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Chapter 52
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The Invisible Woman
Round 2 - Thursday - Day of Sarah's Date - Current Law No masturbation
Jenny heard a knock on the door. She was surprised to see it was Valerie who had come to see her.
Just the fact that Valerie had come to see her was shocking enough, but the poor woman also appeared to be covered in cum. It was in her hair, all over her face. Her shirt was soaked and clinging to her body and nearly transparent.
"Oh my god. Valerie? What happened?" Jenny asked.
Valerie handed Jenny a large jug. Without thinking Jenny accepted it. It was about 2 L and was very obviously full of semen.
"What? How did you get this?" Jenny asked.
"I'll bring you another tomorrow Mistress. That should be enough to keep you in good shape until the challenge. Don't want to beat you unfairly." Valerie tried saying it in a teasing way, but wasn't sure if it came off that way. Without waiting for any more conversation, she walked away.
Jenny was left staring at the jug of semen. She really didn't want to drink this, but Valerie was right, she couldn't compete if she was dehydrated and starving. She took the jug inside and readied herself to down as much as she could. - - - - - -
"Wow. I guess I should thank you? Except also you kinda just created me so I could fuck that boomer." It was very strange for Marcos to be staring at Mali. He'd gotten used to his new appearance, and now it was staring right back at him talking. "Anyway this is kinda freaky. I'm going to go see how far I can get before the pain kicks in."
Mali turned and walked away. She opened the door and immediately felt a dull ache in her whole body. Pushing on she stepped outside and the pain quickly ramped up until she ran back in and threw her arms around Marocs.
"Ok. Not far. Wow. I guess we are stuck with each other." Mali said.
"Ya I guess so. Wow that hurt." Marcos replied.
"Ok I remember the description from that tf you bought. I want to try something." Mali took off her shirt and threw it on the ground. She watched as Marcos's shirt disappeared and reappeared on the ground. "So that's what it meant. We can't even dress differently. This is so fucking weird. I guess it's better than being a passenger in my own body, but still, stuck with someone else for the rest of my life is a tough pill to swallow."
"I get it." Marcos replied. "I just keep thinking about the initial transformation. You aren't an entirely different person. You are me, if I was born a girl in Thailand instead of a man in Peru. It's a real nature vs nurture test, but once we get past this awkwardness, and adjust for your youth, I think we will actually start to like each other."
"I guess so. We both love gaming at least. And Beatriz, she's my bff after all Although I guess now I'm going to have to be there when you two have sex. Gross."
"And I'll have to be there whenever you choose to have sex. Yes you are right I was thinking of you having sex with Eric, but obviously that's up to you now."
"Ya…I guess I really have to think. I remember the rules too, neither of us wants us eliminated. Fuck. I don't want to think right now. Why don't we play a game? That always distracts me."- - - - - -
Eric was not sure what to expect from his date with Sarah. He knew she had the compulsion from the last transformation, but she didn't actually want to date a man. He thought they could be friends, but the whole Harem thing seemed to be in the way.
In many ways she was still a stranger to him, unlike the other women on the boat. Maybe it was good that she'd chosen a coffee shop, a place where they could really talk. Although her invisibility might make conversation more awkward.
Eric tried to make himself presentable at least. Lesbian or not, it was still a date. He'd given himself a close shave, combed his hair, and wore dress shorts and a light blue polo.
Entering the coffee shop he looked for Sarah. Of course he didn't find her.
"Sarah?" He called tentatively.
"Here." Sarah called.
Eric made his way over to where he'd heard the voice. Reaching for a chair he was surprised to feel her hair. It was so bizarre to feel it without seeing it. "Sorry, didn't know you were sitting there." Eric said as he sat down on the opposite side.
"No worries. I would have warned you, but you know…"
"Ya I know. Wow, this invisible thing is really weird."
"You're telling me. Anyway I might not know you well, but I do know you love coffee. I had them recreate my favourite coffee shop from back home in Markham. You really have to try the biscotti."
That was true, Eric did love coffee. He really loved coffee. He typically drank it black, but loved just about anything. Even just being in this coffee shop made him happy. No matter where he was, the smell of freshly brewed coffee always brought him home.
