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Chapter 3
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Rachel's photo
Rachel sat at her computer, having just uploaded a tasteful nude picture of her to the forum she was on in an attempt to improve her self-esteem about her body. Now, Rachel wasn't chubby or overweight, of course; The exact opposite, really. Rachel was, for lack of a better term, buff.
But perhaps a little too buff. To the point where she was worried that she didn't look feminine enough for a woman in her mid-twenties.
Refreshing the page, Rachel's eyes widened as she noticed her post had received over thirty reaction comments from other members. She clicked on the post with a nervous and hopeful smile on her face...
A smile that instantly vanished after she read the comments. They were all from women, but what they said:
"Twit-twoo! I know what I want for my birthday this year!"
"At the risk of sounding vulgar, I need to go change my panties."
"Day-um, Dude! Which gym do you go to?! I can grate cheese on those abs!"
"Hubba hubba!"
"Sweetie, you have nothing to be ashamed of with a body like that. And if it's because of the size of your little friend? Well, no real woman actually cares about how big it is. :)"
Rachel could only blink and stare as she gaped and read the constantly growing comments. This did not help her at all...
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