The Sister Trap, by sierrawritessmut

“Eyo! It has been a hot minute!”

“Sis...come on. Do we really have to do this?

“Absolutely, we let Gina and Marcie have a fuckton of **** stories! It’s our turn again!”

“It can keep being their turn, thank you very much!”

“So, I’m Rina. And this impudent little piece of jailbait is my younger brother Ben.”

“WHAT THE ACTUAL FUCK, SIS!”

“What? You’re legal.”

“That’s not the issue here!”

“Anywaaaaaaaaaaaaaaays, we are reading Sisterfucker 9000, by hotslut69”

“It’s called The Sister Trap, by sierrawritessmut”

“So, you are paying attention. Awesome!”

“Ugh..also...that is a lot of tags.”

“Uhu. Kinda like the tag on your ass.”

“...at least the chapters aren’t that many. Let’s just get this over quick.”

“Oh, yeeeeeah.”

READING IN PROGRESS (BGM)

Her attention turned to her younger brother, Elliot. He was 18 and in the same year as her. She had been introduced to **** porn by way of a “Stepbro teaches stepsis a lesson in manners” video and been enthralled by the taboo. It was now the only thing she ever wanted to watch. But even that was losing its thrill. Maddy wanted the real thing.

Elliot was less accomplished than Maddy by far. He was happy to let his older sister take on the pressures and hopes of their parents, Travis and Eleanor, while he slacked off into an unremarkable life. He spent most of his time playing video games, procrastinating, and talking to his friends about girls. But, like Maddy, he was attractive. With green eyes, freckles, and a boyish grin, he had an allure to him. Judging by the outline of his sweatpants, he was packing too. There were quite a few girls at school that talked about him, if only he had the courage to speak to any of them.

“Man, this really sounds just like us, doesn’t it, Ben? I’m the star of the Wildcats while your some loser nerd. Honestly, sometimes I’m asking myself why I’m into you.”

“I ask myself the same question, Sis.”

This is where our story begins. Play as Maddy as she attempts to seduce her brother Elliot, all the while trying to maintain her reputation as a perfect schoolgirl. Will she slowly tempt Elliot until he can’t help but give in to sin? Will she use ****? ****? ****? There are a thousand ways for Maddy to get what she wants. One way or another, Maddy will get her brother Elliot to fuck her.

“Ohohohoho!”

“Sis, please. Stop drooling.”

“I can’t help it, Ben. This is like the perfect story for us! I love it when the girl is proactive! Makes me...uh...what’s it called again?”

“self insert?”

“Yeah that stuff! I love inserting.”

“Just remember, we are here to critique this and give a fair assessment of the story’s narrative and structural integrity.”

“I rather ASSess the structural integrity of your butt.”

“...Sis.”

“Yes?”

“If you don’t stop your sexual harassment I walk straight out that door.”

“Fine! Fine! I promise, I won’t verbally harass you anymore. Geez.”

“….this is the story of Maddy Owens, a straight A student.”

“Who has a huge sex drive. Basically she’s me.”

“You are not a straight A student. I’m actually amazed they let you in colle...owwwwww!!!!!!”

“No cartoon underwear today? Bummer.”

“YOU SAID YOU WOULD STOP!”

“Verbally, I made no such promises for physical.”

“UGGHHHH!!! STOP GIVING ME A WEDGIE!”

“Will you be a good boy for your older Sis?”

“Fuck, yes! Jesus Christ! Let go!”

“Hehehehehe...so the story.”

“Yes, the story! Umm...Maddy attempts to seduce her brother by taking a compromising selfie and “accidentally” sending it to her brother.”

“Nice strat. Oh hey we even get a picture.”

“Actually, Marcie told me I should do something in a case like this. She was VERY insistent.”

“Jerk off?”

“NO! I’m supposed to link this. It’s how about you ensure pictures show up in the middle instead of to the side. According to Marcie people who don’t do this are figuratively worse then Hitler.”

“Oh yeah, she’s super anal about this. And I bet Gina would spend the entire chapter bitching about how much she hates **** and all that. Good thing, you got us two instead, sierra!”

“You know, maybe the author would appreciate if we actually start reviewing this story. Instead of whatever the hell we are doing right now.”

“Fine, fine. Story...so umm...Maddy really wants her brother, so after the selfie operation she starts flashing him. Also not a bad strategy!”

“I have to say this section was kinda funny.”

“Funny?”

“I mean in a good way. Maddy tries really hard but Elliot pretty much just ignores her. It was very entertaining.”

THERE’S NOTHING ENTERTAINING ABOUT THAT!”

“Ok! Calm down, Sis!”

“Give her some respect. Maddy tries extremely hard. I mean, she even sneaks into his room and flicks her bean in his closet!”

“That’s...not what I would call trying hard.”

“Stalking your brother IS hard work. Do you have any idea how long it took me to ensure 24/7 surveillance?”

“I did not need to know that.”

“But I agree with you on one thing. If Maddie really wants to get it on with her hot brother she needs to go for a more...**** approach.”

“Let’s just read on.”

Eleanor was the picture of fitness. Wearing tight sweatpants and a crop top, the mom was fully prepared for her morning run. The top she wore couldn’t help but draw attention to her bust, which was larger than Maddy’s by far. Eleanor worked hard to keep her body toned and tight, such that a passerby might mistake her for Maddy if they weren’t looking too closely. Today, Eleanor wore a stern look of disapproval, her arms crossed beneath her bosom, squeezing her breasts forward so much that Maddy thought they might escape from her top.

“Oh hell nah, this better doesn’t turn into some degenerate mother son bullshit! The people who are into this are the scum of the earth!”

“Yeah for some reason that’s were you draw the line.”

“Fortunately some much more wholesome stuff happened. Brother and sister wrestling.”