"Sure, I love biscotti with coffee." They ordered and made small talk for a bit. Then a One brought this order. She set down a steaming cup of coffee and a cookie on a plate.
Eric stared at the cookie confused. It looked good, but it certainly wasn't biscotti. "Uh, how can they get my order wrong? We are the only ones here."
Sarah laughed. "Nope. That's the biscotti. Also known as an almond cookie. See the owners back in Markham were Chinese immigrants. They wanted to open a restaurant, but there are so many Chinese restaurants in the area. So they decided to open an Italian style cafe. Except neither of them had any idea what Italian food was like, let alone ever been to Italy. So they simply served coffee and Chinese desserts, except they gave everything Italian names. Everything on the menu is actually Chinese. Except the coffee, that's from Brazil."
"Wow. Did it work? Was it a popular spot?" Eric asked, taking a bite of his cookie.
"Ya, I think so. It was always busy when I went. I don't think people really thought it was Italian food, but it was good." Eric watched as Sarah took a drink of her coffee. He was amazed to see it didn't become invisible as it passed her lips, but he could see it traveling down her throat until it slowly disappeared.
"Wow, that's so cool. I can see the coffee inside you."
"Oh my god. You can? So everyone has been watching me chew food? That's horrible."
"Nah, don't worry. It's not gross. It's interesting."
"Sure, you are just trying to make me feel - ouch, motherfucker." Sarah cried out in pain.
"What's going on? Sarah, are you ok?"
"Ugh. Ya. I'm fine. You can't see but I'm not just invisible, I'm also wearing a 'portal' bra. Basically my breasts are actually on a mannequin somewhere with Two-in-Valerie. She had stopped molesting me I thought, but she just stabbed my tit with something. Fuck. She just stabbed the other one."
"Fuck really? Should we go find her? Stop whatever she's doing?"
"No. I don't feel like she's going to actually hurt me. Actually I can't feel my breasts at all, maybe it was an anesthetic? Ok, that's a little weird. Still I didn't know that we could stop her. I tried to already and she just blew me and Stephanie out of the store and locked it on us."
"Ok. If you are sure. Do you know when you get them back? And when you might become visible again?"
"No idea. And I don't know if being invisible will help or hurt in the challenge, but I'm hoping it ends by then."
"Ya I get it. Are you nervous?"
"Ya. A little. Last challenge I had to get naked with Valerie and suck a dildo, not exactly that far outside my comfort zone. I am worried that they might keep ramping up until my orientation becomes a real liability. I'm already at a disadvantage here, I really need these challenges to get VP."
"Ya for sure. I wish I could be more helpful. I know Yaz keeps telling me not to feel guilty, but I do. I'm the one who gets a harem of beautiful women vying for my dick, it doesn't seem fair."
"Fair, no. But it's still not your fault. And the show is working on you too, trying to corrupt you, make you use us. Speaking of, have you spent your BP yet?"
"No. I spent some at the beginning of the week, but I've been distracted. I have 3000 BP left. I did bring the tablet with me. Here."
Eric passed her the tablet and she began to scroll. "Wait, why does this tab say Marcos and Mali? Last week it only said Marcos."
"Huh, that's new. It wasn't like that last time I looked."
"Well it doesn't matter. Right now I'm looking for something to help me out. Oh ok this one."
I wonder what it tastes like + - Having had a taste of Eric's cock, Sarah has decided she likes it. In fact she loves the taste, the feel, the smell of it. No longer an idle curiosity, Sarah will want to touch, suck and taste Eric's cock and semen. The longer she goes without, the stronger the desire becomes. Permanent. 3000BP
"Wow Sarah. That's really ****. And permanent. What's with you? First the talking and then this? Nobody else has asked for permanent transformations."
"Look it's my choice isn't it? The truth is I don't find you attractive and I never will, but I do find submission attractive. I asked for the speech limit before because the idea of someone else controlling my voice was just so hot. When it comes to physical attraction, I like women, but when it comes to being dominated, I don't think gender matters to me.
So this upgrade will help me get more VP. I'm going to run out of blowjob points, but this gives me new opportunities. Besides, feeling the need to worship your sex, regardless of your gender, that just feels hot. So this is my choice. Don't let Isla pick, give this to me."
