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Chapter 24
by
Ggnt
What's next?
Semi-permanence
Mira was hesitating. She didn't want to be stuck, unable to cum, at 2 in the morning again, but she also found it far too hot to just delete it. If she deleted another rule and not that one, her friends would start to understand just what kind of freak she was. If she deleted it and added a lesser version back in, well, same deal. She just wanted a minor edit, that was all.
Then it hit her. She knew just what to write. She opened the rulebook.
New Rule: All existing and future rules within the Rulebook are permanent fixtures and cannot be deleted, erased, or nullified. They may only be deleted by the rulebook based on conditions laid out within the rule such as time or challenge limitations. They may only be edited, either by owner consensus or the right to edit won through a game but the original intent of the rule must remain intact and the rulebook shall prevent any edit which fails to maintain that intent. Rules without conditions to delete may be edited to have such condition by writing 'condition' at the end of the existing rule. The rulebook will pick the condition or time limit based on how difficult the owners find the rule to adopt to.
She smiled, there, she'd done it.
"Fuck!" Sierra hissed.
"Mira what the fuck?" Donna shouted.
"That's a pen!" Ken pointed.
Mira looked at it, and pretended to be shocked, "Oh no! I'm sorry!"
"Wait so I can't ever get rid of my rules?" Shannon asked.
"Mira why would you do that?" Ken asked.
"I think it's a great idea." Alyssa said, "Too bad watermelon tits has a way out."
"Shut up!" Sierra yelled at Alyssa.
Donna pulled her thumb out of her mouth, "I guess that means I can't just change 'cannot walk' to 'can walk' to get rid of my heels?"
"N-no. I don't think so." Mira admitted.
"Fuck," Donna said, "Alright. This thumb thing is dumb, can I edit the 24 hours to...say 2 hours?"
Mira shrugged, she didn't know if that would work.
"I'll allow it." Ken said.
"Me too." Sierra said.
"Let's try then." Mira picked up the rulebook but Sierra snatched it away.
"No, I'll write." Sierra said. She took a pencil and tried to change Donna's rule, "Nope. Can't change the time. What if..." She put the pencil down but nothing happened, "Oh right. Do I have your permission to edit Donna's rule to try and shorten the length?"
Ken and Sierra gave permission.
Sierra tried a few different things then smiled, "Aha! Success!"
Donna tried to pull her thumb out of her mouth without trying to talk, but couldn't. She rolled her eyes and did it again, speaking this time, "Well it's still stuck, so what did you do?"
"I just added to it." Sierra explained, "Look."
New Rule: For the next 24 hours Donna Okafor must always have something in her mouth when she’s not talking, the more phallic the object, the more comfortable she will feel. Every minute with a real penis in her mouth will reduce this time by 10 minutes.
"A penis? Oh fuck you Sierra." Donna said, shaking her head.
"I'm not the one with the dick," Sierra said with a wink, "Ask Ken."
Donna shook her head, "I got two, don't I? I want to edit one of Mira's rules." She glared at Mira, "You aren't going to be chicken and veto it, are you?" She asked Mira.
Mira shivered under Donna's gaze, but then puffed out her chest, "No. I can take it. I'll approve."
"I will too, she can change whatever she wants for Mira." Ken said.
Sierra held the rulebook near Donna, "I'm in. What do you want me to write?" Donna whispered into Sierra's ear. Sierra grinned, "Sure, I can do that."
Sierra edited one of Mira's rules per Donna's suggested. Then she closed the book and looked at Mira, "Mira do you want to add a rule now?"
Mira opened her mouth but no sound came out.
Sierra and Donna giggled to each other. Mira rolled her eyes and snapped her fingers to summon the rulebook. She looked down and read it.
New Rule: Mira Chowdhury can't speak unless she has given a blowjob and swallowed semen within 12 hours.
She felt her cheeks flush. Not just eat it but actually...she looked over at Ken, then quickly looked away. Unless she wanted to become mute she was going to have to...to...blow Ken.
She gulped. She supposed anyone would do, but could she just find some random guy? No, no way.
Sierra snapped to summon the book back, "Now I have my own change to make. I'd love to get rid of these tits faster, but there's not much point. Instead it's either the masturbation or the live in maid...fuck. I'll add a condition to masturbation. Are you both ok with that?"
