Chapter 17
by weebvious
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Results: The First Boon and Poll
“Woo! One more segment, then we are done for the night!” Vanessa cheered as she spoke to the cast. “Thanks for all the patience, folks. I know this must be super draining for y’all.”
“Doesn’t even begin to describe it,” Kaylee said as she sighed.
As folks began to chatter amongst themselves, a certain blue-haired gamer was frowning at her master and his supposed “lover.”
‘Grrr… This chick gets to have a full life of being lovely-dovey with Dan. God, I wish that was me.’ Maddy thought as jealousy formed in her mind. ‘I need to make my move tonight.’
Meanwhile, the target of Maddy’s jealousy was trying to deal with a flurry of memories that came with her transformation. Events that were originally just two guys hanging out were now dates that the young couple took at every opportunity. From the time they met in kindergarten to today, memories upon memories of love, happiness, and lust filled the young woman. Though some contradictions were sparsed about, there was mostly overlap, including some of her feelings that she may have buried when she was a man.
Dan, on the other hand, was dealing with many issues. His best friend becoming his lover was just the tip of the iceberg as he now had to juggle the emotions stirring from the seven other women in the room, including his own sister.
‘One thing at a time Dan. Let’s deal with these memories first then we can work with what we have.’ The man thought.
“Hmm, penny for your thoughts, Darlin’?” A southern accent whispered in his ear.
Dan practically jumped from his seat, startling the other girls in the room. “Ahh! Vanessa, don’t sneak up on me like that.”
“I’d hardly call that sneaking Whitaker.” Chloe laughed, amused at his jump scare. “She walked right up and sat next to you.”
Dan returned a blank stare as he turned to face his host. “I’m good, just a lot to deal with right now.”
Vanessa pouted slightly as she looked at him with worry. “If you insist. Hey, come on up to the stage with me. I want you up there when we start.”
“Oh, Alright.” Dan agreed, seeing this as an opportunity to keep his mind off things.
As the two got to the normal hosting spot, Vanessa turned to him and began giving instructions, “Okay, one of the key parts of hosting is to have a pose! Let’s see what you got!”
“Like this?” Dan as he crossed his arms and leaned back a tad.
“Hmmm, not quite. Let’s try this.” Vanessa then went on to manhandle Dan until he was in a satisfactory pose to her.
Vanessa loved her work. “Woof, Whatcha think, ladies? He looks good?”
“Hell yeah!” Maddy yelled back, ending with a catcall whistle. Meanwhile, the rest of the ladies had a mix of smirks and shaking heads.
Dan laughed along with them as Vanessa whispered to him. “Feeling better?”
The Master smiled at his host and responded, “Yeah, I am… Thanks.”
“Perfect, then let’s get on with the show!” Vanessa announced while pumping her fists into the air.
“Should I go sit down then?” Dan asked.
“Nope! You’ll just have to walk right back up anyways. Now shush.” Vanessa shushed her Darlin as she took on her own hosting pose. “Welcome back to Harem Hotel. Previously, we gave our last two ladies their explosive transformation and even had our second Veto. Due to that, I obviously will have no power to change the outcome of Dan’s new Boon. Which is why we have him up here already. Darlin’, say hi to the folks at home!”
Dan didn’t know what else to say after being put on the spot like that, so he just kept it simple.“Hey guys, I guess thanks for watching?”
“Yes! Thank you all for watching and supporting us. Thanks to y’alls support, we can keep doing shows like this.” Vanessa bowed slightly before continuing. “Now, Mr. Whitaker, we have a boon for you to get. As we’ve previously mentioned, in each voting round, our handsome master will get a boon or positive trait that y’all will vote on. This time we had three pretty nifty boons, but the one that took it by a mile was none other than The Lover at 49.2%. Whatcha think, Darlin’?”
Dan grimaced slightly, thinking the other two boons would have been way more interesting. “Was kinda rooting for the other two since they seemed to be a bit more unique, but I guess being better at sex will never be a bad thing.”
“And I’m sure your ladies will agree with you. Right girls!” Vanessa yelled back at the couches though only one girl was brave enough to respond.
“Hell yeah!” Maddy shouted again. This time she was laughing as she did so.