"Sarah…before I do there is something you should know. Valerie came to me earlier today. She bought a transformation for me, said she wanted to help Jenny. Well she said Mistress, but I am sure she meant Jenny. For the next day my, um, production, is going to be a lot more. Like a lot. You might not want this new transformation tonight."
"No, I don't care. Do it right now."
Eric couldn't see her face, but he understood her tone. She was completely serious. Fuck, it did sound really hot getting her to crave his cock. He felt awful but he did want her to have agency over her own transformation path.
He clicked it.
Eric 3000 BP -> 0
"Ok Sarah. It's done." Sarah didn't say anything. He was about to speak again when he felt her hands on his shorts. She was under the table. She opened his zipper and pulled out his penis. He was already hard from thinking about this upgrade and she started to stroke him.
Soon he was moaning, he felt the pressure rising. "Sarah I'm about to cum. Remember Valerie's transformation, it's going to be way more than you expect."
"I know. Give it to me." She stroked even faster. He exploded sending rope after rope into Sarah. Thanks to the transformation Valerie gave him, his orgasm lasted far longer than normal as he produced an inhuman amount of cum.
Handjob +3 VP
First x2
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Facial +3VP
He felt Sarah release his dick, then watched as she rose up from under the table to sit across from him again. Watched, because the cum covering her was not invisible. She almost looked like a floating ball of cum, but he could make out some of her features through it all. It had completely covered her face, her eyes were closed, her hair was messy, and it was dripping down her chin.
Very clearly he could see she was smiling. He watched as an invisible finger wiped some away from her eyes and brought into her mouth. She liked her finger clean and opened her eyes.
"Sarah, that felt amazing. I'm so sorry for the mess, do you want to head to the suite to shower?"
"No. Don't be sorry. That was freaking amazing. I know it's the transformation you just bought but this feels heavenly. The feel of it all over me, and oh my god the taste. Last time it tasted, well, kind of gross actually. Now it's like vanilla frosting. It's sooo good. If it isn't too gross for you we could stay here and finish our date? At least now you can tell where I am." Eric could vaguely make out a smile through all the cum.
Truthfully Eric found the idea of her just casually sitting in a cafe covered in cum to be hot. If she was up for it, so was he.
"Ya sure. I'd like that. You know things between us have been weird. We are basically strangers, you are gay, and yet our dates have been all about sex. Maybe we get to know each other a little better?"
"Yes. I agree. One request though, even though we both dated her, let's not make this night about Stephanie. Tell me about yourself, the real you before this show."
Eric nodded. He was always awkward with these kinds of icebreakers, it was easier at work because he would just talk about his career.
"Ok. Well as you know I am a lawyer. I pretty much always wanted to be a lawyer, but my father was really against it. He knew a few lawyers and said they were all rich and unhappy. He really pushed me into engineering as my undergrad, so I'd have something to fall back on.
I did as he wanted. He was paying for it after all. I did my degree in applied mathematics, and I did like some parts of it, but I knew I never wanted to be an engineer. So I aced the LSAT, and applied to every law school I had dreamed of.
Yale was actually just for fun. I never thought I'd actually get it. I'd already been accepted to U of T and was planning to go there when Yale's offer came through.
There was some consideration still, the tuition was more than triple, I'd have to live in the US for years, but in the end there was no way I could pass it up.
Since then I really have made law my life. I really have been a workaholic. A 40 hour work week is practically vacation. But that's not to say I am unhappy. I really love what I do. It's a kind of problem solving that I'm just hooked on.
When I am not working, I guess I spend my time playing video games, or at the gym."
"Don't worry, no judgment on being a workaholic." Sarah said. "I was much the same way, although with a less ambitious career path. As you know I was the general manager of the fitness club you attended. I stayed close to home and did a business degree at York. Then I pretty much walked into the job at the club straight out of university. I was lucky that I knew the previous manager. She hired me as her assistant and I eventually took over when she retired.
It might be funny that my job was managing people, when really I am quite shy and don't like meeting new people. Except I never really treated them like people, they were just assets the club had.