"Yep." Ken said.
Mira nodded.
Sierra wrote 'condition' in the rulebook and then it disappeared and was replaced with text instantly.
New Rule: Sierra MacLeod may not masturbate. This rule will be deleted after Sierra has edged for a 1 hour continuously. Any pause will reset the timer.
"An hour? A fucking hour?" Sierra complained.
"Only an hour." Donna said with a wink, "I'm stuck for a day unless I find a nice cock..."
Sierra rolled her eyes, "Whatever. Alyssa you slut, what do you want to do?"
"Well, you all seem to be thinking only of yourselves, but I've got the greater good in mind. I want to add a rule to eliminate STIs."
Of course no one could complain about that so Ken wrote it down for her.
Old Rule: Through a combination of vaccination, education and treatment all STIs were slowly eradicated from 1990 to the present within Canada, and to a lesser degree outside of Canada. This rule will be implemented in such a way to cause the minimum disruption to the present day.
"Wow...so..." Shannon said as she received her new memories.
"Yeah...so much casual sex..." Sierra said.
"Great rule!" Donna said.
"Ok so my turn?" Ken asked. "I'm going to add conditions to two of Alyssa's rules."
"You don't have to do that." Alyssa said.
"But I want to." Ken insisted. She dropped it. She figured she could always get him to order her if he wanted to anyway.
The other two owners didn't care so they both agreed too.
New Rule: Alyssa Hartley cannot wear clothes unless there is cum somewhere on her body. This rule will be deleted if spend the time between 7am-5pm one day with cum on her face.
New Rule: Alyssa Hartley cannot walk without permission and must crawl everywhere by default. Permission cannot be granted in advance. This rule will be deleted after she has crawled 10000 steps.
Alyssa shrugged, "Whether they get deleted or not is fine," She grinned at look at Ken, "I won't try to get rid of them...unless..."
Ken sighed, "You'll get rid of them both tomorrow. That's an order."
"Yes Master." She said with a wink.
Shannon bit her lip. She wanted to get rid of the rule that made her gay, but she was worried about the condition. She felt like it would make her do stuff with women, and she didn't feel ready for that. The pink hair made her feel silly, but it was just hair colour. The piercings...well she REALLY didn't want to get her nipples pierced. Except what would the rulebook due to her to remove it? She didn't want to find out. That left the arousal at her own name. Annoying, but not the end of the world.
In the end she decided that she didn't want to remove any of those rules.
"I want to a nice dorm like this. Not my crappy dorm. Actually...can I make this a 4 person suite?"
"Veto!" Sierra shouted.
"Huh, why?" Shannon asked.
"I don't need more people ordering me around!" She said.
Shannon was surprised when Alyssa came to help her, "What if they agreed to get rid of your maid rule? I mean, add a condition to it."
"Well, then yeah. I'd agree."
Ken nodded, "Sure. Fine by me."
"Ok, fine." Mira said.
"No no no. What about me and Alyssa? How about a 6 person suite?" Donna asked.
"No," Alyssa said, "That would be too busy. Make it a 3 bedroom but double up the rooms. This was originally a two bed dorm wasn't it?"
"We have a fucking magic book. Why would I want to sleep in the same room as someone else? We're fucking Gods!" Donna cried.
"Ken, don't do it." Alyssa said.
Ken sighed, "Fine. I'll double the rooms only."
Mira gulped, "F-fine. Shannon and I can r-room together."
"Ugh!" Donna complained, "I guess I don't mind living with Sierra."
"Ok how about this then..." Alyssa proposed the change.
"Um, ok. I guess." Shannon said. It wasn't really what she'd had in mind, but she didn't want to get left out of this rulebook. Living with them would help keep her close to the power. And Mira was another 10%er like her and...now that she thought about it...really hot.
Old Rule: Room 213 is a 3 bedroom suite with a living room, kitchenette and full bath. It is the largest and most luxurious dorm on campus. Sierra MacLeod and Donna Okafor are assigned to one room with two Queen beds, Mira Chowdhury and Shannon Young are assigned to one room with two Queen beds and Kenji Whitmore is assigned to the third room with a King bed for the 2024-2025 year. The bathroom has a large tub and separate shower that can both accommodate multiple people easily.
