Steven [M, 21]- Supreme Master- Day: Zero- Skin contact- POV 1- ?- A sketchy ritual gone awry., by wrynn

“Marcie, what the actual fuck is this weird ass gibberish?”

“Well, it is a branch.”

“No, this is a branch. I use it to smack stupid people on the head with it.”

“Smacking aside, we are reading this gibberish by wrynn. “

“Oh, fucking hell, it’s cow guy, again?”

“You are back to calling him cow guy?”

“Answer the question.”

“Well, yes…”

“Fuck off, you fuck!”

“Look Gina, he is well within his rights to submit these stories.”

“And I’m in my rights to tell him to fuck off! The only stuff I want to read from cow guy is the lesbian harem hotel story not this other garbage he keeps insisting on lactating out of his wrinkled up man tits.”

“I did not need that mental image, Gina.”

“Alright, Marcie. Fine. I bite. What’s the actual story called?”

Ha, funny that you said bite...”

“Marcie.”

“I guess you could say you really need BRAINS for this one.”

“MARCIE….”

“Geez, Gina, you don’t have to MOAN about it.”

“….”

“...zombie sex slaves. It’s called zombie sex slaves.”

SMACK!

READING IN PROGRESS (BGM)

“I HATE ZOMBIES!”

“Gina, calm down.”

“Zombies aren’t sexy. What the fuck? First selfie had zombie slimes and now this. The only time I want to see zombies is from sarckle in his monster story. Fuck you cow guy and FUCK YOU SARCKLE!”

“Will you give it at least a chance?”

SMACK!

“Alright, that’s it. Gina, hand over that branch.”

“NO!”

“Now, tell us what this story is about like a good girl.”

“...grrrrr….”

“...”

“THIS IS JUST YOUR USUAL **** DEVICE STORY! WHAT THE FUCK DO YOU NEED ZOMBIES FOR?”

“Gina…”

“Am I fucking wrong? Let me guide you through: Loser Virgin finds magic spell on the internet. Uses it to turn bitches into his ****. Fucking hell, cow guy. You were supposed to be better then that!”

“Really?”

“On second thought, not really. Anyways...”

Then things were about to drastically change for my night, and my life. The DJ announced a new dancer up on the stage, Candy. Obviously not her real name but fuck she looked hot.

“Hold one, wasn’t there a Candy in Harem Hotel?”

“I could not tell you, Gina. These names were way too forgettable for me to remember.”

Was she blaming me for her siezure? And what the fuck was up with her eyes? "I don't know what you're talking about. You gave me a dance, had some kind of siezure in the middle of it

I don't have any history of sizures you see,

Kat was going to crash on the couch in case she had another sizure

then she had a damn siezure too."

“I’m getting a damn seizure trying to read this.”

“Yes, it is rather unpolished. Quite a few spelling errors. More then what I am used from this author. Anyways, continue.”

“Ok, so this fucker, Steven, turns girls into his zombie sex slaves. The twist is that he can only go after girls who don’t have an interest in him which means…”

“most of his sex slaves are lesbians.”

“…”

“Gina.”

“You know what I’m going to do with this branch, Marcie?”

“I don’t think I want to…”

“Nothing.”

“...come again?”

“This always goes the same way. I read something that pisses me off and go absolutely apeshit. Then you try to calm me down and say I should see my psychiatrist. Haha, very funny.”

“I thought it was a pretty good routine.”

“Well, fuck that shit, I’m not giving cow guy the satisfaction!”

“I do not think he would find deflowering by branch very satisfying, Gina.”

“Fuck off.”

“As you wish. So, one of the selling point of this story is that these girls are pretty much mindless zombies-well sexy looking zombies but zombies nonetheless.”

“Yeah, but guess what? That’s a fucking trash selling point. Even cow guy realizes that it’s absolute dogshit and chucks it out the window the first chance he gets. Then he goes back to his old favorite. Turning girls into cows.”

