks I can use on the subjects can actually help me progress. Pregnancy control and the extremely sensitive erogenous zones are something for later, I think, as long as I don't want to turn Mom or Rose on so much that they can't even wear pants anymore. But the orgasm denial is pretty interesting, especially with the energy charge. And maybe I can use exhibitionism for my gains as well. Or I can save the points, get Mom further, then Rose, and buy something more powerful. I can then use that on both Lynchwood women. But I'm claiming something I haven't conquered yet, a very stupid move.

So how do I do that now? Pets. What makes pets behave like pets? What makes pets? As they progress, the subject will take on more and more of the personality of a pet and become dependent on the user. Food, care and training are in the hands of the user. That's what it says in the MCD. Food, care and training. That fits with what I tried yesterday. And besides, I praised her profusely.

Shit, the app seems to be real. That's called the Uber Dick... Well, never mind. First...

"Perfect breakfast Mom, as always," I praise. No points. It really seems that I have to do more, not just the bare minimum.

"I know honey," Michelle replies. "And if you were on time, you would get more out of it. Think of your sister. Jasmine..." Michelle flinches when my hand touches her hair. Soft, clean and freshly washed, it smells of her shampoo. "What..." I snap my fingers.

"You had a little something there," I lie and smile proudly. "You shouldn't look dirty. Your hair is too nice for that." Praise that brings nothing. But the care.

"Well... thank you..."

Michelle Lynchwood. +1 (PS -76)

Okay! Great! Only one point, but I can't really comb her fur... comb her hair and give her a bath. But I can also...

"And have some more fruit salad! You need energy for the day!" Grinning maniacally, I shovel her food onto her plate.

"Finn... thank you for that... thank you..."

Michelle Lynchwood. +1 (PS -75)

This won't work. I need five more points, preferably 15, so I have more tokens for later. Maybe...

"Hey! Ouch!" I look angrily over at Tammy, who punched me with womanly ****.

"That's so pathetic," she hisses at me angrily. "Even for you. How pathetic you are, sucking up to Mom like that." She lashes out again. "Such a lousy little..."

"Tammy!"

I don't know who is more shocked by Michelle's outburst. Okay, not Jasmine, who just looks at us neutrally as if her real life takes place in the office. But Rose has dropped her spoon, I stare like a moron, Tammy is shocked... But not as much as Michelle. She looks around the table in amazement.

"Mom. What..." Tammy begins, but Michelle raises her fingers.

"Leave your brother alone," she admonishes, a smile on her lips, but...

Michelle Lynchwood. +7 (PS-68)

She defended me. She defended me against Tammy.

"Your brother just wanted to be nice to me, Tammy."

Oh, okay, or she just wanted to defend the source of her well-being.

But she defended me! And I got seven points for it! The MCD vibrates in my pocket, but this time I don't look at it, because I know what's happening. 400 tokens. The next points are just bonuses, but with 600 tokens... I have to check the AP again, but I remember a few interesting perks.

"Whatever" Tammy pouts in the meantime and pokes around in her breakfast, her chin resting on her hand and casting a murderous look in my direction, while Rose just wants to disappear into the ground.


“See ya!” I call, in a surprisingly good mood, shoulder my backpack and turn to the door, but then feel a hand on my shoulder. “Mom?” Almost startled, Michelle Lynchwood pulls her hand away from me and wraps it around her other hand. She can’t look me in the eye, surely an effect of the path she is on. It must be strange to suddenly be dependent on the son who you have previously only seen as the appendix of the family.

“I w-want you to come home... immediately t-today,” she stutters and chews on her lower lip.

“Why?” I ask, my voice much, much too arrogant. That brings her out of her stupor.

“Because I say so!” she hisses. “You don’t question my rules or I’ll turn off the power in your room again!” I soothingly raise my hands and approach Michelle, who steadfastly defends her place.

"It's okay, Mom," I say reassuringly. Michelle raises her eyes and looks at me questioningly. "I wanted to take a day off today anyway." To come home to you and further subjugate you, my sweet little pet.

"You won't do that!" But then she thinks for a moment and remembers that she wanted me around. "I mean..." Another shake of the head. It's kind of sweet to see her trying to understand her new feelings. She's still a long way away and I'm excited to see what happens when she continues to climb up the progression scale. A list of the different levels would be helpful, but I still haven't read the MCD instructions. Maybe on the way to school. Speaking off...

"But I have to go now," I say goodbye, half turn around and see Michelle take a step towards me. With a cheeky grin, I step towards her and hug her again, stroke her back and feel her instinctively pressing herself against me again. "But don't worry. I miss you already and can't wait to be home again." If she doesn't slap me now because she knows I'm lying, something like that, then...

"Okay..."

Michelle Lynchwood. +3 (PS -65)

She doesn't say it but she'll miss me. Pets miss their owners. Then she almost pushes me out the door.

Time for school. A boring day without friends, I still don't want to see them on the app.

Instead I ask myself which Perk I should choose... of if I should wait for even more Tokens.

https://strawpoll.com/40Zm41Y1Mga

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