New Rule: Sierra MacLeod is the live-in maid for Duncan Hall Room 213. She is responsible for all cooking, cleaning and laundry within the unit. She must maintain the unit to a standard she believes is acceptable and cook food to the tastes of the other tenants. The other tenants may specify the clothing she is to wear when cooking or cleaning and she must obediently wear it. The other tenants may order her to perform any cleaning or cooking task at any time within the unit. This rule will be deleted at the end of the semester.
"The semester!" Sierra cried, "That's not fair!"
Ken shrugged, "Sorry. I didn't write it. Nothing I can do about it."
"Fuck!"
Ken ignored her, "That just leaves Mira then?"
Mira nodded. She opened her mouth to talk, but couldn't. She grabbed a piece of paper and wrote out her ideas.
Ken read them over, "Sure. I agree."
Sierra picked it up, "Nope. Nope and...nope! Fuck you for making all these things permanent!"
"Come on Sierra, give her a break."
"Fine," Sierra took the pencil and edited Mira's suggestions. "There. I'll agree to that."
"That's kind of harsh." Ken pointed out.
Sierra glared, "I don't care. Take it or leave it."
Mira looked at it, then nodded.
Ken sighed, "Fine. I'll agree too."
Mira grabbed the rulebook and transcribed Sierra's edited rules.
New Rule: Mira Chowdhury will experience a phantom vibrator on her clit 2-5 times per day at random. Each occurrence will last until she orgasms. The vibrator will not activate between 10pm and 6 am. The vibrator will only ever edge her and never make her orgasm on its own.
New Rule: Mira Chowdhury cannot orgasm unless she is being watched or filmed. If she films herself she must send the video to one of her contacts at random.
New Rule: Mira may only orgasm when on her hands and knees or with verbal permission from a man. Permission can't be given ahead of time and she must ask in order to receive permission.
Ken clicked his tongue, "I thought we were going to go easier on each other."
"That's before she made these rules permanent!" Sierra complained. She took the rulebook and pointed at a rule, "I want to edit these two rules. Mira you owe us."
Mira hesitated, but nodded.
Ken agreed to, "Do whatever you want."
New Rule: All students except the SRO must treat the 10% of students with utmost respect at all times.
Old Rule: To reward the top 10% of students academically the University offers several major perks. Access to a high end lounge in the student union, 24/7 access to all buildings on campus and exemption from all disciplinary measures except by the SRO or where cheating can be proven.
Sierra stared down Mira, "There. Bitch." She grinned, "Bitch. That felt great! Ok, well I'm off to edge myself for a fucking hour....so I can spend all night getting rid of these...things! That's Mira." She stormed out of the room and slammed her door.
Mira quietly wrote something on a piece of paper then slipped away to her room.
Alyssa picked it up, "It just says sorry."
Donna laughed, "Oh Sierra will get over it. As soon as those tits are gone she'll be fine. As for me...I really hate to ask but Ken...give me your dick."
"Uh I'm getting out of here then." Shannon said. She stood up to leave the suite, but the realized she now shared a room with Mira. She hesitated again, then finally went in after her.
Alyssa helped pull Ken's pants down and started stroking it, "Well you want it?" She asked Donna.
Donna rolled her eyes, "Please. I just want my thumb out of my mouth." She knelt down and without fanfare put her mouth over his cock. She clearly just intended to sit there and let time pass by. Since his cock was always erect she didn't have to worry about him going soft on her.
"Oh no, you can't just tease him like that." Alyssa grabbed Donna's hair and pushed her down, then pulled back. Donna complained but Alyssa ignored her and started 'helping' her blow Ken.
Ken thought about intervening, but he realized that Donna could easily overpower Alyssa's grip if she wanted to. He didn't mind this one bit, so he decided to let it slide.
Eventually he came, and he was grateful once again for his cum rule because Donna greedily ate it all up. She didn't stop though, not enough time had passed.
