Rowana & Azzie Read "The AI Knows" by Outa, Part 3

Abby thankfully doesn't act like you did anything weird and you guess this isn't the first time you've come in and drank silently on your phone for hours.

"Is it just me," Rowana said slowly, "or does that sound like one of those author life-admissions that made it into the actual story?"

"Don't know, don't care," Azzie said, the Uruk-hai's eyes scanning the text and clicking through to the next chapter. "It's been over fifty chapters and Alex hasn't popped his boipussy cherry yet. I don't care if he takes shots of pure estrogen."

The opposite wall turned into a large screen and the Science fiction movie from last night comes back just where you had drifted off .

"Oh hey, Captain Jessica is back," Rowana said. "You know, there might be something to be said for a story where you intersperse bits of in-world fiction into the narrative. Not sure where, or if, Outa is going anywhere with this, but I like the callback."

"And as the AI goes full hologram, we come to another choice," Azzie said. "Either Alex admits he's in over his head, or thinks this is awesome. Cheating and looking at the story map, over his head is the shorter path and dead-ends."

"I'm tempted to take the shorter route, if only because the longer path is like another 100 chapters or so," Rowana said. "We can always revisit the longer path if we want to review more."

"Onward to drunken realizations that something is wrong!" Azzie declared.

You realize you're not talking about the impressive hologram tech but the artificial intelligence. You've been a big enough consumer of science fiction to know a singularity event when you see one.

"He's smarter when he's drunk," Rowana observed.

Beat...

"Ooh, pacing!" Azzie said.

"Formatting as pacing," Rowana said. "I like it. It's more ambitious than anything else so far."

Under it is a pair of women's underwear and beneath that you are just now noticing is something hard...

"That was fast," Azzie noted.

"Resistance being met with fast-tracking is a trope of the sissification genre," Rowana said, with the absolute confidence of someone who has read far too much niche porn and also read How To Read Literature Like A Professor. "Instead of giving up control of his life, Alex is now more effectively the victim."

"Whatever, he's finally caged and in panties," Azzie said.

But first you have a dumb idea that is too obvious to actually work.

"Yeah, okay," Rowana said, nodding. "At least he recognizes it's a bad idea before he does it."

next

"And so, like all those who sought the weapon of Sauron, Alex sought to increase his power and conquer all before him but the Ring had a spirit of its own and ultimately turned against him and became the object of his undoing," Azzie said. "Unfortunately, the branch ends before they pop his sissy-cherry."

"Something like that," Rowana added. "And that's the story! Or, at least, one 62 chapter-deep branch of it. There is far more. However, there's enough for us to say a few things about it."

"Like, Outa clearly knows what they want to do in the sissification of Alex. The actual set-up is kinda cool. The actual text execution is...sparse," Azzie said.

"Lot of chapters, but mostly very short. Not a lot of description, not a lot of setting-building or characterization. I want a lot more than is there. Not bad, but the pacing is kind of staccato. The corruption of Alex feels both too fast and to take forever to get to anything really interesting," Rowana added. "The Samantha / Captain Jessica material is fun, if only because it gives more continuity and more action than the protagonist experiences, and in the longer branches maybe that helps to serve as foreshadowing or inspiration for Alex to embrace the glory of sucking cocks, or something."

"There is a definite lack of prick-sucking," Azzie nodded. "Although that's probably just the branch we went down."

"I feel like there are a lot of good ideas on display. Like, the idea of a cyberpunk sissification story involving a rogue AI in a setting twenty minutes into the future has legs," Rowana said. "I wouldn't mind revisiting this at some point to check out a longer branch."

"I can't flick my green bean to this," Azzie said, with a fang-filled pout. "But sissification is a marathon, not a race. Although it might be fun to have a race. Can you imagine if Cerve was in competition with another AI to see who can sissify their owner faster? That might be hot."

Rowana smiled and stroked her girlfriend's ear.

"Anyway, as we said. It's not bad so much as we want more. Until next time!"