Rules of Nature

I already discussed in NAKED WRESTLING! what went wrong with Hard Candy. Like I said before, Susan had the most amount of depth. But mostly, I'm just gonna rant about the stuff I haven't already ranted about.

Cutie himself will also get more focus. The thing about Cutie is that despite showing some promise at the start, Cutie turns out to be boring as all hell. There's not much to say about the guy. He didn't have an actual character. He could have been taken out the story without it affecting anything. He also represents the huge bait and switch the story I mentioned before. So he's gonna be more proactive in my story.

Marcie will be a villain in this branch since Marcie did have the makings of a great villain that is meant to be hated. The thing is I couldn't decide whether to do a branch where Marcie remains a good character or do one where she gets what's coming to her so I split the different by doing two different paths.

Wow, that rant was a lot shorter. Well anyways, here is my branch about Susan.

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How could Marcie do this? Let power go to my head? Was she completely ignorant of everything I suffered. Marcie had no right to do this. I would never have done this to her.

Gina just smirked at me. I punched her in the face, knocking her to the ground.

"What do you you're--" I kicked Gina in the face.

"Fuck you, Gina!"

Rules of Nature

Gina grabbed my leg but I kicked off her me. Gina punched me in the face. I punched her in the face. Gina grabbed my hair and started spinning me around. I used the momentum to hit her in the throat with my knee. Gina went flying into the wall. I hit the ground just as hard.

We both got up at the same time and ran at each other. We both punched so hard that the other went flying.

We both landed on our hands and knees and quickly got up.

"Marcie had no right to betray me for the likes of you!" I said.

I could not understanding Marcie's reasoning at all. Gina was a monster.

We both approached one another. Gina threw the first punch but I dodged and punched her back. I could tell that Gina had never been in a fight before.

She tried to tackle me. I grabbed her head flipped her up. She wrapped her legs round my neck and started punching me on the head while I started punched her ass. After enough ass punching, Gina let go and fell down. I took the opportunity to kick her. Gina rolled on the ground. I got on top of her. I kept her punching in the face. Gina spat out blood.

"Please, no more!" she cried.

I decided to let up, "You're not the queen anymore. I am, understand?" Gina nodded, "I said do you understand?"

"Yes, Queen Susan!" Gina cried out.

I got up and held out my hand to help Gina up. Gina instead grabbed it and pulled me down, punching me in the throat. I fell to the ground and Gina started kicking me.

"You stupid bitch! You think you can-!" Gina ranted before I blocked one of her kicks and pulled her to the ground.

I took the opportunity to punch her in the clit. Gina screamed in pain. I under kept punching.

"You just fucked up! I gave you a chance to surrender with some dignity but you fucked up!" I said, "Take off your clothes!"