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Chapter 7
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Zeebop
Who made a move first - Sue Storm or the Mole Man?
The Mole Man Makes The First Move
Past
Harvey's hand drifted from Sue Storm's enhanced bosoms. He gripped her hand and pressed it against the hard bulge in his pants. **** her to feel the outline of his engorged prick strain against the fabric.
"Dr. Elder—my boyfriend, Reed—" she said.
"Isn't here," he said, voice rough and guttural. "Look what you've done to me my dear. Do you have any idea how much this hurts, being near someone so beautiful? It's quite overwhelming. Any man might—lose control—"
"D-Doctor. Please—" Sue moaned. But his right hand pinned her hand against his hardness. And his left hand delved beneath her skirt.
No one had ever touched her there. His spore-stained fingers pulled her panties aside roughly. Sue felt the elastic snap, the fingers found her quivering, virginal mons, the soft golden hair that she still felt embarrassed trimming, unwilling to shave it all off lest she look too young. A soft moan escaped her lips.
This was getting dangerous.
At the Time Variance Authority
Thousands on thousands of faceless auditors sat at their consoles. Each a window into a different timeline, a different strand of possibility. Monitoring all that was, is, and would be.
"Temporal change detected in segment 0B01001," an auditor spoke. "Paradox imminent. Branching prohibited by Doomtech."
On the screen, the auditor saw the calculations of potential outcomes from this encounter. Franklin Richards' genetic profile wavered, shifted. Sue Storm's marriage to Reed Richards shifted significantly lower in possibility. Universal collapse scenarios without a functioning Fantastic Four proliferated.
"Correction required," the auditor said. "Essential timeline events must be preserved. Minimum viable intervention authorized."
Present
Sue Storm sighed and licked her fingers. Her massive breasts heaved. Things could have gone very differently that night, if not for what had happened next. As it was, Sue wondered how her life might have gone differently, if Harvey had succeeded in making love to her that night. But it hadn't happened.
How does the TVA intervene?
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DOOMED
Susan Storm is Doomed...She Just Doesn't Know It Yet
Doctor Doom has decided to break up the Fantastic Four by targeting Sue Storm, the Invisible Woman. Yet Reed Richards knows too well the strategies that Doom would try. So Doom decides to enlist a partner to aid him in the downfall of the Invisible Woman...by whatever means necessary!
Updated on Jun 10, 2026
by Zeebop
Created on Aug 10, 2024
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