“To be fair, that is not the only thing Steven does.”

Well that was strange but I suppose what was the point of the spell making sex slaves I didn't know about? Making them report in made as much sense as anything. While I was at it I tried thinking a command at Candy just in case and I tried not to look shocked as she stuck her finger in her nose.

“You sure got that right. Good for you, Marcie. Finally a story that appeals to your fetish.

“H-Hmpf...that did nothing for me. I do not care about nose picking if there is no humiliation accompanying it. Speaking of humiliation…”

“Ah, shit.”

“Steven is not a complete irredeemable asshole, but he certainly is not above taking **** against the girls he perceived has slighted him...starting with….hmmm...Bitch.”

“Marcie…”

“Look Gina, I can not help myself, the way he humiliated Bitch was really hot.”

“Oh, fuck off! Didn’t you say you hated the Harem Story?”

“Well yes, that one had no decent humiliation. This one has. I quite like it.”

“Meaning, you cummed your brains out to it.”

“Not how I would phrase it, but yes, I masturbated to it, multiple times. Only to Bitch however.”

“He doesn’t even treat her that badly. What the fuck is your deal?”

“Yes, wrynn once again has this bizarre disproportionate punishment system going on. He is way harder on Jenn, even though her offense should be much lighter on the punishment scale then Bitch’s.”

“And what about Cunt?”

“Oh, good Lord, do not remind me of her, Gina. What was wrynn thinking?”

“Nothing, his dick was clearly taking over.”

“I explain. There is this girl, Brenda, who also slighted Steven. In fact, she is the only girl Steven deliberately turns into a ****. The whole thing has quite the build up, so I was really looking forward to when it finally happens. And then, after numerous chapters we finally get to the one titled “Retribution”….”

“….yeeeees?”

“And as it turns out Brenda has issues. Massive mental issues. It ruined the entire vibe! I could not masturbate to it!”

“Bwahahahahahahaha!”

“Well, it is not funny! Steven then goes this glass half full/half empty middleway in which he still punishes her, but less harsh, I guess? It makes him come across as a disgusting creep but more importantly ruins a perfectly good, erotic set up!”

“Womp, Womp.”

“Oh, you did not just womp womp me, Gina! Nobody womp womps me!”

“Bite me.”

“Hmpf! And this is were the story pretty much stands as of right now.”

“Yeah, ok, you skipped over a bunch of girls, Marcie.”

“Oh, please. Who cares about them?”

“Hey I’m just saying.”

“It is not as **** as with Devil’s Throne, but the cast still is about twice as big as it should be. It does not help that most of the girls shift towards your typical enabler persona, which you see a dime in a dozen with these types of stories. It is like they do not have a brain of their own.”

“Isn’t that the whole point, Marcie?”

“True, but does not make for a good story.”

“Hmm, you know, there’s plenty of lesbian stuff going on, but I’m not really feeling it.”

“Probably because most sex scenes are about the idea of sex not the act of it. Like the appeal is forcing someone to suck your penis, not the actual fellatio. It is an acquired taste and one that I not entirely dislike.”

“Yeah, but you’re Marcie.”

“On the positive side. Names like Candy, Bitch and Cunt are far easier to remember.”

“These aren’t names, Marcie.”

“Irrelevant. Anyways, I guess that means we both masturbated to the same author, albeit each on a different story. I do not think that has happened before.”

“I didn’t masturbate to the harem story.”

“You did not?”

“Nope.”

“Are you sure?”

“Yeah, I enjoy the Harem story for the plot.”

“Well, now you just completely ruined my setup!”

“Oh, cry my a river.”

“Anyways, I think we can end it here? I believe we can firmly chuck this one in the ever growing pile of mediocre stories. Not terrible, but not great either.”

“You won’t hear me complaining about that, Marcie.”

“So, Gina, I guess one could say you...mind...less.”

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