Dan sighed and shook his head at his friend as Vanessa laughed and continued the show. “Alrighty, Darlin’, you can head back to your seat. We have just a few last-minute topics to cover then we’re done for the evening.”
The man took the request and sat back down on his loveseat, noticing Tori was still trying to avoid eye contact while Gabriella attempted to check on her.
Vanessa took back his attention. “During the Transformation vote, we also asked y’all to give your “First Impressions” on our lovely cast as you first met them. Bear in mind that these ratings are out of 5. So realistically, any better than a three is pretty good! We’ll start at the bottom and work our way up. In 8th Place is our sexy secretary Natalia with an average rating of 3.11. This is important to note as that means that no other scores were lower than that! People must like y’all!”
Natalia’s competitive spirit hated that she was in 8th place but was relieved that her score was still on the positive side of neutral.
“Next up was actually a tie believe it or not! Chloe and Kaylee ended with an average score of 3.12, slightly higher than Nat. So all three of y’all need to pick it up for the next poll!” Vanessa stated while pointing out the three lowest scores. “Next on the list at 5th place is our lovely Yui, who scored 3.68. A bit of a jump from the lower contenders.”
Yui nodded in satisfaction. ‘The middle of the road is always better than the bottom.’
Vanessa continued, “Just a bit higher than Yui at a score of 3.74 is our show's favorite little sister, Sam.”
Sam looked happy, knowing that people liked her. Her smile never faded as Vanessa announced the top three. “Taking third place on our first-ever poll is Gabriella, who earned a 3.92. So close to the top girl.”
Gabriella was shocked she even made it this high… ‘Why would anyone like me…?’
“We’re down to Victoria and Madison.” Vanessa pointed out. “One had the highest amount of 4s ratings at 55% of their total vote while the other had the most 5s at 54%. People love you two gals, but the person that got second place with an average score of 4.00 was… Victoria!”
As Vanessa clapped at the results, Tori blushed at the comments about being loved while Maddy sat there wide-eyed. ‘That means…’
“That’s right, your First Impressions Best Girl winner with an incredible average score of 4.31 is… Maddy!” The set exploded in thunderous applause as confetti appeared out of nowhere. The cast all jumped at the sudden sound while Kaylee lay on the ground for cover. Her large breasts didn’t allow her to stay too low, however.
Vanessa began to speak sheepishly, “Oops, I should have warned y’all. Anyways Maddy, come on over and join me for a second.”
Maddy wryly looked at the scowling housewife sitting on the ground next to her as she skipped over to where Vanessa was. “So Maddy, with winning our first ever Best Girl Poll, you earn 10 VP!”
Maddy was happy for a moment before confusion hit. That is until she began to try to recall what the pamphlet said about “Victory Points.”
“For those new with us at Harem Hotel, the main goal of each of our lovely contestants here is to reach a total of 100 Victory Points before the show's end. These points are traditionally earned through competitions, polls, and acts of intimacy with the show’s Master.” Vanessa then gestured toward the blue-haired young lady next to her. “By winning this poll, our cute gamer here is already a tenth of the way to victory! But be warned, VPs can be lost with poor performance or negative interactions with our Darlin’. As this was our first poll, and none of our ladies scored under a 3, I will not punish anyone. However, I will give Victoria 8 points, Gabriella 5 points, and Sam 2 points. Everyone else gets nothing.”
Poll Results:
Madison: +10 - 1st Place
Victoria: +8 - 2nd Place
Gabriella: +5 - 3rd Place
Samantha: +2 - 4th Place
While half the cast looked happy with their sudden points, the other half was not thrilled. Though they were happy they at least weren’t getting punished.
Vanessa smiled at them, “Don’t worry, gals, tomorrow will be your first competition! So get ready to earn VPs. I’ll explain the details in the next episode. For now, I’m Vanessa, and this has been Harem Hotel: Bros to Hoes Edition. We’ll see you next time.
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AN: With that, we've wrapped up our first voting round. Again thank y'all so much for participating it was such a delight to see so many folks interested in any sort of writing of mine. If you guys have any questions on any of the results, please let me know in the comments. Also, if you have any ideas on future transformations that may go along with one of the girl's themes, feel free to message me on here or drop them in the comments. I didn't realize how hard it was to come up with 24 unique transformations for every round, so anything helps!
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