“Nothing is wholesome about this.”

“Ok, this was really hot. Maddy completely dominated her brother and basically could have **** him right there if she wanted to.”

“Sis!”

“What? I’m saying could, not that she should! Just the thought that he was completely at her mercy was great.”

On Tuesdays, Maddy and Elliot shared third and fourth period together. Maddy took this as ample time to tease Elliot in less direct ways.

“What the…?”

“What is it, Ben?”

“How can they share periods?”

“Yeah, got to say, that’s a bit fucked up even for my standards.”

“YOU KNOW WHAT I MEAN! It was well established that Elliot is younger, they shouldn’t be in the same class.”

“They literally say that they are in the same year earlier, Ben.”

“But that doesn’t make any...”

“Anyways, it’s a fucking stupid complain. For fucks sake, Ben.”

“Alright fine! Then how about this?”

Suddenly, Maddy was yanked out of her trance by the sound of Mr. or Mrs. Owens moving around downstairs.

“What about it?”

“I had that feeling before but this story struggles a bit with POV writing.”

“Perverted ovulating vagina writing?”

“POINT OF VIEW WRITING! Can you take anything serious?”

“Ok, explain professor penguin butt.”

“This story is told from Maddy’s perspective. It’s not first perspective of course, but she is still very much intended to be our viewpoint character. It thus feels rather strange when her parents are called “Mr. and Mrs. Owens”

“Eh.”

“This isn’t a singular instance either. Her parents are referred to on a first name basis quite often. It is a bit jarring.”

“Have you considered that this might be intentional?”

“What?”

“Maybe Maddie feels disassociated from her parents. They certainly don’t seem to give her much parental affection. Perhaps her obsessive desire with her brother stems from a craving of familial love?”

“Sis...that was actually really profound. I would be impressed if it weren’t for the fact that you are MASSAGING MY CROTCH WITH YOUR FEET RIGHT NOW!”

“Bwahahahahahaha! You are so easy to distract! Oh, hey look we finally get a branch! Obviously we’re picking femdom!”

“Of course…”

“Wait, this thing was just two chapters long! And the second chapter was short as fuck! The hell!”

“Ah, the classic dilemma of an author wanting branches but not having the drive to finish them.”

“Oh fuck off! If anyone needs to finish it’s me!”

“It looks the main branch is the only one with a decent length.”

“Lame. I’m into Femdom.”

“Yes, I am aware.”

“It doesn’t even have to be hardcore and shit, just some casually dominating, you know what I’m saying?”

“Yes, unfortunately I do, Sis. Should we stop here? I don’t want you to have to read something you hate.”

“Oh no, no, lets continue. You seem to enjoy this, hehehe.”

“I’m not!”

“You’re bulge tells a different story.”

“That’s because of….”

“YEEEEEEEEEEEES?”

“...just...just continue...”

“Sure thing baby bro. Maddy continues playing the long game. Eventually she steals the phone of some bitch and pretends to be her, to further seduce her brother.”

“Oh come on! There are so many things that could go wrong with this. The commentators already pointed it out so we don’t really have to.”

“Yeah, I prefer a bit more of a direct approach. At least we get some pretty nice sexting out of the bargain.”

“...What is with all these gifs all of a sudden?”

“I bet Gina would flip her lid. She hates looking at cocks. Speaking of. Pretty sure you get a raging boner just looking at em, right, bro?”

“STOP BRINGING THAT UP.”

“Anyways, Maddy is pretending to be Holly pretending to be Maddy as she has a sex roleplay RP with her brother.”

“I hate to repeat myself but this could backfire hard.”

“Yeah, I mean, this is weak Maddy. At least **** your brother now that you have proof he’s into you!”

“Uh...what?”

“For example, **** him to commit more and more unspeakable acts with his sister. As long as you take on the guise as Holly being a cuck it should be fairly easy to pull off.”

“I hate the way your demented mind works.”

“Things do eventually come to a head(heh) when Elliot finally gets a proper blowjob from his sister.”

“The story goes for a gradual corruption angle, there is a slow escalation taking place which I can appreciate.”

“Hmm..so you’re into slow bums, eh? Naughty.”

“It’s called slow burn.”

“uhu.”

“Anyways, the story finally reaches his current climax…”

“pfft..”

“grrr….when Elliot and Maddie have sex in the school.”

“And looks like we are all caught up now. Not sure if the story still continues from here. I still would have preferred the femdom branch.”

“Regardless of my own thoughts on the subject matter, this story has a lot going for it. I also feel it’s worth mentioning the grammar. I did not spot a single typo in my read, which is by no means the standard here.”

“Yeah it was pretty good, still would have wanted Maddie to be a bit more forceful.”

“In terms of critique, the Holly situation left a bit to be desired. The gifs were also not to my liking, although that is certainly up to taste. Finally…”

“What?”

“N-No, it’s nothing.”

“You can’t tease me like this! Out with it.”

“No, forget it.”

“Ben. I have ways to make you talk. Lewd ways. You can either spill the beans now or after a few hours of getting your butt destroyed.”

“ALRIGHT, FINE! It’s...I was missing a bit of...l-love.”

“Huh?”

“I mean...the whole thing had a very...lust based approach. It felt a bit...”

“Romantic. You wanted it to be more romantic.”

“I….I didn’t say that!”

“Aww, Ben that’s adorable!”

“S-Shut up! I am merely saying this from a neutral and critical perspective.”

“Sure, little Bro. But I feel there were some hints of it in the later chapters.”

“There were…”

“Personally, I just want more femdom, maybe request a follow up once you have that one written, hehehe.”

“Ugh. This has gone on for long enough, lets call it a day.”

“Fine by me. Good night, everyone!”