I know some of the staff didn't like me for that reason, they felt I was cold and mechanical in my interactions with them, but I know others loved having a boss that was no nonsense.
The owners of the club loved it anyway. I loved looking for efficiencies. I was always testing things out to see what difference it made. Like if I dropped the temperature to 20, how many complaints do we get? Or let it climb to 24 in summer? What if we closed the sauna overnight? What if we dropped housekeeping to 2 shifts from 3?
That last one was a mistake by the way. A very short lived experiment after someone threw up overnight and I ended up cleaning it myself.
The owners probably also loved that I was salaried and put in tons of unpaid overtime. At least you got rewarded for your addiction to work.
Outside of work, I played chess. A lot of online chess. Also I read a lot of comics, Marvel, DC, indie, whatever really. And yes as Isla apparently told everyone I watched a lot of porn. Sue me.
Oh, I wonder if this new transformation will make me into bukkake porn?" As she said that she scooped more of Eric's cum into her mouth.
Eric's dick twitched watching her. Sarah seemed to be aware and suggested they go back to the suite.
They didn't talk much as they walked, but Sarah held his hand so he would know where she was.
Entering the suite they were greeted by Trinity. She was trying out a new look and wore jeans…and nothing else.
"Hello Master, hello Ms. Liu. Wow you look delicious. Do you want to kiss me?"
"Sure, kiss me Trinity." Sarah replied.
Trinity surged forward and grabbed Sarah's head and pulled her in for a big passionate kiss. When she pulled away some of the cum had transferred to Trinity. Trinity used her hands to scoop it off and licked her fingers.
"Wow Master, you taste great. You will have to let me try more later, but right now I have my own date to attend. How do I look?"
Eric stared at her. That had been really sexy, and her tits were huge and on display. "You look really sexy Trinity. Not that I am complaining, but most women wear tops to their dates. At least at the beginning."
"Oh I know. It's just something Yaz said to me. If you've got it, flaunt it. And I know I've got it." She grabbed her breasts and lifted them up. She winked at Eric and headed past them to the elevator.
After she left Eric turned to Sarah. "Ok, what do you want to do now?"
"Well I am really horny and want to cum, but you made it a rule I can't masturbate. And the cum is one thing, but I really can't imagine you helping me to an orgasm. Instead I want to feel more of your dick and semen. I want you to just drench me."
Eric's dick sprang to attention at that request. Without waiting for instructions Sarah took off his pants and went to work. She licked his dick a little bit then moved back to a handjob so she could really aim him. He came again this time she aimed it all over her chest and stomach.
Handjob +3VP (-1 for repeat performance)
He could see the portal bra, it was weird to see her completely flat like that. Her whole torso was essentially visible now.
As he was contemplating the scene in front of him, Sarah grabbed his dick again. It was still sensitive from his last orgasm but didn't resist as Sarah wrapped her lips around him and started to suck him off.
He lasted much longer this time, he actually felt bad for Sarah, but she didn't appear to mind. Not that he could really see her face, but it almost seemed like she was moaning on his dick.
"Oh god I'm going to cum." He warned her. She picked up her pace and he came in her mouth. He watched as the cum filled her mouth and traveled down her throat. She tried to swallow it all but there was too much and it exploded out of her mouth onto her chest and the floor.
Blowjob +5 VP (-1 for repeat performance)
Once again Sarah started to lick and clean up the cum on her face.
"Are you ok?" He was worried about her. To go from only ever liking girls to guzzling cock must be wreaking havoc on her psyche.
"Ya actually I am. Like I told you, the transformation makes me love this taste. Part of me still feels that it's wrong, but it is nearly drowned out by how turned on I am by this. I am getting tired though, are you ready to head to bed?"
Eric was, he was beat. He insisted Sarah shower before bed. She actually wanted to skip it and go to sleep covered in cum, but it was her fetish not his.
Eric was already in bed when Sarah entered the room. He knew this because he could see a faint image of her. Just barely there, but he could see her.
"Sarah, I can see you!" He told her.
"Ya this is great. It's starting to fade, maybe I will be back by morning!" She got into bed with him lying on the far side away from him. Eric drifted off to sleep, content.
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