Alyssa decided one blowjob was enough and left Donna alone. She sat on the couch beside Ken and cuddled up with him, pressing her tits into him not at all by accident, "What do you think Donna wants to listen to? Hell's Kitchen or Love is Blind?"
Donna pulled back, "Love is-"
Alyssa smirked and pushed Donna's head back down. Donna barely resisted.
"You're right Ken, Hell's Kitchen."
Ken laughed, "You are pretty wicked aren't you?"
"Are you going to punish me?" She asked.
"Yes. Crawl around the dorm until Donna's done. Don't stop moving until she stops."
"Ooooh. I love it." Alyssa said as her body moved to obey.
Ken turned on the tv and started watching, just waiting for Donna to 'earn' enough time on his dick.
Link to all rules:
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1MJZmTJV1sjpQHfxM_5cSnWIG1zOWLPxBADnBPfzJdLA/edit?usp=sharing
Rules changed this chapter. Changes in bold.
New Rule: All existing and future rules within the Rulebook are permanent fixtures and cannot be deleted, erased, or nullified. They may only be deleted by the rulebook based on conditions laid out within the rule such as time or challenge limitations. They may only be edited, either by owner consensus or the right to edit won through a game but the original intent of the rule must remain intact and the rulebook shall prevent any edit which fails to maintain that intent. Rules without conditions to delete may be edited to have such condition by writing 'condition' at the end of the existing rule. The rulebook will pick the condition or time limit based on how difficult the owners find the rule to adopt to.
New Rule: For the next 24 hours Donna Okafor must always have something in her mouth when she’s not talking, the more phallic the object, the more comfortable she will feel. Every minute with a real penis in her mouth will reduce this time by 10 minutes.
New Rule: Mira Chowdhury can't speak unless she has given a blowjob and swallowed semen within 12 hours.
New Rule: Sierra MacLeod may not masturbate. This rule will be deleted after Sierra has edged for a 1 hour continuously. Any pause will reset the timer.
New Rule: Alyssa Hartley cannot wear clothes unless there is cum somewhere on her body. This rule will be deleted if spend the time between 7am-5pm one day with cum on her face.
New Rule: Alyssa Hartley cannot walk without permission and must crawl everywhere by default. Permission cannot be granted in advance. This rule will be deleted after she has crawled 10000 steps.
Old Rule: Room 213 is a 3 bedroom suite with a living room, kitchenette and full bath. It is the largest and most luxurious dorm on campus. Sierra MacLeod and Donna Okafor are assigned to one room with two Queen beds, Mira Chowdhury and Shannon Young are assigned to one room with two Queen beds and Kenji Whitmore is assigned to the third room with a King bed for the 2024-2025 year. The bathroom has a large tub and separate shower that can both accommodate multiple people easily.
New Rule: Mira Chowdhury will experience a phantom vibrator on her clit 2-5 times per day at random. Each occurrence will last until she orgasms. The vibrator will not activate between 10pm and 6 am. The vibrator will only ever edge her and never make her orgasm on its own.
New Rule: Mira Chowdhury cannot orgasm unless she is being watched or filmed. If she films herself she must send the video to one of her contacts at random.
New Rule: Mira may only orgasm when on her hands and knees or with verbal permission from a man. Permission can't be given ahead of time and she must ask in order to receive permission.
New Rule: All students except the SRO must treat the 10% of students with utmost respect at all times.
Old Rule: To reward the top 10% of students academically the University offers several major perks. Access to a high end lounge in the student union, 24/7 access to all buildings on campus and exemption from all disciplinary measures except by the SRO or where cheating can be proven.
Old Rule: Through a combination of vaccination, education and treatment all STIs were slowly eradicated from 1990 to the present within Canada, and to a lesser degree outside of Canada. This rule will be implemented in such a way to cause the minimum disruption to the present day.__
New Rule: Sierra MacLeod is the live-in maid for Duncan Hall Room 213. She is responsible for all cooking, cleaning and laundry within the unit. She must maintain the unit to a standard she believes is acceptable and cook food to the tastes of the other tenants. The other tenants may specify the clothing she is to wear when cooking or cleaning and she must obediently wear it. The other tenants may order her to perform any cleaning or cooking task at any time within the unit. This rule will be deleted at the end of the semester.
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The Rulebook
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