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Chapter 13 by archer15

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Story Notes

I'm not sure how it came out as a story, but this was one of the most enjoyable things I wrote in quite some time. Picking random spots in an episode and then drawing an unknown sex event made for some really interesting writing. While it took a long time to post this story because of other issues, I wrote it in one straight sitting.

As I asked each contributor to submit 4 ideas, there were 3 that did not get used.

  • Severus: Level 1: Faith and Buffy have a nude sparring match, refereed by an equally nude Lilah.

  • Hypno: Level 1: Tara and Cordelia do a topless comparison of each other's breasts.

  • Johans: Level 3: Tara and Willow have a Xander-centric threesome with him, heavily focused on cockworship and ball-licking.

There are a few changes I would make before trying this again.

  1. The timeframe was too short. Ideally there should be longer gaps to develop how the sex scenes impact the relationship.
  2. My original plan was for the impacts to just be positive, neutral, or negative, at the last second I decided to split it between sex and relationship. Having a random modifier on the sex was not necessary, especially for every scene. The relationships/plot changes should get more focus - if Xander and Buffy end up having sex in episode 8 how does that ultimately impact lots of plot elements?
  3. I changed Giles to Lilah and Oz to Tara after discussion with the group - story wasn't long enough to really play out those differences.

I'm definitely going to give this a longer go, probably pretty soon. If anyone is interested in submitting ideas, let me know and I'll include you in the next go.

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