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Chapter 16
by Hypnomonkey
One more command to close things out?
The Grand Finale
Ren snapped the three women back under, then lined them up, all three standing blank and mindless.
"Alright! I'm just about out of time here, so it's time for the grand finale!" He boomed.
He moved back towards the girls, grabbing Ann and Makoto and pulling them into a huddle with Kawakami as the three stood mindlessly.
"Tonight you will be compelled to come to LeBlanc after it closes" he whispered, before giving them the real final command.
After he pulled away, he looked to the crowd.
"Ready? Three! Two! One! Go!" He called out.
The three women immediately sprang to life. Ann stepped forward first.
"Thanks for coming to Ren's show! Here's a treat before you go!" Ann boomed with an excited voice, moving in a sort of half-dance motion as she mimicked a cheerleader, her ample tits bouncing with each motion.
Makoto stepped forward next.
"We've been told to cheer for you! We'll show off what we can do!" Makoto added. Her cheering was a little less enthusiastic and a little less coordinated, but Ren kinda expected that given that it was Makoto. This wasn't exactly her wheelhouse.
Kawakami stepped up next, standing between Ann and Makoto.
"We're the Hypno Cheering Team! Cheering loud in a dazed dream!" Kawakami added and, much to Ren's surprise... It was really good. Who knew Kawakami had some school spirit in her?
Makoto, meanwhile, moved behind Ren and pushed him to center stage. The girls surrounded him, now all cheering at once.
"Ren! Ren! He's our man! If he can't do it, no one can! He's so awesome! He's so cool! In his trance, we'll act like fools! We've been hypnotized by him! We'll follow his every whim! Ren! Ren! He's our man! We hope that you're all his fans!" The girls all chanted in unison, posing at the edge of the stage before finally snapping out of their trances. Makoto's face went red, clearly not sure what she was doing or why she was suddenly breathing so hard.
"Thanks for coming everyone!" Ren called out before filtering backstage.
He relaxed after the show, enjoying the rest of the festival with his friends. No matter how much they asked, he wouldn't reveal anything about the show to Makoto and Ann - and thankfully neither would their friends. They were a bit annoyed by this, but they put up with it.
Ren was mostly focused on what his night would be like. The girls were coming over after LeBlanc closed. He wasn't sure who would show up first, but he needed to be ready. Thankfully he had installed a way to snap them back under while he was giving them their cheer instructions.
However what he didn't realize is that he never removed Kawakami's trigger to obey commands while someone was touching her shoulder...
Did that become a problem?
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Persona 5 Hypnosis Stories
The Metaverse is a strange place
A story written in a similar vein to my 'Three Houses Hypnosis Stories', seen here: https://chyoa.com/story/Three-Houses-Mind-Control-Stories.53859. I *may* do more with other fictional worlds, depending on my mood.
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Updated on Jun 19, 2025
by CelebMaster69
Created on Oct 12, 2023
by CelebMaster69
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